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issue36 唉每篇都要写很久怎么办呢?恳请帮忙改一下吧:) [复制链接]

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发表于 2005-7-24 18:00:59 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
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Whether individuals' greatness can be recognized by the contemporaries or can only be praised in retrospect, there is no exclusive answer to this question. Answers are different in what the judgment is based on, on objective proofs or subjective feelings. In some areas, like art, judgment on them is mainly subjective feelings; thus judgments on these areas mainly depend on how well the people understand and accept the works. In other areas, like science, greatness depend on whether technological advances and knowledge can provide the objectively proofs. When it comes to the areas like technology, practical use become the main reason for the greatness.

In the realms of art, architecture, literature, etc., greatness is decided by people who accept them and appreciate them. Acceptance and appreciation depend on subjective value and feelings where there is no general norm. The work may be accepted by the public once it is accomplished, then the greatness of it can be decided by the contemporaries. Actually most of the works belong to this kind of greatness. Shakespeare’s operas, symphonies by Beethoven, and so on, are lucky enough to be popular once they were finished. Nevertheless, there are also some masterpieces which are recognized after them. Van Gogh had sold out only one of his works in all his life. The Crystal Place in London, famous for its significance in symbolizing the beginning of industrialization of architecture, was laughed at first by the public when it was built up. These works were not accepted by their contemporaries, but they were applauded by people who live after their creators and who accept new ideas in these realms.

When it comes to scientific field, the greatness are often judged by people who live after them. Because most of the hypothesizes are hard to be proved with the contemporary limited knowledge and the restriction of technology. More than 300 years after Copernicus's death can people prove his theory that the earth and other planets revolve around the sun. Only until recently can scientists laboratorially prove Darwinism through the greatly similar genome of human and ape. With out development of knowledge and technology scientific, hypothesis can hardly be proved thus can not be identified by the contemporaries.

In some areas, like technology, people identify the greatness according to their significance to practical use. With the increasingly rapid technological advancements, it takes shorter and shorter time for new ideas and technology to turn into practical use. In the 19th century, it took nearly 300 years from the invention of electricity to its practical use and nearly 30 years from the birth of the theory of electromagnetic wave to the wireless communication; In the 20th century, it took only 7 years from generating to application of the integrate circuit, and it is only more or less 1 year for the laser light. Greatness of areas as technology may nowadays tend to be decided by their contemporaries due to the development of technology.
In conclusion, the time for deciding the greatness is different in different areas. Fields, whose judgment are based on subjective feelings mainly depend on the acceptance and fashion of the period. While in the fields of science, it may take much longer time for people to prove it thus the judgment are mostly made by the people after them. Greatness of fields of technology as regards, with the increasingly rapid development of technology, tends to be decided by the contemp

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发表于 2005-7-24 19:14:04 |只看该作者
刚开始写都是很慢的,强迫自己限时写几篇,即使写不完也要结束,慢慢速度就上来了

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发表于 2005-7-24 19:26:25 |只看该作者
可是一限时我就紧张,一紧张就没思路。。。。。而且,我习惯慢慢拖着上网查查资料,一小段一小段地写。。。结果现在是。。。唉

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发表于 2005-7-24 20:54:52 |只看该作者
解决的方法是每一篇都限时!为有此法

其实多数人在AW真正考试的时候写出的文章比平时都差了很多的。
当时能用上的句子和例子。都是平时能背得出来的,用的最熟的
其实很多以前的文章,写过提纲了
也未必能够记得

忙得什么都想不起来了
我考过3次4级,3次6级,4次托福,2次GRE。
我发觉这个世界牛人太多,做什么事都很难,没办法,从最土的人做起吧。

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RE: issue36 唉每篇都要写很久怎么办呢?恳请帮忙改一下吧:) [修改]

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issue36 唉每篇都要写很久怎么办呢?恳请帮忙改一下吧:)
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