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Issue 144 (考频75)
"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."
*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
“能够给社会留下具有持久价值东西的人是艺术家，而不是艺术评论家。”

中文提纲：1. 提出批评家对于永久的艺术品同样重要
2. 是艺术家们创造艺术品，艺术家完成一向可以流芳百世的艺术品是相当艰辛的
3. 我们也不得不承认没有艺术家就没有艺术批评家，可是一个有历史责任感的评论家对于优秀的艺术品同样重要，他是人们认识到他的价值，他可以敏锐的看到社会中的各种现象从而帮助艺术家知道需要反映的主题创作出能反映人间百态的作品。
4. 当然一个保守固执不负责任的评论家也可能将优秀的艺术作品埋没。
5. 总结，艺术家和艺术评论家对于之久价值的东西同样有着卓越的贡献，同时希望所有的批评家们都能明白自己的作用，对于艺术的发展起到积极的作用。

The writer asserts that artist, not the art critic, provides something of lasting value to society. There is no doubt it is the artists who create eminent art. While at the same time I think the art critics also play an important role in those distinguished arts with helping common people understand artworks more deeply. Through careful analysis, we will found that both artist and art critic contribute to a piece of artwork.

No one can deny the crucial role of the artist in the creation of the artist works. Len Tolstoy, the famous Russian writer once said that (I paraphrase):”Art is not a handicraft, it is the transmission of feeling artist has experienced.” It is much harder than we imagine to express certain emotion through a piece of artwork. An artist may spend a very long time to think out a way to transmit his or her feelings. Sometimes no one would support the artists’ work before any result came out. So during the time of creating, it is the spiritual belief rather than any income that support the artists to accomplish the work.

However, this does not mean that art critics are useless in the art history. Admittedly, without artist there would be no art critics. But I think ｔｈｏｓｅ　ｒｅｓｐｏｎｓｉｂｌｅ　art critics are as important as the artists. Ｗｅ　ｃａｎ　ｓｅｅ　ｔｈａｔ　ｔｈｅ　ｒｅｓｐｏｎｓｉｂｉｌｉｔｙ　ｏｆ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔｉｓｔｓ　ｉｓ　ｔｏ　ｆｉｎｄ　ｈｏｗ　ｔｏ　ｅｘｅｓｓ　ｔｈｅｒｅ　ｆｅｅｌｉｎｇｓ．　Ｗｈｉｌｅ　ａｒｔ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ　ｃａｎ　ｅｎａｂｌｅ　ｃｏｍｍｏｎ　ｐｅｏｐｌｅ　ｗｈｏ　ａｒｅ　ｊｕｓｔ　ｌａｙｐｅｒｓｏｎ　ｔｏ　ａｒｔ　ｔｏ　ｕｎｄｅｒｓｔａｎｄ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔｗｏｒｋ　ｍｏｒｅ　ｄｅｅｐｌｙ　ａｎｄ　ｆｅｅｌ　ｗｈａｔ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔｉｓｔｓ　ｗａｎｔ　ｔｏ　ｅｘｐｒｅｓｓ．　Ｔｈｅ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ　ａｌｓｏ　ｃａｎ　ｇｉｖｅ　ｐｅｏｐｌｅ　ｓｏｍｅ　ａｄｖｉｃｅ　ｏｎ　ｗｈｉｃｈ　ａｒｔ　ｉｓ　ｗｏｒｔｈ　ｔｈｉｒｅ　ｔｉｍｅ　ａｎｄ　ａｔｔｅｎｔｉｏｎ　ａｓ　ｓｏｍｅｔｈｉｎｇ　ｆａｓｈｉｏｎ　ｄｏｅｓ　ｎｏｔ　ｅｑｕａｌ　ｕｓｅｆｕｌ．　Ｉｎ　ａｄｄｉｔｉｏｎ，　ｔｈｅ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ　ａｒｅ　ａｌｗａｙｓ　ｍｏｒｅ　ａｃｕｔｅ　ｗｉｔｈ　ｔｈｅ　ｐｈｅｎｏｍｅｎｏｎ　ａｎｄ　ｐｒｏｂｌｅｍｓ　ｉｎ　ｔｈｅ　ｓｏｃｉｅｔｙ．　Ｓｏ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔｉｓｔｓ　ｃａｎ　ｆｉｎｄ　ｓｏｍｅ　ｐｒｏｆｏｕｎｄ　ｔｈｅｓｉｓ　ｉｎ　ｔｈｅ　ｃｏｍｍｅｎｔ　ｗｒｉｔｔｅｎ　ｂｙ　ｔｈｅ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ．　Ｏｎ　ｔｈｅ　ｏｔｈｅｒ　ｈａｎｄ，　ｏｆ　ｃｏｕｒｓｅ ，　ｓｏｍｅ　ｐｒｏｍｉｎｅｎｔ　ａｒｔｗｏｒｋｓ　ａｒｅ　ｄｉｓｍｉｓｓｅｄ　ｂｙ　ｓｏｍｅ　ｉｒｒｅｓｐｏｎｓｉｂｌｅ　ａｎｄ　ｃｏｎｓｅｒｖａｔｉｖｅ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ．Ｂｅｅｔｈｏｖｅｎ＇ｓ　ｍｕｓｉｃ　ｗａｓ　ｏｎｃｅ　ｃｏｍｐｌｅｔｅｌｙ　ｂｕｒｉｅｄ　ｂｙ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃ＇ｓ　ｊｕｄｇｅｍｅｎｔ　ａｔ　ｈｉｓ　ｔｉｍｅ．　

Ｉｎ　ｓｕｍ，　ｔｈｏｕｇｈ　ａｎ　ａｒｉｓｔ　ｃｏｎｔｒｉｂｕｔｅ　ｓｏ　ｍｕｃｈ　ｔｏ　ａ　ｌａｓｔｉｎｇ　ｖａｌｕｅ　ａｒｔｗｏｒｋ，　ｗｅ　ｓｔｉｌｌ　ｃａｎ　ｎｏｔ　ｏｖｅｒｌｏｏｋ　ｔｈｅ　ｉｍｐｏｒｔａｎｔ　ｒｏｌｅ　ｐｌａｙｅｄ　ｂｙ　ｔｈｅ　ｐｏｓｉｔｉｖｅ　ａｒｔ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ．　Ｔｏ　ｄｅｖｅｌｏｐ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔ　ｍｏｒｅ　ｒａｐｉｄｌｙ　ａｎｄ　ｍｏｒｅ　ｈｅａｌｔｈｌｙ，　ｗｅ　ｓｈｏｕｌｄ　ｍａｋｅ　ａｌｌ　ｔｈｅ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ　ｋｎｏｗ　ｔｈｅｉｒ　ｆｕｎｃｔｉｎ　ａｎｄ　ｒｅｓｐｏｎｓｉｂｉｌｉｔｙ，　ａｎｄ　ｅｎｏｕｒｇｅ　ｔｈｅｍ　ｇｏ　ｔｏｇｅｔｈｅｒ　ｗｉｔｈ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔｉｓｔ　ｔｏ　ｐｕｒｓｕｅ　ｔｈｅ　ｐｅｒｆｅｃｔ　ｗｏｒｋｓ．

[ Last edited by 11yaoyao on 2005-12-27 at 11:14 ]

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The writer asserts that artist, not the art critic, provides something of lasting value to society. There is no doubt it is the artists who create eminent art. While at the same time I think the art critics also play an important role in those distinguished arts with helping common people understand artworks more deeply. （想表达的东西太多了，稍有冗余）Through careful analysis, we will found that both artist and art critic contribute to a piece of artwork.

No one can deny the crucial role of the artist in the creation of the artist works. （TS）Len Tolstoy, the famous Russian writer once said that (I paraphrase):”Art is not a handicraft, it is the transmission of feeling artist has experienced.” It is much harder than we imagine to express certain emotion through a piece of artwork. An artist may spend a very long time to think out a way to transmit his or her feelings. Sometimes no one would support the artists’ work before any result came out. So during the time of creating（creation）, it is the spiritual belief rather than any income that support the artists to accomplish the work.
这段在叙述上不是很理想，句子和句子之间有些孤立。不过大家确实都不大熟悉艺术，写起来都很费劲

However, this does not mean that art critics are useless in the art history. Admittedly, without artist there would be no art critics. 此处连词用得有些生硬，比较Chinese-English.可以把Admittedly...放在前面，然后去掉HoweverBut I think ｔｈｏｓｅ　ｒｅｓｐｏｎｓｉｂｌｅ　art critics are as important as the artists. Ｗｅ　ｃａｎ　ｓｅｅ　ｔｈａｔ　ｔｈｅ　ｒｅｓｐｏｎｓｉｂｉｌｉｔｙ　ｏｆ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔｉｓｔｓ　ｉｓ　ｔｏ　ｆｉｎｄ　ｈｏｗ　ｔｏ　ｅｘprｅｓｓ　ｔｈｅｒｅ　ｆｅｅｌｉｎｇｓ．　Ｗｈｉｌｅ　ａｒｔ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ　ｃａｎ　ｅｎａｂｌｅ　ｃｏｍｍｏｎ　ｐｅｏｐｌｅ　ｗｈｏ　ａｒｅ　ｊｕｓｔ　ｌａｙｐｅｒｓｏｎ　ｔｏ　ａｒｔ　ｔｏ　ｕｎｄｅｒｓｔａｎｄ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔｗｏｒｋ　ｍｏｒｅ　ｄｅｅｐｌｙ　ａｎｄ　ｆｅｅｌ　ｗｈａｔ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔｉｓｔｓ　ｗａｎｔ　ｔｏ　ｅｘｐｒｅｓｓ．　Ｔｈｅ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ　ｃａｎ ａｌｓｏ　ｇｉｖｅ　ｐｅｏｐｌｅ　ｓｏｍｅ　ａｄｖｉｃｅs　ｏｎ　ｗｈｉｃｈ　ａｒｔ　ｉｓ　ｗｏｒｔｈ　ｔｈeｉｒ　ｔｉｍｅ　ａｎｄ　ａｔｔｅｎｔｉｏｎ　ａｓ　ｓｏｍｅｔｈｉｎｇ　ｆａｓｈｉｏｎ　ｄｏｅｓ　ｎｏｔ　ｅｑｕａｌ　ｕｓｅｆｕｌ．　Ｉｎ　ａｄｄｉｔｉｏｎ，　ｔｈｅ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ　ａｒｅ　ａｌｗａｙｓ　ｍｏｒｅ　ａｃｕｔｅ　ｗｉｔｈ　ｔｈｅ　ｐｈｅｎｏｍｅｎｏｎ　ａｎｄ　ｐｒｏｂｌｅｍｓ　ｉｎ　ｔｈｅ　ｓｏｃｉｅｔｙ．　Ｓｏ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔｉｓｔｓ　ｃａｎ　ｆｉｎｄ　ｓｏｍｅ　ｐｒｏｆｏｕｎｄ　ｔｈｅｓｉｓ　(这个词放在这里好怪异啊，用idea吧)ｉｎ　ｔｈｅ　ｃｏｍｍｅｎｔ　ｗｒｉｔｔｅｎ　ｂｙ　ｔｈｅ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ．　Ｏｎ　ｔｈｅ　ｏｔｈｅｒ　ｈａｎｄ，　ｏｆ　ｃｏｕｒｓｅ ，　ｓｏｍｅ　ｐｒｏｍｉｎｅｎｔ　ａｒｔｗｏｒｋｓ　ａｒｅ　ｄｉｓｍｉｓｓｅｄ　ｂｙ　ｓｏｍｅ　ｉｒｒｅｓｐｏｎｓｉｂｌｅ　ａｎｄ　ｃｏｎｓｅｒｖａｔｉｖｅ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ．Ｂｅｅｔｈｏｖｅｎ＇ｓ　ｍｕｓｉｃ　ｗａｓ　ｏｎｃｅ　ｃｏｍｐｌｅｔｅｌｙ　ｂｕｒｉｅｄ　ｂｙ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃ＇ｓ　ｊｕｄｇｅｍｅｎｔ　ａｔ　ｈｉｓ　ｔｉｍｅ．　
我觉得On the other hand后面可以不用写，毕竟这段讲的是评论家的重要性

Ｉｎ　ｓｕｍ，　ｔｈｏｕｇｈ　ａｎ　ａｒｉｓｔ　ｃｏｎｔｒｉｂｕｔｅ　ｓｏ　ｍｕｃｈ　ｔｏ　ａ　ｌａｓｔｉｎｇ　ｖａｌｕｅ　ａｒｔｗｏｒｋ，　ｗｅ　ｓｔｉｌｌ　ｃａｎ　ｎｏｔ　ｏｖｅｒｌｏｏｋ　ｔｈｅ　ｉｍｐｏｒｔａｎｔ　ｒｏｌｅ　ｐｌａｙｅｄ　ｂｙ　ｔｈｅ　ｐｏｓｉｔｉｖｅ　ａｒｔ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ．　Ｔｏ　ｄｅｖｅｌｏｐ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔ　ｍｏｒｅ　ｒａｐｉｄｌｙ　ａｎｄ　ｍｏｒｅ　ｈｅａｌｔｈｌｙ，　ｗｅ　ｓｈｏｕｌｄ　ｍａｋｅ　ａｌｌ　ｔｈｅ　ｃｒｉｔｉｃｓ　ｋｎｏｗ　ｔｈｅｉｒ　ｆｕｎｃｔｉｎ　ａｎｄ　ｒｅｓｐｏｎｓｉｂｉｌｉｔｙ，　ａｎｄ　ｅｎｏｕｒｇｅ　ｔｈｅｍ　ｇｏ　ｔｏｇｅｔｈｅｒ（closer）　ｗｉｔｈ　ｔｈｅ　ａｒｔｉｓｔ　ｔｏ　ｐｕｒｓｕｅ　ｔｈｅ　ｐｅｒｆｅｃｔ　ｗｏｒｋｓ．

呵呵，艺术类的文章大家写的都比较郁闷，一起加油啊！

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同学

我帮你把题目改了

题目的格式不对呀

SIGH,版子上那么大的字都不看看么?

下次注意撒

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谢谢斑竹提醒，昨天块熄灯了，所以慌忙之下就没注意
下次一定改正！

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Issue131 中文提纲：
1. 艺术就是艺术家们传递自己感情的一种方式，托尔斯泰的话
2.painting 可以反映艺术家们细腻的思想感情，同时可以反映一个时代的宗教思潮，把握时代的脉搏
3.music 可以表达艺术家对生活的热爱，舒缓人的情绪，陶冶人的情操
4.literature 则可以反映当时社会的风土人情，各种社会现象，揭示社会存在的问题
5. 艺术家通常对一些社会有着独到的见解和敏锐的触觉，通过特殊的方式表达出来，因此在艺术品中往往蕴含着深刻的社会意义，能大胆揭示各种问题以及准确把握时代脉搏

Issue190  中文提纲:
1指出题目中的结论是建立在一个悖论的基础上的，同时提出人的精神需求与物质需求并不矛盾，不是非此即彼的关系
2.提出如果协调的好，两者可以互相促进，扶持艺术事业可以提供更多的就业机会，举例（还没想出来）
3.扶持艺术事业，努力建设精神文明，提高人们的思想意识有利于人们认识“人人为我我为人人”的思想，建立和谐社会
4.总结，精神建设与物质建设两手都要抓，两手都要硬

Issue218  中文提纲：
1.不同意题目观点，指出流行艺术是可以为大多数人所理解的，可是我们不能说流行艺术的所有艺术品都具有价值，举例（商业搞笑电影）提出论点：艺术品要有价值不一定要为大多数人理解。
2.一方面由于普通人没有相关的专业知识，对于艺术的理解不深刻，而且又是对于精神上的需求不如物质需求那么强烈，往往被忽视，举例：艺术展常常少有人问津
3.另一方面，有些卓越的艺术家创作出的作品具有划时代的创新，往往超出同时代的人的理解范围
4.总结，不能武断地将不为人们所理解的艺术品归位没有价值，真正的标准应该是能否对社会的发展起推动作用，应该同时具有时代性和发展性

写的时候都灭考虑到时要写英文的，再回头看觉得翻译成英文简直不可能，这类艺术的题目真郁闷人，胡说了一通自己连什么样的艺术品叫有价值都不知道，汗。。。
这到底应该从何补起啊，现在提高艺术修养有点不现实把。那位高人给点建议阿

[ Last edited by neverstopcow on 2005-12-27 at 19:21 ]