Issue10 Fantasy互改群8.24

flealdaUID: 2118390

这个世界，除了猪，还有谁是快乐着的？


还有我是快乐的~
下线了,谢谢你哦

modeuxUID: 2107416

不用客气，大家互相帮助，共同进步~~~

fancingUID: 208191

5555……我说话那么像兄么~~~

我今天开始把红宝又拿起来背了
发觉词汇还是很重要哦
虽然学的东西偏文，但觉得我学数学还是很厉害的啊
难道逻辑思维不行么，555……

还有前面那个问题，你是同意把让步放后面啊
就是先陈述自己的主要观点，是吗

fancingUID: 208191

看着你准备的很不错啊
在想该不该把作文推几天呢，7号时间好紧啊
argument都好多天没看了

modeuxUID: 2107416

对的，让步放后面。因为高人指出，这符合美国人的思维。
我觉得有道理
咱中国人喜欢先让步，表示一下谦让，然后再开始说自己的
However, (作文写多了~~~)
先说好的，最后不忘再加上反方面的
想来美国人也应该比较喜欢这样

是喔，单词不能丢的，丢几天就会发现忘的比背的还快，sigh~~~

[ Last edited by modeux on 2005-8-24 at 22:19 ]

fancingUID: 208191

嗯~~~蛮有道理的哦：）

先学习学习你总结同义词去，呵呵

modeuxUID: 2107416

to fancing:
昨天犯的错误才发现，把你误称呼为兄了，惭愧不已喔~~~原来是fancing MM~~~

michel_shaoUID: 204704

lz顶一下！本人也是计算机的！

modeuxUID: 2107416

同行啊，共勉之~~~

楼上好像是组里最早考的
预祝成功啊，开个好头~~~

mahuUID: 179508

The author recommends that governments have the responsibility to subsidize the major cities, in which a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated primarily. In my point of view, however, I disagree with the author for the following reasons.

In the first place, many major cities do not have the requirement of financial support for their culture traditions from the governments. Since the culture traditions in these cities have their own attraction and vitality which is sufficient for them to survive and thrive continuously. Taking Beijing Opera or example, as the quintessence of our country, Beijing Opera has well preserved up to the present. Nowadays there are still many people that have great interests in Beijing Opera, not only large numbers of native advocators, but also many foreigners who appreciate the charm of Beijing Opera. It can be predicted that Beijing Opera will keep its prosperity for its intrinsic attraction and value. Therefore, it is not necessary for the governments to subsidize such well-preserved culture traditions. 还可以说说大城市本身经济实力雄厚，不需要资助

In the second place, the governments should put more emphasis on many other aspects of the city construction, such as development of economics, health of the residents and stability of the police, rather than financial support for cultural traditions. Since above-mentioned factors are more important, and the premise and the assurance of the prosperity of cultural tradition. For example, simply considering a city with poor economics or poor peace, residents in this city are always anxious about their food, dressing, health or safety, etc. It is obviously impossible for them to take the interests of various culture traditions. Only when they could possess fine economic conditions and social conditions, culture tradition would be appropriate supplements to their high-quality lives. Therefore, the government should distinguish the significance of all the aspects of the city construction and put emphasis on the more important ones.个人感觉这段还是可以的，我在10中也论述了 政府应该关注更多方面，比如经济建设。并没有跑题啊

Further more, many valuable cultural traditions are better preserved in rural areas, rather than urban areas, since the high modernization and industrialization in urban areas inevitably undermines the integrity and popularity of some cultural traditions. For example, many folk songs and folk instruments, which are very popular in some rural areas and mountainous areas, it is uncommon for us to find these forms of cultural in modern cities but no one can deny that these cultural traditions also need protection and preservation. Meanwhile, due to the rapid development of globalization and communication, there are much more fusions of various cultural forms than single form of culture in major cities. Thus, it is improper to regard major cities as the cradles of the nation's cultural traditions, but the platform for various culture traditions to understand and communicate with each other.  感觉这一个观点有点奇怪，lz的意思是不是论证cultural tradition不是在major city中产生的? 这段的TS是讲preserved，所以可以把后面的meanwhile单独分开来论述一下，讲很多传统起源与rural areas.
However, it is no denying that in many countries, the most significant cultural symbols mainly exist in their high-developed major cities. These cultural symbols represent the characteristics of their nation, and from which people could acquire a certain comprehension of the nation's culture, such as Forbidden City and Summer Palace in China's Beijing, Arch of Triumph in France's Paris, and Coliseum in Italy's Rome, etc. The governments indubitably have the responsibility to make great efforts to protect and develop them, which are the spirits and symbols of their countries.

To sum up, due to the above-mentioned reasons, we can finally draw a conclusion that as governors, with the premise of well construction of economics, politics and health, they should properly provide financial support for desirable and valuable cultural traditions, both in urban areas and rural areas

Lz是9月1号考吗，我也是

帮忙看一下我ISSUE11的啊
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

modeuxUID: 2107416

mahu搞错了
上楼的上楼的michel_shao是9.1考
咱们组里就你们两人最好考了，好运啊~~~
改你的作文去了~~