Issue150 电脑和旅游 模考的第一篇呵呵：）

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Issue150  第1篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：45分24秒     582 words
从2005年7月12日9时57分到2005年7月12日10时45分
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Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.------正文------
正文提纲：
1 电脑在get information方面的局限性
2 旅游不光是为了get information
3 平衡观点 电脑确实为我们的生活提供了便利
赶时间 语言就差了好多 大家帮我提提意见:)

   As the development of the computer science and inter-net technology, people can easily find any information he or she wants. Someone may claim that since we can get familiar with anywhere we want to visit, tourism may get unnecessary and thus obsolete.  In my point of view, although the computer makes our life more and more convenient, however, it will never be boring or obsolete for a person to go for a journey.

   Firstly, it is necessary to see what the recent television and worldwide computers can provide for us. It is true that different kinds of information about any places of great of interest can be easily got after a short time searching on the inter-net. However, there are distinctive limitation exists in using computer to search information. The contents of such information are no more than some images, video files, sound files or some text perception. Could such things be enough for a person to get familiar with a place? The answer may be uncertain, if it is not "No". For example, the limitation of the screen will prevent an individual to get a impressive view of the magnificent mountains or buildings. When standing personally near a building, which is high enough to touch the sky, the kind of feeling may be surprised and excited, yet such feeling can hardly be experienced by looking at the images or the numbers indicating the height of the building. People used to describe the wide ocean as "stretching as far as eyes can see", but if tourism is once taken place of by computer, the description may be changed to "stretching as far as the boundaries of the 20-inch computer screen".

      Moreover, there are far more enjoyment besides seeing and hearing, which can be experienced by tourism. When a person goes to Hawaii, it is not much possible that he or she just want to see the blue ocean and the golden beach. People go to Hawaii more possibly for its sun bathing or sea swimming. Unfortunately, neither of such experience can be enjoyed in the front of a single computer or a television. People who love romance a lot may long to Paris. However, if it is not to be personally walking along the Seine River, and trying the coffee in the sidewalk cafe, it will be impossible to feel the true beauty of the "Romantic City". Besides, tourism is a kind of interesting activities related to outdoor sports. Many people are interested in adventurous movements such as mountain climbing, snow skating and so on. It is inherent in human nature to feel boring when staying in the same place for a long time. But the television and computer, no matter how advanced they are, can never satisfy such requirements of human beings.

     Before I come to my conclusion, it is necessary for me to point out the convenience that is brought by the advanced computer technology. Now, it takes no more than five minutes to searching for overall information of wherever that is worth visiting. Thus the computers can help to make a decision about where to go, and suggestion for the preparation before setting off. Besides, it is possible to book a suitable restaurant or a hotel in advance on inter-net now. The use of television and computers is to make our journey more comfortable and more convenient.

     In sum, no matter how advanced the computer science and inter-net technology become, the interesting activities such as tourism will never get out of date.

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As the development of the computer science and inter-net technology, people can easily find any information he or she wants. (前面是people,后面是he/she,这个可能有些问题吧。people改成one比较保险。最好再查查语法书。) Someone may (觉得改成the speaker claims that好些。) claim that since we can get familiar with anywhere we want to visit, tourism may get unnecessary and thus obsolete.  In my point of view, although the computer makes our life more and more convenient, however, it will never be boring or obsolete for a person to go for a journey.

   Firstly, it is necessary to see what the recent television and worldwide computers can provide for us. It is true that different kinds of information about any places of great （去掉of） interest can be easily got after a short time searching on the inter-net. However, there are distinctive limitation exists in using computer to search information. （中间有个连接词更好。）The contents of such information are no more than some images, video files, sound files or some text perception. Could such things be enough for a person to get familiar with a place? The answer may be uncertain, if it is not（加上个a） "No". For example, the limitation of the screen will prevent an individual to get a（an） impressive view of the magnificent mountains or buildings. When standing personally near a building, which is high enough to touch the sky, the kind of feeling may be surprised and excited, yet such feeling can hardly be experienced by looking at the images or the numbers indicating the height of the building. People used to describe the wide ocean as "stretching as far as eyes can see", but if tourism is once taken place of by computer, the description may be changed to "stretching as far as the boundaries of the 20-inch computer screen".

      Moreover, there are far more enjoyment besides seeing and hearing, which can be experienced by tourism. When a person goes to Hawaii, it is not much possible that he or she just want to see the blue ocean and the golden beach. People go to Hawaii more possibly for its sun bathing or sea swimming. Unfortunately, neither of such experience can be enjoyed in the front of a single computer or a television. People who love romance a lot may long to Paris. However, if it is not to be personally walking along the Seine River, and trying the coffee in the sidewalk cafe, it will be impossible to feel the true beauty of the "Romantic City". Besides, tourism is a kind of interesting activities related to outdoor sports. Many people are interested in adventurous movements such as mountain climbing, snow skating and so on. It is inherent in human nature to feel boring when staying in the same place for a long time. But the television and computer, no matter how advanced they are, can never satisfy such requirements of human beings.（我觉得这段写的非常精彩！ 我要好好学习学习）
     Before I come to my conclusion, it is necessary for me to point out the convenience that is brought by the advanced computer technology. Now, it takes no more than five minutes to searching for overall information of wherever that is worth visiting. Thus the computers can help to make a decision about where to go, and suggestion for the preparation before setting off. Besides, it is possible to book a suitable restaurant or a hotel in advance on inter-net now. The use of television and computers is to make our journey more comfortable and more convenient. （is to最好能换成别的，比如can）     In sum, no matter how advanced the computer science and inter-net technology become, the interesting activities such as tourism will never get out of date.

总体感觉特别好，内容很充实，尤其能限时写这么好。:)

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谢谢 呵呵:)
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