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发表于 2006-1-23 23:59:22 |只看该作者

交作业，1.22，好像又晚了
issue11
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=397643
argu145
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=397645

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发表于 2006-1-24 00:53:46 |只看该作者

ＩＳＳＵＥ　科技　总频率３３
120"So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present."

ＡＲＧＵＥＭＥＮＴ总频率２２
137The following appeared in an editorial in the Mason City newspaper.
"At present, Mason City residents seldom use the nearby Mason River for any kind of recreational activity, even though surveys of the region's residents consistently rank water sports (swimming, fishing, and boating) as a favorite form of recreation. Since there have been complaints about the quality of the water in the river, residents must be avoiding the river because they think that it is not clean enough. But that situation is about to change: the agency responsible for rivers in our region has announced plans to clean up Mason River. Therefore, recreational use of the river is likely to increase, so the Mason City council will need to increase its budget for improvements to the publicly owned lands along the Mason River."

换搭档了，大家注意．另外，这段时间很多组员请假有事情，所以万一搭档不能改请自己找下组内其他写了作文的成员进行互拍

[ 本帖最后由 sallyxindu 于 2006-1-24 12:59 编辑 ]

让我们在寄托里相互帮助鼓励，一同寻找生命里的寄托

双非DIY美硕申请总结

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发表于 2006-1-24 10:48:39 |只看该作者

原帖由 sallyxindu 于 2006-1-24 00:53 发表
ＩＳＳＵＥ　科技　总频率３３
120"So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present."

ＡＲＧＵＥＭＥ ...

组长，argu131好像已经写过了啊（1.6的作业）

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原帖由安婧于 2006-1-23 09:45 发表
生病了，老爸老妈都不让上网了。然后发现手机罢工——屏幕全黑了，至今未愈。今天上网发现，我的QQ居然也没钱了，打不开了！我要疯了！看到大家热火朝天的讨论提纲，看到SALLY认真而且大量的写提纲，我好着急啊！ ...

呵呵，怪不得很久都没见安婧了
注意身体哦

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原帖由 great_master 于 2006-1-23 09:25 发表

我个人对于wendy-wang821同学得第四个错误有点疑问：
4---最后，我认为这篇的结论可以灵活写。作者隐含了推论：累就不喜欢锻炼。但是因为在前面作者没给出合理的解释，如：太累根本无法再去运动 ...

同意great_master的看法，我觉得应该把重点放在weight gain上。个人感觉作者的思路是1. 从调查看打呼噜容易胖 2.从所谓的科学角度具体分析（当然是不合逻辑的）打呼噜者容易长胖。什么呼吸中断，太累无力锻炼都是想支持这个分析的。结论：（因为容易长胖）所以打呼噜的人都应该少吃多锻炼

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发表于 2006-1-24 11:05:09 |只看该作者

sally,我想说我是勇敢的报了1月27号。:L，怕怕。
great-master your suggestion about 4--- is right, however, I really do not know why I said what I have not seriously thought about.
Besides, Issue is ****###%%%:@, nothing can be more terrible and horrible than it. Hope just a hope, test will always be my nightmare. God bless me!

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发表于 2006-1-24 11:37:10 |只看该作者

原帖由 wendy-wang821 于 2006-1-24 11:05 发表
sally,我想说我是勇敢的报了1月27号。:L，怕怕。
great-master your suggestion about 4--- is right, however, I really do not know why I said what I have not seriously though ...

:victory:预祝wendy-wang821同学杀G作文成功:victory:，在鸡年的最后去杀G，好兆头啊:lol:lol～～～～
看样子你应该是没有什么问题的了，连帖子都已经开始用E文写了，而且还用上了however这种强转折词，汗:L:L～～～
Blessing~~~

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