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发表于 2001-11-24 09:55:27 |显示全部楼层
哭穷信一般应该写给你申请的系的招生委员会主任。如果写给研 究生院这个官僚机构,一般没什么效果。毕竟他们每天都会收到大量的申请, 以及从中国其他地方来的数以千计的哭穷,他们不会在乎你的这封信的。


Dear Sir or Madam,


I have asked ETS to send my original GRE(XXXX)&TOEFL(XXX) to your departement, please use the photocopies in case the original ones may not arrive in time.


I did not enclose application fee in my package because I am really poor and the fee is much more than my monthly income while I have to support by myself.However, it doesn't mean that I will defer or waive the fee.Actually, I am trying all my best to collect money.Although collecting money will be really hard and time-comsuming,I will send the money as soon as I can!

It is well known that your graduate program is highly competitive and reviewing files will cost you much time.In order to save time, I beg you please review my application materials firstly.
Please do keep in mind that i am applying for your program with all of my energy and with extremely serious attitude.

Yours sincerely,


XXX

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To whom it may concern:

I am very sorry to inform you that I presently could not afford the high application fee that you demanded because of the following reasons:

1.The high foreign exchange rate,US$=RMB8.7.

2.My relatively low monthly income,about RMB 400 yuan and i have to maintain the basic living by myself alone.

3.The strict limitation in China to exchange foreign currency,at least in the near future.

By now i have got relatively high score in Toefl(XXX),GMAT(XXX) and GRE test(XXXX),I sincerely hope you can consider my specific situation and review my application to the enrollment of fall,2000.In the meantime,I will try any means to collect the application fee and forward the official GRE,Toefl or GMAT scores from ETS.

Please email me at xxx@XXXXX if the application fee deferment is impossible at all.

I certify that all supporting documents I sent you are true and complete and am aware that any falsification will be sufficient for denial of my admission.

Again, thank you very much for your kind support!

Sincerely yours,

XXXX

Date:

 

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发表于 2001-12-21 17:10:44 |显示全部楼层

我的哭穷信(略有改动) [转载自SMTH]

发信人: qyt (小猫//越打击越坚强//专职秘书), 信区: AdvancedEdu
标  题: 我的哭穷信(略有改动)
发信站: BBS 水木清华站 (Wed Dec 19 21:57:34 2001)
  
以感谢飞跃上所有帮助我过的朋友。
Application Fee Waive Request
I am so sorry that I have not the capability to pay the application fee in r
ecent 4 months.
I am now a graduate in Tsinghua University. I haven't monthly income when I
was an undergraduate in the Department of Electrical Engineering. So I did n
ot have any deposit when I was admitted into Tsinghua graduate school. Thoug
h I get the fellowship from Tsinghua and the research assistantship from our
department, my monthly income is no more than $38. The application fee is r
eally a financial burden to me. Moreover, my home is in the hinterland of Ch
ina, my mother has been retired and my fathers' yearly income is only $800-$
900, and he will retire early next year. 。。。。。。。Every month we have
to squeeze some
money out of our small quantity of stipend to pay our rent. So I cannot acc
ept any money from my family.
However, to study in an esteemed graduate school of USA is the most importan
t thing in my youth. Although I am now in the financial deficit status, I wi
ll try my best to find a part-time job and pay the application fee as soon a

s possible so that I can catch the opportunity of advancing my studies in US
A.
Before I pay the application fee, will you please consider my application? O
r will you pay this fee as a loan untill I arrives as a student?
Please inform me your decision at your earliest convenient at following addr
ess:
Or email me at:
Thank you for your support. Your assistance will be highly appreciated.
  
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                            Love will keep us alive
申请的路上,充满了荆棘;
有时候,也就是为了争那一口气!
我时刻告诉自己:要给那些藐视我的人打击我的人以重创!
                要给那些支持我的人帮助我的人以回报!
所以,虽然前 久 茫,但是,我坚持!
  

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发表于 2001-12-30 04:55:56 |显示全部楼层

俺对刚才那个哭穷信的修改 [还是转载smth]

发信人: asetic (从头再来), 信区: AdvancedEdu
标  题: 俺对刚才那个哭穷信的修改
发信站: BBS 水木清华站 (Sat Dec 29 16:35:51 2001)
  
Dear sir or madam:
  I am very sorry to inform you that I presently can not afford the applicat
ion fee. The reasons can be stated as follow:
1. Currently the exchange rate is very high:
           8.3RMB = $1.00
2. I am a college student and have no resource of income.
3. The strict limitation in our country to obtain foreign currency, at least
in near future.
  I got relatively high scores in TOEFL (xxx), GRE (xxxx).My undergr
aduate GPA belongs to upper 5% of 180 Students of the School of xxx in
Peking University.I sincerely hope you can consider my situation and review
my application.
  I wish that you could understand my embarrasing financial difficulty and c
onsider my application.If I stand a good chance of being admitted and awarde
d financial support, I will immediately pay the application fee. I am sorry
that I have to make such a mean request, but I really do not have so much mo
ney to pay the application fee.
Your kind considerations are highly appreciated.

  
Best regards.
  


【在amorz的大作中提到:】
:发信人: rejoicer (沙漠绿洲), 信区: AdvancedEdu
:标  题: 哭穷信
:发信站: BBS 水木清华站 (Sat Dec 29 16:10:41 2001)
:  
:声明,不是我写的:P
:  
:  
:~
:I am very sorry to inform ...

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发表于 2003-4-11 22:50:54 |显示全部楼层

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各位大虾,我收到新泽西的RUTGER的录取信,但是没有OFFER,从信里的口气看还有希望争取一下,请问要给学校发申诉的话应该怎样写比较好啊?另外,随录取信一起寄来的资金担保表该怎么填?

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Taurus金牛座 荣誉版主

发表于 2003-4-13 16:42:47 |显示全部楼层
直接向教授苦穷,看看精华区的模版。资金担保我还没有填,我找不到那么多钱啊,呜呜呜。。。
我的苦穷信:
Dear Dr. xxx,

Thank you for your letter informing me about my situation. As you know, in order to study in your department and meet no problem in getting the visa, I have to get some form of financial assistance. This is very important to me. As stated in my application, I need an assistantship for an income to finance my education at your University. If I am offered financial support, I shall arrive in xxx on or about August 25.

I also look forward to work with you. I know that a successful graduate education is vital for a young student to become a mature researcher, so that it would be a great honor to me if I can study under your instruction in the next few years.

Could you tell me if I have a chance to apply for a TA position because I think the teaching experience is my forte. I have taught undergraduate "xxx", and my communication skills is quite well. In my work, I found teaching is a great pleasure and it builds up my confidence. Because of this, I would apply for a TA. I think the work in your department will be more challenging and inviting.

Best,
爱人如己

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