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发表于 2005-8-18 11:24:46 |只看该作者
In addition, the arguer unfairly assumes that the distress for infants or shyness for teenagers is caused by their mothers' production of melatonin. Although the season happens to be the same as melatonin production, it is just a time problem. There might be some relations, but asserting it is because of melatonin is ridiculous, for other hormones are possible to produce this fact. So the arguer confuses time relation with causal relation, which weakens his or her argument a lot.
先评一下一段你字数少的原因:没有把possible reason 写出来, 错误找出来,在加上你给的可能性,就有力多了
谢谢你,虽然我只想亲吻一片雪花,你却给了我银色的世界。

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