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The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes.

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I totally agree with the speaker's assertion that academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world and provides us a new angel to see the world. Moreover, with the different angles from which we can get relatively different comprehension about the world, we can get a more appropriate solutions whenever we meet any issue in reality.

To begin with, the systematic academic study enables us to dig down into the any issue we meet in the reality. Before the academic study what we can see is just the peripheral phenomena in the world, which can be perceived samely by most of people in the world. However, the academic study gives us the influential knowledge in certain disciplines and teaches us how to utilize the basic theories and principles to get the essence behind the peripheral phenomena, and thus enabling us to comprehend our world more profoundly. For example, before we learn the theory of the atmosphere circulation, we would possibly recognize the air pollution is only the problem in local areas. However, after we attend relative courses in geology class, we would certainly know the polluted materials would be taken into other places by the power of the atmosphere circulation and the problem of environment pollution the issues for all of people in the world. So, after the study of an academic discipline, we could possibly get a more deep comprehension about the issues we meet in our lives.

In the second place, the study of a different academic discipline endows us another different comprehension about the world. Different disciplines have the universally different measurement and starting points to consider the same issues and to explore our world. After learning a distinctive study, we might obtain another new way to analyze and solve the same problem we meet. For an instance, consider the prevent of the pest, nearly all of which depends on the chemical insecticide. However, after we learn the food chains in the ecology, we might put utilization of the pests' natural enemies to kill the pests--the ecological method as the first choice. After all, the study of different disciplines could provide us another angel to solve the problems.

Finally, the study of academic disciplines gives us a more holistic view to see the world. As I have said above, the systematic study of disciplines provides us deeper comprehension about the phenomena and other starting points when we meet any problems, and thus enables us gain a holistic view to our world and could advance a more appropriate solution to the issue we meet. For example, how to evaluate the of human cloning needs us not only to considered deeply in the field of the biology but also in the field of sociology. Or consider the problem that how to use the nuclear weapons. Any mature and well educated individuals would analyze this problem from the sociology, politics, and the scientific research. So the academic studies, provides us a whole view to the issues we meet in reality.

To sum up, the study of the academic disciplines enables us to think deeply and holistically, and thus provide us a new view to perceive the world.

[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-8-26 at 11:24 ]

iceoolongUID: 180112

先占个座，最近这两天病了，要早点休息，明早起来看看

iceoolongUID: 180112

I totally agree with the speaker's assertion that academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world and provides us a new angelangle,是不是用复数更好，向下面那个 to see the world. Moreover, with the different angles from which we can get relatively different comprehension about the world, we can get a more appropriate solutions whenever we meet any issue in reality.那天看了篇不错的文章，这句是不是可以考虑用倒装，变化多一些

To begin with, the systematic academic study enables us to dig down intodig into or dig down into the any issue we meet in the reality. Before the academic study what we can see is just the peripheral phenomena in the world, which can be perceived samely by most of people in the world. However, the academic study gives us the influential knowledge in certain disciplines and teaches us how to utilize the basic theories and principles to get the essence behind the peripheral phenomena, and thus enabling us to comprehend our world more profoundly. For example, before we learn the theory of the atmosphere circulation, we would possibly recognize the air pollution is only the problem in local areas. However, after we attend relative courses in geology class, we would certainly know the polluted materials would be taken into other places by the power of the atmosphere circulation and the problem of environment pollution the issues for all of people in the world. So, after the study of an academic discipline, we could possibly get a more deep comprehension about the issues we meet in our lives.个人感觉这段不错，紧跟TS

In the second place, the study of a different academic discipline endows us another different comprehension about the world. Different disciplines have the universally different measurement and starting points to consider the same issues and to explore our world. After learning a distinctive studylearning a study?, we might obtain another new way to analyze and solve the same problem we meet. For an instance, consider the prevent of the pest, nearly all of which depends on the chemical insecticide.好像有点问题 However, after we learn the food chains in the ecology, we might put utilization of the pests' natural enemies to kill the pests--the ecological method as the first choice. After all, the study of different disciplines could provide us another angel to solve the problems.

Finally, the study of academic disciplines gives us a more holistic view to see the world. As I have said above, the systematic study of disciplines provides us deeper comprehension about the phenomena and other starting points when we meet any problems, and thus enables us gain a holistic view to our world and could advance a more appropriate solution to the issue we meet. For example, how to evaluate the of human cloning needs us not only to considered deeply in the field of the biology but also in the field of sociology. Or consider the problem that how to use the nuclear weapons. Any mature and well educated individuals would analyze this problem from the sociology, politics, and the scientific research. So the academic studies, provides us a whole view to the issues we meet in reality.

To sum up, the study of the academic disciplines enables us to think deeply and holistically, and thus provide us a new view to perceive the world.
感觉三个论述方面可以再商讨一下，看看队里的人还有什么样的观点，前两个还是不错的，不过第三个觉得有点重复的意思，我觉得似乎还有能够更加科学的观察世界，改变人们的错误地认识，看到真相。比如说地心说的例子，也在考虑中……

冰阳UID: 201604

谢谢iceoolong 得意见，我刚开始写的时候b2和b3
写在一起的，但是后来没什么分论点的说，才将这两个分开的:L，我也是觉得很别扭，好在看到你的意见，感觉思路打开了一点，谢谢啦:handshake

wineyreUID: 2106739

我的issue177
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=326819

看了你的觉得很有启发.不过我是把不同的discipline分成B1,B2写,实在找不出B3.
其实我本来是准备B1,B2,B3写三门学科的不同影响的,结果写到后来觉得不是很好,所以改B3.

wineyreUID: 2106739

发觉前队长zehua的狂练法很有效,使题目很容易上手,呵呵~~

killowindUID: 207262

I totally agree with the speaker's assertion that academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world and provides us a new angel(你这个此词儿用的俗啊,农民吧perspective多显洋气) to see the world. Moreover, with the different angles(你看你看) from which we can get relatively different comprehension about the world, we can get (a) more appropriate (solutions) whenever we meet any issues in reality.( 实际上, 事实上,所以意思就错啦我也不知道怎么说in mundane life????)
    To begin with, the systematic academic study enables us to dig down into the any(错了吧) issues  we meet in the reality. Before the academic study what we can see is just the peripheral phenomena in the world, which can be perceived samely(又错啦,这也是形容词) by most of people in the world. However, the academic study gives us the influential knowledge in certain disciplines and teaches us how to utilize the basic theories and principles to get the essence behind the peripheral phenomena, and thus enabling (enable ) us to comprehend our world more profoundly. For example, before we learn the theory of the atmosphere circulation, we would possibly recognize the air pollution is only the problem in local areas. However, after we attend relative courses in geology class, we would certainly know the polluted materials would be taken into other places by the power of the atmosphere circulation and the problem of environment pollution the issues for all of people in the world. So, after the study of an academic discipline, we could possibly get a more deep comprehension about the issues we meet in our lives.
   In the second place, the study of a different academic discipline endows us another different comprehension about the world. Different disciplines have the universally different measurement and starting points to consider the same issues and to explore our world. After learning a distinctive study, we might obtain another new way to analyze and solve the same problem we meet. For an instance (for instance), consider the prevention of the pest, nearly all of which depends on the chemical insecticides. However, after we learn the food chains in the ecology, we might put utilization of the pests' natural enemies to kill the pests--the ecological method as the first choice. After all, the study of different disciplines could provide us another angel  to solve the problems.
   Finally, the study of academic disciplines gives us a more holistic view to see the world. As I have said above, the systematic study of disciplines provides us deeper comprehension about the phenomena and other starting points when we meet any problems, and thus enables us ( to) gain a holistic view to our world and could advance a more appropriate solution to the issue we meet. For example, how to evaluate the of human cloning needs us not only to considered deeply in the field of the biology but also in the field of sociology. Or consider the problem that how to use the nuclear weapons. Any mature and well educated individuals would analyze this problem from the sociology, politics, and the scientific research. So the academic studies, provides us a whole view to the issues we meet in reality.
   To sum up, the study of the academic disciplines enables us to think deeply and holistically(这个词用的好,脱俗), and thus provide us a new view to perceive the world.
最后一段稍显单薄

[ Last edited by killowind on 2005-8-26 at 14:54 ]

xiaonawangUID: 2114716

I totally agree with the speaker's assertion that academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world and provides us a new angel to see the world. Moreover, with the different angles from which we can get relatively different comprehension about the world, we can get a more appropriate solutions whenever we meet any issue in reality.

To begin with, the systematic academic study enables us to dig down into the any issue we meet in the reality. Before the academic study what we can see is just the peripheral phenomena in the world, which can be perceived samely by most of people in the world. However, the academic study gives us the influential knowledge in certain disciplines and teaches us how to utilize the basic theories and principles to get the essence behind the peripheral phenomena, and thus enabling us to comprehend our world more profoundly. For example, before we learn the theory of the atmosphere circulation, we would possibly recognize the air pollution is only the problem in local areas. However, after we attend relative courses in geology class, we would certainly know the polluted materials would be taken into other places by the power of the atmosphere circulation and the problem of environment pollution the issues for all of people in the world. So, after the study of an academic discipline, we could possibly get a more deep comprehension about the issues we meet in our lives.

In the second place, the study of a different academic discipline endows us another different comprehension about the world. Different disciplines have the universally different measurement and starting points to consider the same issues and to explore our world. After learning a distinctive study, we might obtain another new way to analyze and solve the same problem we meet. For an instance, consider the prevent of the pest, nearly all of which depends on the chemical insecticide. However, after we learn the food chains in the ecology, we might put utilization of the pests' natural enemies to kill the pests--the ecological method as the first choice. After all, the study of different disciplines could provide us another angel to solve the problems.(例子有新意，有点像学生物的，嗬嗬，同行)

Finally, the study of academic disciplines gives us a more holistic view to see the world. As I have said above, the systematic study of disciplines provides us deeper comprehension about the phenomena and other starting points when we meet any problems, and thus enables us gain a holistic view to our world and could advance a more appropriate solution to the issue we meet. For example, how to evaluate the of human cloning needs us not only to considered deeply in the field of the biology but also in the field of sociology. Or consider the problem that how to use the nuclear weapons. Any mature and well educated individuals would analyze this problem from the sociology, politics, and the scientific research. So the academic studies, provides us a whole view to the issues we meet in reality.

To sum up, the study of the academic disciplines enables us to think deeply and   holistically, and thus provide us a new view to perceive the world.

不错。我也写过这篇，写得很烂，都没贴上来，好像，呵呵