06年6G—GoGoGo小组专用作文大贴

neverstopcowUID: 2149686

我也在上新东方，就是还没开始上作文

happy_shirleyUID: 2155516

是吗，你在那个校区？
我是G0604。你呢？

happy_shirleyUID: 2155516

原帖由 azalea 于 2006-1-22 23:00 发表
啊 什么新认识呀？
愿闻其详！

以前写a的时候抓着逻辑错误就开始论述，但是找逻辑错误没有一个层次性。
听了老师分析以后，发现以前都是在找鸡毛蒜皮的小错，没有切中要害。
A中最重要的是先攻击作者的逻辑假设，如果逻辑假设存在错误，这个就是比较严重的逻辑推理错误了。

yunziluoUID: 2164829

Issue全文写作
Issue 147/32
"Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."
“传统与现代化水火难容，人们必须在两者之间作出抉择。”


Issue提纲准备:    主题词:科技

Issue 159/28
"The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."
“人类的大脑将永远优越于机器，因为机器仅仅只是人类大脑的工具。”

Issue 121/23
"At various times in the geological past, many species have become extinct as a result of natural, rather than human, processes. Thus, there is no justification for society to make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species."
“在过去地质进程的不同阶段，许多物种由于自然进程而非人类进程的原因而灭绝。因此，人类社会没有任何正当的理由去作巨大的努力，尤其是在资金和劳动力方面作巨大的投入，去拯救某一濒危物种。”


Issue 151/19
"High-speed electronic communications media, such as electronic mail and television, tend to prevent meaningful and thoughtful communication."
“高速电子传播媒介，例如电子邮件和电视，常常妨碍人们实现意义深远、有思想深度的交流。”

Issue 184/17
"It is a grave mistake to theorize before one has data."
“在获得数据之前就进行理论阐述，这是一个严重的错误。”

Argument全文写作：142

142The article entitled 'Eating Iron' in last month's issue of Eating for Health reported that a recent study found a correlation between high levels of iron in the diet and an increased risk of heart disease. Further, it is well established that there is a link between large amounts of red meat in the diet and heart disease, and red meat is high in iron. On the basis of the study and the well-established link between red meat and heart disease, we can conclude that the correlation between high iron levels and heart disease, then, is most probably a function of the correlation between red meat and heart disease.

yunziluoUID: 2164829

好象大家都有点轻视argument,来一个变态的142刺激一下!
大家都交作业啊,今天星期一,法定交作业的日子!

happyleerUID: 2167067

我来了，一定尽量坚持交作业！
希望大家互相帮助。

azaleaUID: 196122

看来看去就一个错误啊
去翻了下网上通行的argu分析，觉得有些地方是胡说八道。。
贴来大家看下

没有提供资料的前提：红肉与心脏病之间的联系，没数据，没研究，没调查。含量？食用方式？ ·不一定成立的前提，即使红肉与心脏病的联系成立，没有资料证明红肉食用多的铁吸收就会多。有可能红肉的铁不容易被吸收的话。 ·论据，研究结果不确切，高含铁量与心脏病之间的联系是怎样？铁对身体的影响有很多种，一定铁的摄入对身体是有好处的，非氧化铁，锈铁有区别。结论：红肉的含的铁是怎样的，不一定会是造成心脏病的。所以不能得出结论红肉与心脏病的联系不是其它因素造成。

汗。。我还是自力更生了。。

azaleaUID: 196122

虽然还没写完 HOHO
a142
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

i147
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768010682

[ 本帖最后由 azalea 于 2006-1-23 23:42 编辑 ]

happy_shirleyUID: 2155516

yunziluo不是白天还要上课吗？
真佩服！
每天完成这么多工作？

yunziluoUID: 2164829

Issue全文写作
Issue17/38
"There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
“有两种法律，公正的与不公正的。置身于社会中的每个个人都有责任去遵守公正的法律，甚至更重要的是，去拒不服从并抵制不公正的法律。”

Issue提纲准备    主题词:法律,以及昨天遗留下的两个科技题
Issue 180/18
"Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because moral behavior cannot be legislated."
“现代社会的许多问题无法通过法律和法制得到解决，因为我们不能对道德行为进行立法。”


Issue 174/7
"Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places."
“法律不应该是静态的和一成不变的。相反，它们应该具有足够的灵活性来将不同的情况、时间和地点考虑在内。”


Issue 178/5
"It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people's behavior, but legislation cannot reform human nature. Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts and minds."
“通过一些控制或限制人们行为的法律是有可能的。但立法无法改变人类的本性。法律不能改变人们心灵深外的东西。”


Issue 196/15
"Technology creates more problems than it solves, and may threaten or damage the quality of life."
“技术所造成的问题远多于它所能解决的问题，并可能会威胁或危及生活质量。”


Issue 30/15
"The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."
“技术进步的主要目标是提高人们的效率，这样，每个人都能享受更多的闲暇时光。”


Argument全文写作：

argument56:
Collectors prize the ancient life-size clay statues of human figures made on Kali Island but have long wondered how the Kalinese artists were able to depict bodies with such realistic precision. Since archeologists have recently discovered molds of human heads and hands on Kali, we can now conclude that the ancient Kalinese artists used molds of actual bodies, not sculpting tools and techniques, to create these statues. This discovery explains why Kalinese miniature statues were abstract and entirely different in style: molds could only be used for life-size sculptures. It also explains why few ancient Kalinese sculpting tools have been found. In light of this development, collectors should expect the life-size sculptures to decrease in value and the miniatures to increase in value.

[ 本帖最后由 yunziluo 于 2006-1-23 23:43 编辑 ]

yunziluoUID: 2164829

issue17是写过的,不过没关系,把写过的修改成6分作文,万一考试碰到,那你就请我吃饭吧.

另外,又一个argument变态题52,大家品尝品尝!

azaleaUID: 196122

yunziluoUID: 2164829

我也没完,不过挺住!加油azalea,好象你的考试比我还早!

shirley不要取笑,我那做得了那么多工作,提纲准备就第一天写了点,可是后来----
不过作业还是要布置,希望大家积极地写,积极地拍
另外,我上课是在二月份,到时候怎么办啊!
大家加油,我也加油!

azaleaUID: 196122

不过我很闲的 也不用上课 专心准备作文啦
最近可以一直写的
yunzi辛苦啦~我会支持你的！

azaleaUID: 196122

半夜来顶~