[820互助] 指向大海, genie05：legendhfwang, GITER, sophyw

genie05UID: 30358

不错，水够了。................闪人。................
困了。.............

genie05UID: 30358

Originally posted by 指向大海 at 2005-8-9 14:45
难得，如果Giter能从图书馆敢回来我们人就齐全了啊
BL～～亏你说的出～～

你还真了解他么~~
说吧,你是不是暗恋他好久了~~~;P
我为啥说不出来~

指向大海UID: 158737

嘿，论小还有牧歌呢，你怎么就找我欺负？真是的～～～～～

指向大海UID: 158737

我FT～～偶和Giter清清白白的，你！

genie05UID: 30358

Originally posted by 指向大海 at 2005-8-9 14:46
嘿，论小还有牧歌呢，你怎么就找我欺负？真是的～～～～～

你可爱啊~~;P

genie05UID: 30358

Originally posted by 指向大海 at 2005-8-9 14:47
我FT～～偶和Giter清清白白的，你！

:lol:lol天知地知,我知你不知~~
这年头，八卦就这样的哈~

指向大海UID: 158737

恩，要吵你的绯闻可比我多了去了～～

legendhfwangUID: 191674

首先强烈的向大家道歉，由于一时疏忽，写错了题号，造成了重大的损失，对不起大家。

其实我并不是把自己所有的错的题都贴出来的，其他的一些自己消化了，也减少斑竹的负担。海兄不是一直鼓励自己考630吗？怎么到我这里就对我降低要求，考620了？呵呵

我感觉托福的语法和国内不同，国内的语法学不好，托福的语法不一定不好。如果高考的时候像托福这样出题就好了，我也不至于考成那样，语法错了基本一半！

其实我最愁的还是TWE，自从知道GRE分数我就一夜之间愁白了头啊，还有最后十几天了，还请大家多多提携，帮俺度过难关，一旦俺写了东西发上来，大家就把俺当成仇人狂拍。

legendhfwangUID: 191674

关于TWE再交流一下：
首先多谢海兄对语法题的回答以及文章的板砖。下面是我的一点问题：
1.关于字数，多少够？在作文的时候我总是有意把总字数压在300到320之间，感觉写多了，写不完，上一个写了360，基本上属于意外。不知道300到320够吗？
2.关于用词，看来是不要用太深的词，是吗？其实我的红宝背的并不好，海兄也知道的，所以不知道你是看我的那些词用的比较深？其实我真想用深词显摆显摆，但很多词都不记得了。呵呵
3.以万分崇敬的心情看了GITER的作文，于是狂骂自己，悲哀，真是悲哀，都是8T，你咋就和人家差那么大哩？但有一点，似乎GITER的文章比较的更像GRE作文。
4.最重要的，因为很多TWE文章和提纲我都是这么写的，就是说，在第二段首先用admittedly让步，然后下边一段however转折，这样不用费劲想理由，还可以把以前GRE的一些东西用上，后面两段支持的话也不用费力写的太长，不知道大家是怎么看的？
5.海兄，你说我段落之间衔接不好，我也有同感，但大家也知道我苯，能不能给支个招？

legendhfwangUID: 191674

68. Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Is it necessary to assign homework? Or, on other word, what does homework do? I agree insofar as impertinent homework has a chilly effect on student. Otherwise, if handled properly, assigning homework play a positive role in daily study.

Admittedly too much homework does exert negative influence. As a saying said: All work and no play make jack a dull boy. Forced by this heavy burden students must contract the time to play with peers to communicate with parents and lessen or even eliminate their favorite activities, all of which do more harm than good to students’ development.

Aside from the forgoing provisos, however, appropriate homework has advantages in more respects.

First and foremost, it is through homework that students can resist the temptation which would have distracted them from learning. We are living in a society, which is replete with enticement. Studnets are also not exceptional. They watch trashy program, dance until midnight or go shopping all day without knowing what they behave impairs their studying. Homework, in some means, help students to learn. Considering homework that have to finished students would turn off the TV set or take a rain check for dancing and shopping, and concentrate on their study, which consequently improve their academic performance.

Another factor deserving some attention is that some assignment, running contrary to the traditional one, provides student a platform in which they can develop comprehensively. A striking example is the teamwork, the cooperation with partners. Today it is widely used as assignment which in turn foster the sense of debate and collaboration. In addition, by referring to many books requested for homework, students are informed of various knowledge about certain courses. In short, funny and scientific, today’s homework contribute broader perspectives to students.

In a work, I concede that overloading homework is advantages to students. However, homework, generally speaking, can stimulate students to study. Meanwhile, through some modern teaching methods, homework may better adapt student to future studying and living. Accordingly, on balance, I vote for the homework.

336左右，正好的时间

legendhfwangUID: 191674

忽然发现自从加入这个组以后，水了好多，呵呵

sophywUID: 203712

Originally posted by legendhfwang at 2005-8-9 15:54
忽然发现自从加入这个组以后，水了好多，呵呵

me too
还只有在这儿水

genie05UID: 30358

楼上2位,SORRY,以后不水了~

GITERUID: 138732

人都在吗~~我回来了现在开始灌水~~你们几个一个比一个能耐~~汗

指向大海UID: 158737

有几个你说不好的词我想问下，就是比如insofar as，accordingly, on balance，及admittedly引导的东西这些，我是从老外issue280第一篇上搬的，还有几个连接词是我修改的时候故意加的，似乎看作文书上说中国人写东西比较不注意连接。另外，在文章中可以用了各种语法结构比如强调句、排比句、比喻、各种从句有的时候牺牲整体连贯，不知道这是否值得。按说一般情况下受到批评我应当恭敬听着才对，嘿，不过现在确实有点急，不要介意

先把你的PM回答一下，写文章是厚积薄发的，我以前也是看了一篇好的范文，就想全般，（我现在还有这个毛病，看到好的PS,还想全搬呢）所以不要跟着一篇文章来用词。还有你那些句式，用少量的就好了，不要牺牲整体连贯



作文字数，打，写过了GRE作文应该知道不是主要的，要按字数，俺的GRE作文岂不是知道4。5？300以上不影响得6分了

太深的词，等会我找几个

Giter的文章看的很顺畅，但也有要改进的地方，我干脆把你们两各打50大板

让步是必要的时候用，不要把判卷老师绕糊涂了才是。蒙蒙的追星剑你看过么？其实作文还是写，在某种情况下A好，在某种情况下B好，这样子比较好，当然了，具体题目几题分析

作文等会改