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Scandals, an eye-catching word which appeared没有必要用过去时吧 since the very beginning of the society, has always placing a dilemma in front of the cilvilians(citizens). Whatever fields it happens in, such as politics, academia, or sports, it can often attract our attention on that problem, in a way that others never could and has a impact which sometimes overshadows the essential meanings of the event.最后一个句子好长。。。而且结构也不是很清楚。。。

In the first place, another 没one哪来的another是不是应该是other，而且这个意思也太含糊aspect of facts is revealed by scandals in an unsuspect这2个ms都不对(or insuspect??) way to the audience这句意思不太清楚。。. This is a good way of warning for the awareness from the people. For example, with the rapidly advancing technology, the academic researchers have more opportunities to access a pool of abundant useful information for their research. 这2句没有直接的联系，info多了不应该是academic cheating少了才对啊，人们不需要cheating就能得到必要的数据，从而得出academic的成果。。Therefore academic cheating is becoming increasingly noticeable during the recent years. Last year, nine doctorial students in Beijing University, the top educational institution in China, were rejected after one year study, for their entrancing research papers were copied from the internet. Shocking 被动？by the news however, citizens now recognize that even the authentic entities could hardly match with their fames.个人觉得最好不要用中国的scandal做例子

On the other hand, the existing way of valuation evaluationmay be altered when scandals appears复数. As we all know, football match is one of the most fierce competitional games. The best players could enjoy an extravagant life, buying a flat with more than one garden while the poor performing players or teams may worry about the meals tomorrow.这句没有必要写，和主题无关 As a result, no matter with what mcorruptionethods, most players try every means to win. The ethic confusions raised. Drug abuse, changing the age records, XINGHUI汉语拼音。。。~~！！！  the CAIPAN 这句可以改成the corrpution of referee , a large variety of problems became appearent 好象拼写错误which frustrate the order of the society. Thus, the only way to solve those dilemmas is to revalue the existing moral rules or customs so that people may reconsidered 语法错误 what originally appreciates and depreciates are这个从句中好象没有主语 when scandals happen.

What is more, some of the scandals had been so over-emphasized that the real spirits of the events are lost. Knowing that humans are born with curious instincts, some groups of people, especially the politics, 好奇和给对方编制罪名又没有因果关系intentionally fabricate scandals for their counterpart. Take the US former president Bill Clinton for example. The worldwide-known sexual scandal made him lost his reputation that even now when he is noted, still large number of people would refer to this story rather than his contributions to the country. Positive   affects词性 of his effort should not be neglected in spite of the scandal. As the famous actor once said:" you can deny my private life, but you can not deny my art ." 这里过渡不好。。结束的也比较草率As a matter of fact, scandals reduce people's concentration on the things which are indeed needed.

As all the discussions mentioned above, scandal deserves people to consider more about what it brings to us and which attitude must be paid towards io it.


总体来说不错，不过注意每一句和下一句的逻辑联系问题。。。

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