9.15鼎钧机经，我的机考纪实

anitatreeUID: 2103326

我16北京的
还在努力中,不如我们互改吧. 我还没有楼主那么能写,盲打不够
楼主现在在线吗
回复一下

阳宝儿UID: 210820

我也16号考，我们互改吧？

shj80929UID: 198047

好啊，同意互改，互相鼓励吧

shj80929UID: 198047

可以发链接互改

shj80929UID: 198047

Issue38  第2篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：36分36秒     783 words
从2005年8月9日22时10分到2005年8月9日22时36分
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In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books.
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We are living in a scientific society and the technology had made our lives increasingly convenient and comfortable. People always say that learning becomes more and more easily. Therefore, there is no need to learn things by reading books and television had given us the convenient to learn things quickly and rapidly. At the first blush, I think that it is a good advice but after the careful scrutiny, I can hardly agree with the author. The author's contention is right in some way but it is also lop-sided. Watching television can help us to learn things but what is most important is to learn things by reading. Reading and watching can be mutual complement. Thus, it is difficult to say which the best way to learn things is. Therefore, we should never neglect the importance of the reading.

First and foremost, reading can provide us with a better view in perspective the world. When we are reading, it is more likely for us to think more deeply and thoroughly. Considering a fascinating novel, we can never taste the deep feelings that were conveyed by the writer without the deep and all-around consideration which can never be got from the television.

In the second place, book can facilitate us with the latest information. We can always get the first-hand knowledge from reading. In addition, we can also get the experience from reading. All of this can never be got from passive watching. The history books can provide us with the knowledge about our ancestors and this will make us more likely to go on and absorb the experience and knowledge of the forefathers; this will, of course, enable us to make fewer mistakes and avoid the aimless actions.

Reading can also make us relax. Considering the fantastic mood which can be got from reading, nobody can really refuse the lure of reading. In a raining autumn afternoon, you can lie on the soft bed and read a romantic novel. How fascinating and comfortable it will be. All this can never be realized by watching the senseless television. We must admit that reading is a active action and need further thinking and considering. The poem can make us deep and will encourage us when we are faced with the tedious difficulties. People can always find the courage to go on from the inspiring poems. Prose can make us considerate and careful. We can always taste the delicious sound of life from reading prose. Novel is the reflection of the life. We can always sense the shadow of ourselves from the characters in the novel. For instance, when we are read the novel Gone with the wind which was written by Margaret Mitchell, we will always absorb ourselves in the eternal love of the main characters and muse about the American Civil War. When we are reading the novel Titanic, we can never devoid from the selfless love which will give us the tremendous tremble of heart. When we are reading the detective novels, we always can not help worrying for the main characters and thinking about the development of the plots. All these feelings can never be spoken out and can never be felt from the cold television. In this way, I posit that television can never replace books.

On the other hand, I must admit that watching television can help us learn the world rapidly and easily. Television can provide with the image which can make us get the information more easily. But television also has its flaws. Television makes us more passive and therefore less likely to consider things by ourselves. There have been some reports that television can make the kids react slowly after some long time watching. Therefore, if you want to learn something and at the same time, do not fool yourself, the best way is to read something that means. However, television is not full of shortcomings, and we must admit that it has its merits; nevertheless, it is the outcome of the science and technology. Television can provide the information more directly and obliviously. This will help us to differentiate the matters and save our times. Television can also give us the topic for the pastime. In fact, sometimes we read a book because we have seen them in the television; therefore television can inspire our reading desires. This will be a good way to enforce our reading.

In summary, television is the fruit of our society. It had made our lives comfortable and easy. It is also the complement of reading. Reading can make our lives meaningful and thoughtful, therefore, it can never be replaced by anything else, not to mention the television.

shj80929UID: 198047

Argument17  第2篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：26分12秒     647 words
从2005年8月9日22时59分到2005年8月9日23时26分
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The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Walnut Grove town newspaper.
'Walnut Grove's town council has advocated switching from EZ Disposal (which has had the contract for trash collection services in Walnut Grove for the past ten years) to ABC Waste, because EZ recently raised its monthly fee from $2,000 to $2,500 a month, whereas ABC's fee is still $2,000. But the town council is mistaken; we should continue using EZ. EZ collects trash twice a week, while ABC collects only once. Moreover, EZ—which, like ABC, currently has a fleet of 20 trucks—has ordered additional trucks. Finally, EZ provides exceptional service: 80 percent of respondents to last year's town survey agreed that they were 'satisfied' with EZ's performance.'
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The editorial posits that the Walnut Grove town should continue use the EZ to collect trash. The author based his position on the following grounds. (1) EZ collects the trash twice a week, while ABC just collects once a week. (2) EZ has ordered the additional trucks even though it has already had the same number of trucks as the ABC. (3) EZ provides the exceptional service. (4) 80 percent of respondents are satisfied with EZ's performance in last year's town survey. The author still holds the above points even though there are a myriad of evidence that do not hold this position. EZ has raised its money fee, while ABC continue holds the former fee of $2000. Considering the above evidence, I can hardly agree with the author for the plethora of mistakes which had rendered the contentions absolutely ungrounded and unreasonable.

First and foremost, the author believes that the increase of money is not matter to the citizens which is ungrounded. It is highly possible that the increase in the money will make the citizen unable to pay and this will induce the people unwilling to use the EZ.

In the second place, the author thinks that the EZ collects the trash twice a week and therefore will benefit the citizens. Without the materials to prove this position, I can hardly agree with the author. It is probably that the trash collection of once a week is enough for the citizens and there is no need for a further collection. If this is true, the author's contention can never hold the water.

In the third place, the author maintained the EZ had already had the same number of tracks as ABC. EZ will add some tracks. But this will not necessarily benefit the citizens. Maybe the present collection ability is enough to satisfy the citizens and the addition tracks will be just a waste of money and energy. It is also possible that ABC can dispose the trash better than EZ and the present level of tracks have already enough. If this is the case, we must admit that ABC is a better company for us to select.

Furthermore, the author holds that EZ can provide the exceptional service. But this will be a valid thing unless the citizens will get the benefit from the further collection.

Last but not least, the author holds that 80 percent of respondents are satisfied with the EZ's performance in the last year. This is an invalid survey because the respond can not necessarily represent all the people in the town. Even if they can represent all the people in the town, the satisfaction in the last year can not indicate the satisfaction in the future. It is possible that, in the past ten years, the citizens had never contacted with other companies and do not know which company is the best company they want to select. Furthermore, maybe both two companies are not the company that can best dispose the trash in the city. Maybe there are some better companies that they had never contacted.

In summary, the author's sentiments are full of flaws and mistakes which render the editorial inconvincible and unpersuasive. To enrich the sentiments and fulfill the contentions, the author must do the following things. He must prove that the survey is valid and the respondents can represent all the people in the city. He must prove that the citizens will not consider the increase in the money is a big matter and they can afford the increase price. He also must prove that the city needs the addition service and the twice trash collection is a must for the clear city. He must also prove that the addition of tracks is a must for the trash collection. Before the author can provide the above materials that can make the sentiments all-around and sound, I can never assume the author's viewpoint.

shj80929UID: 198047

Issue47  第2篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分17秒     930 words
从2005年8月11日15时29分到2005年8月11日15时0分
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Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect—that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills.
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We are living in a developing society, and there are a myriad of information and technology for us to learn everyday. Some people contained that we do not place enough emphasis on reasoning and cognitive skills, that is, on intellect. At the first glance, it seems reasonable and rational, but after the careful scrutiny, I can hardly agree with the author. I believe that we are placing enough attention on the intellect.

First and foremost, we always put much emphasize on the scientists and the science. They are the representation of today's intellect and information. They are staying in the threshold of the society and lead the society to the rapid developing situation. Considering their contributions, we must and should put enough attention on them. In fact, we have already put a plethora of emphasis on them. Every year, we will encourage the scientists who had made great contributions to the development of the society. For instance, the Nobel Price is the most distinguished award to the scientists. They can not only get money for their work but also get the admiration and rewards from the society. When it comes to the individual country, the same things will happen. In China, the government will give a lot of money to the scientists who had made enormous attribution to the society. The National Award is another example. People always put the admiration to the intelligent scientists. This had shown that we put a lot of emphasis on the intellect. From the country as a whole to the small town in a city, people and manipulates are always concerned about the contributors. They believe that they are the person who had made the society to develop and improve. Nevertheless, we must admit that scientists are really the catalyst to the society. Considering the development in the human history, we can hardly find one development that was not relevant to the scientists and intellects. From the invention of stream engine to the electricity, then, to the internet, every single development is the sweat and blood of the scientists. James Watt invented the stream engine which made our live into a engineer society and facilitate our development. The discovery of electricity had induced human to a bright future and people will never have to live in the endless darkness. When Thomas Edison had died, the United State of America had wanted to shut down electricity for one minute to memorize this distinguished intellect. However, they find that even one minute's cut will make the America collapsed. Therefore, we can see the greatness of the scientists and their roles. When it comes to the internet, it is a uncontroversial matter. Everybody can never neglect the internet and its momentous role. The little kids can manipulate the mouse and the keyboard long before they can hold a pencil. Internet had made our lives convenient and versatile. Considering this, we can never neglect the person who had invented the computer and put in to effects of the internet, that is, Bill Gates. People pay attention to his and sing high of him. How can we say that people never realize the existence of the great scientists?

Furthermore, in the social lives, people still pay attention to the intellect. We can never say that the people do not pay attention to the intellect. If you open your television or computer, you will find that the programs about the politicians and the government are always in the high light. People are concerned about their lives, either public or private. The sex scandal of Bill Clinton had been the hot topic for the people around the world for a long time and this had attracted us from some world serious problems for a long period. If a politician had done a good job or contributed to the development of the society, people will talk about him and sing high of him. We can always remember the Lincoln and the cherry tree, even though it is just a common and small matter. In this respect, people are concerned about the intellect. People have the ability to reason and cognize and they also pay attention to the reasonable and rational things.

In the economy respect, people also realize the importance of the intellects. The clever people who can make a lot of money are always the person who knows how to go on and learn. They attach attention to the reason and cause. For instance, in the stock market, the people who can make a big profit are always the person who had grasped the rules and the regulations of the market. How can they get these knowledge and information? Of course, they get these from the learning and deducting of the intellect.

Last but not least, this emphasis is also important in the literature aspects. The great writers are great because they can absorb the knowledge that had been left by our ancestors; at the same time, they can also ingest the life and elevate the life. For example, the great writer, Margaret Mitchell, wrote the Gone with the wind, a great composition that had been admired for centuries. This book is excellent because it came from the life and reflected the life; thus, it is the relict of life and the intellect. It is full of reason and cognition. It is a deep accomplishment. Thanks to this, people put much emphasis on it.

In summary, intellect is the relict of the society and they make great contribution to the society. We should put and have put enough emphasis on them.

shj80929UID: 198047

Argument12  第2篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：29分46秒     651 words
从2005年8月11日15时41分到2005年8月11日16时29分
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The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Alta Manufacturing.
'During the past year, Alta Manufacturing had thirty percent more on-the-job accidents than nearby Panoply Industries, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than ours. Experts believe that a significant contributing factor in many on-the-job accidents is fatigue and sleep deprivation among workers. Therefore, to reduce the number of on-the-job accidents at Alta and thereby increase productivity, we should shorten each of our three work shifts by one hour so that our employees will get adequate amounts of sleep.'
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The author contains that, to reduce the accident at Alta and at the same time, to improve the productivity, The Alat Manufacturing should reduce the three work shifts by one hour in order to maintain the sleep hours for the worker. The author based the contention on the following points. Because there is one hour short work shift in the nearby Panoply Industries, that company had less on the job accidents. Experts also believes that the fatigue and sleep deprivation among workers are the cause of the on-the-job accidents. At the first glance, the author's points seem reasonable and rational, but after the careful scrutiny, I find that there are a myriad of flaws and mistakes which render the whole sentiments ungrounded and unreliable.

First and foremost, the author holds that the shorter woke shift in the nearby Panoply are the reasons for their low accidents rate. However, the author provides no support for this contention. It is possible that because the Alta Manufacturing has more workers and this contribute to the higher accident rate in the company. It is also possible that the Panoply had less accident rate because they have some protection methods and manipulation regulations which render them less likely to have the accident. Thus, if we can not prove that the sleep time is the only factors for the accident, we can never get the result that the accident was cause by the sleep deprivation. There maybe other possible factors which contribute for this result.

In the second place, the author believes that if we give the workers more hours to sleep they will sleep as a result. But there is no evidence to prove this. It is highly possible that the worker will use the more hours to do their personal things and thus, will not maintain the enough sleep hours. It is also possible that the workers will use the longer relax hours to play, such as, go to the movies, go to the party and so forth. If this is the case, then, the workers will not get enough sleep and even this will affect their sleep. This will result in the fatigue which will make the workers less likely to do the work well in the factory.

Furthermore, the author holds that the experts believe that fatigue and sleep deprivation are a significant factor in the on-the-job accidents. However, the author does not say which aspect the expert is familiar with. It is possible that the expert is not excellent in the biology and psychology respects and this will render the expert's contention ungrounded and unreliable. In addition, there maybe other factors that will contribute to the accident rate except fatigue and sleep deprivation. The effect of fatigue and sleep deprivation is not necessarily the most important factors. If there are other more momentous factors, the author's contention will become unconvincing.

Last but not least, the author believes that the adequate sleep will be the foundation for the increased productivity. However, the author provides no supports to this contention. It is likely that there are other factors which are also related to this condition. We all know the productivity is affected by a compound of factors, including the management, the revenue, the cost, and so forth. Without considering these factors, the author can never get the result.

In summary, the author's sentiments are unconvincing and unreliable. To make the contention more sound and round, the author must prove that the survey is representative. The expert's result is reliable and representative and had included the whole situations. The author must also provide that the worker will use the one more hour to sleep and thus, will induce the increased productivity. The author also must prove that by decreasing the sleepless and fatigue, the productivity will improve as a result. Without the above result, I can never agree with the author.

shj80929UID: 198047

心情，心情，一定要，好好好，无论发生什么事情。坚持坚持，我相信你一定能坚持的。没有问题的。

shj80929UID: 198047

明天就要进京了，God bless me. 给自己一个祝福。许个愿希望可以实现。

shj80929UID: 198047

Argument38  第3篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：28分39秒     703 words
从2005年8月14日8时29分到2005年8月14日8时28分
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The following memo appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public Health Council.
'An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high, people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly, eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds. Since colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school and work, we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid, a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil, as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism.'
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The author contains that, to provent colds and lower absenteeism, they should use lchthaid in daily life. The author based his points on the following positions: (1) In the nearby East Meria, there is a high fish consumption and thus, people there visits the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Therefore, he gets the conclusion that eating fish can prevent colds. (2) Because cold are the reason for the absences from school and work, he recommend the daily use of lchthaid, a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil, as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism. At the first blush, it seems that the author's contention is sound and round, but after a second scrutiny, I can hardly agree with it for its ungrounded and unsubstantiated assumptions and flaws.

First and formost, the author believes that the people in nearby East Meria go to doctor only once or twice per year for treatment of the colds. However, there is no proof that the people who visit the doctor are not necessarily all the people who are ill. It is highly possible that there are a lot of people who are ill but they do not go to the doctor for they believe that this is a small matter. Without the substantiated material to prove that the people who visit the doctor are all the people who are ill, I can not believe that the statistics are reliable and right.

Furthermore, the author holds that the low visit rate for the people in East Meria are due to the assumption of fish. However there is no proof that this is the case and it is probably that these two phenomenon has nothing in relation. If this is the case, then the author's contention that the assumption of fish can provent cold is unwarranted.

In addition, the author holds that cold are the reason for the absenteeism in schools and workplaces. However, there is no material to prove that it is the only cause of the absenteeism; it is possible that there are a myriad of causes for the absenteeism and the cold is just a minor reason for it. If this is the case, then, the author's contention that the cold was the reason for  the abseteeism is unwarranted. Thus, it can never represent the situations.

Even more, the author believes that the lchthaid, a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil can provent cold. However, there is no survey or experiments to prove that this is the case. It is highly possible that this element in the fish oil has nothing to do with the provention  of cold and the other elements in the fish can provent cold. If this is the case, then, the author's method of proventing cold by eating lchthaid can hardly hold the water.

Last but not least, the situation in the East Meria can not necessarily represent the whole situations in the country. It is highly possible that the situation in East Meria is just a exception and can not represent all the situation in the country. If this is the case, we can hardly believe in the author's sentiments.

In summary, the author's sentiments are not warranted and there are a plethora of flaws and mistakes which render the assumptions ungrounded and unsound. To make the contentions more reliable and more convincable, the author must prove that the situation in East Meria can represent all the situation in the whole country. The author also must provide evidence to prove that people go to see the doctor are the majority of people who are ill and thus, can represent all the patients. The author also must prove that cold are the major problem to see the doctor. He also must prove that the Ichthaid in the fish oil is the element that can treat the disease. The author also must prove that eating the lchthaid will have the same effect as eating the fish and thus, this element is useful. Without the above matirals, I can hardly agree with the author that eating the lchthaid will be a new method to treat cold and therefore, is an excellent way to reduce the abseteeism.

shj80929UID: 198047

进军前的最后一篇，给自己high 一个，ok, pretty girl, god bless you a good luck.

shj80929UID: 198047

考试归来了，先报告题目吧，issue 领导的作用，argument 再开一个生态保护区如何。

下面是该谢谢关心和支持我的家人，朋友和同事了吧。太多了，说不完了，还是把大家都记在心里吧，等笔试完毕后一起谢过吧。

最后还是给自己一个奖励，许个心愿，×××××，希望可以实现。

shj80929UID: 198047

好了，下一个阶段要进入笔试复习了。God bless me.

win-szUID: 2113066

看你准备的这么充分，一定能取得好成绩！:victory:
祝福你！