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14. Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.


这期我们写一篇观点对比型的文章.
争取在规定的时间内完成.
BTW,新年快乐,加油!:)
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发表于 2006-1-1 16:05:56 |只看该作者
占位先~~~

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发表于 2006-1-1 16:42:44 |只看该作者
发过一次三期的,写跑题了,就很担心写作文跑题,哎,神经绷得太紧了~~不知道这片写的怎么样,对于写作文,心里一点地都没有。还请大家拍^-^
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Attending classes is a traditional method of learning knowledges ,not only for high school students ,also for university students .However ,different people have different cases ,which makes it hard to develop a person well as his/her aptitudes .Universities ,places for developing specialized professionals ,have the responsibility of developing different students in a much more suitable way . It is a good choice for universities to allow students to have the right of choosing whether go to classes or not .

University students ,not like the high school students ,have the ability to teach themselves .What’s more ,they are matured enough to know what they really need to study and improve .As a result ,they choose the classes on the point of what they are interested and needed .As the famous saying says,” Interest is the best teacher.”, they will have much more enthusiasms to study .

Furthermore , people acknowledge their best time for studying and their best way to learn well ,which makes them studying more efficient via teaching by themselves .Some people like to study stating up late at night ;Some  prefer to get up early in the morning for reciting ;Others would like to learn one subject all day then turn to learn another one for another day .Different people have different habits ,it is much more efficient for them to coordinate their best time and way to study .

In addition to being interesting and efficient for self-learnings ,there is no deny that teaching by themselves could develop people to be a well-rounded human beings .They could have the chance to develop the ability to solve problems by themselves via self-learnings and became much more independent and confident to solve them ,which is very important for people to live in modern society .

In conclusion , though there are many advantages for university students to attend classes ,that they have the right of choosing classes they want to attend has much more benefits for students in modern society .I therefore reinforce my standpoint to support the view that going to classes should be optional for university students.

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发表于 2006-1-1 17:44:36 |只看该作者

哈哈 第一篇 乱写 大家批批吧。 另外, “从...角度来看"怎么翻译

There are two contradictory points of view concerning the students’ attendance to their classes. Some insist that all students should be required compulsorily to have their classes, while others make a more optional viewpoint that students can make their own decisions on whether to go to classes or not. As far as I am concerned, I propose the former view. In other words, I strongly recommend that all university students should attend their classes. Because, I believe that attending classes will benefit the students from the points of both academic research and practical work.
     In the first place, students should learn much from their classes to prepare for their advanced researches. As we know, many courses are designed carefully for students’ future scientific fields. They provide students with necessary preliminaries for their researches. Suppose that a student miss such important basic knowledge, it meanwhile implies that he has no tool for his research. So how can he achieve his aim?
Furthermore, attending classes not only helps students to make full preparation for their academic researches but also benefits them when they graduate from their universities and go out to work. Note that workers should comply with every rule in their factories. Students should be self-discipline. If a student frequently escapes from his classes and is not strict with himself, when he graduate from his school, it is high possible that he can hardly accept any severe discipline. Because he adopt a bad habit of leisure when he is a university student.
  In sum, there are many other disadvantages that result from the wrong attitude toward attending classes when you are a university student. No matter whether you realize them or not, they exist and act in their ways. So never neglect this issue. Every university student should be strict themselves and attend their classes punctually. Because it really benefits yourself.
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发表于 2006-1-1 17:52:52 |只看该作者
占位先,晚上模考,就选这篇做作文的题目了
第一次写给别人改的时候有人说我有好多语法错误
这次争取改正哈哈

好这是1月14日前写的第二篇了,争取练满三篇
因为是打出来的,超时了20分钟,手写的话应该会好些吧,欢迎大家排砖啊,谢谢拉
语言上还很匮乏,一个词翻来覆去的用,本来想变变句式的也没有得逞


另外,拍好的别人的文章发在什么地方啊,寄给别人在GTER的油箱里吗?

14. Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
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        The university is one place to teach the students what to study and how to study. One major form of doing so is varieties of classes prepared by the university educate system. While some people believe that students should have the rights and freedom to decide whether to go to the courses, I hold the opposite view. In my opinion, it should be a university rule that students have to go to each class they have on their schedule. Furthermore, if they are caught absent too much, the school has to rethink about rewarding them the degrees.
        To begin with, the people who attend universities are normally young people about 20 years old. They have unbelievable passions and also make unbelievable mistakes. The universities usually assign the students different kinds of courses in order to teach them various abilities and knowledge they need. It is understandable that some of the kids may not like one or more of these courses such as quantum physics or some kind of philosophy courses. What would they do if they were not required to go to classes? They would skip the classes and refuse to look at even only one page of the book. It is not likely that they would pick up one of those obscured masterpieces and read them while they hate them. However if they went to the classes, the professors may be able to express the ideas in a more understandable way and inspire their great passions of learning.
        Furthermore, there are a lot of skills and knowledge that could be quite complex to apprehend totally. If one student studies without attending the course, one may spend hours and hours on the same topic, and however tragic, this young child may end up with a false conclusion without being instructed. But if this young student was required to take the classes, things could be just the different. The professor could point out the shortcut for him or her in the field of science, and if this he or she has some questions still, the professor is right there waiting for a discussion.
        However, I am not arguing that requiring the students to attend the classes is right and not requiring is wrong. This is not a black and white situation. I admit that there are some geniuses who need not go to all the classes. I also admit that going to the class is only small portion of the ways to learn things. But to think on behalf the most ordinary college students, be required to go to classes would definitely work out better for their future development.
        To sum up, university students have to face so many temptations that they may not be able to restrain themselves when needed. Therefore, the school policy could help them out at this very moment of life. Requiring the students to attend courses can be a helpful force and restriction during their school life.  


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发表于 2006-1-1 18:40:25 |只看该作者
对哈,可以先占位置的~~
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发表于 2006-1-1 18:41:32 |只看该作者
占楼!今晚写两篇。另一篇是太傻TWE练笔53期哈~~两边都练习

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发表于 2006-1-1 19:02:38 |只看该作者
占个位子,赶快写呀~~~

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发表于 2006-1-1 19:13:59 |只看该作者
第一次来,这也是我的第一篇TWE,花了很长时间,请大家多多指教.
Nowadays, with the development of economy and society in China, more and more young people choose to enter university for further education. In the universities, there is a long term debate on whether university students should be required to attend classed or they should be optional to go to classes. The results to this argument differ from people to people. Personally, I think, due to my daily experience and observation, it is a more advisable choice to permit the students to determine which classes they attend or not.

Firstly, the students in the universities have the ability to decide their own issues and be responsible for results from their decision. The age of the most universities students is above 18 years old, thus they should be considered as adults. All of them have experienced some great decisions in their life like choosing universities and had primary knowledge on our society. Everyone has known the purpose why he or she enters universities and they also should be aware of how they should do in order to achieve their goals. It seems to be no necessary to require students to attend classes imperatively. For example, in our university, there is no mandatory rule for students to go to classes, however, almost no student fail to pass the final exams because they distinctly know how to deal with their study and entertainment and are responsible for their future.

Secondly, due to the development of the computer and Internet, university students are able to access amounts of information and reference materials about their majors in their computers. One can type key words that he or she want to know in the search engine, in several seconds or shorter, and there would be a majority of information according to the desire, including all the subjects in our society. Thus, it is not necessary for students to attend the lectures in the classroom. They could arrange their own schedules according with their paces and inclinations.

To sum, I think university students should not be required to attend the classes because not only they have the ability to determine their own businesses and be responsible for their own behavior, but also the progress in technology make it possible that students could attain various information and knowledge in dorms rather than taking classes in conventional classroom.

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发表于 2006-1-1 19:33:47 |只看该作者
明天早上写!模考用

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发表于 2006-1-1 22:00:16 |只看该作者
占位占位 最近都没怎么花心思在TWE上,得好好努力!!
上一期都没参加 这期要好好写咯~~

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发表于 2006-1-1 23:31:34 |只看该作者
这次的话题感觉顺手些,是我写的最快的一次了,不过观点上估计就比较落后了.用词也不是太斟酌(几乎全是大白话了||||),大家来拍吧!

As we all know that, the most important responsibility of university students is to pursue their studies to extend their abilities. In most cases, this would mean they should have the correct attitude and habits. While some people believe that going to class should be optional. I maintain the point that attending class is one of the essentials. The reasons are as follows.

Nowadays, there are too many distractions around college students: computer games, fascinating balls, or even numerous kinds of programmes. With all optional courses, maybe some students would lose their goals. Attending class is the most efficient way to help them to concentrate on their studies. Meanwhile, students who attend classes would have the opportunities to communicate with teachers, who would give some more guidelines to individuals, or help the students solve problems in time. That would be quite a good method to improve students’ course study.

Moreover, attending class means one can have more interaction with his/her classmates. Group’s wisdom always outweighs individual’s. For instance, if one have an idea that may solve the problem, and may not. On the other hand, a group of ten will have a collection of ten ideas. Obviously, these ten ideas would not only work the problem out, but may also have different solutions as selections to find the most valuable one. Attending class provides students chances of cooperation. That will benefit them a lot in the long run.

Last but not the least, as far as students are concerned, just like study is their main task, attending class should be their responsibility. Try to imagine a university of all the students having totally self-controlled courses and schedules, what a state of disorder would be! Without some extent of discipline, universities would have trouble with management.

Although universities are responsible to train their students to have the abilities of self-study, attending class is still the best way for students to attain knowledge, communicate with others and discipline themselves, that would lead them to better development.

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发表于 2006-1-2 00:03:48 |只看该作者
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发表于 2006-1-2 03:08:00 |只看该作者
占了
有一天,我梦见自己在考试,结果醒来一看真的在考试…

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发表于 2006-1-2 08:57:07 |只看该作者

我也发一篇:P

14. Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes.  
Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do  
You agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.


Generally speaking, most of university students already have the idea of what kind of knowledge they are looking for. They are active learners and thinkers rather than just absorb knowledge without intention. However, I still believe that university students should be required to attend classes though they know how to choose.

Classes students think to be useless or just boring may be really necessary for their further study. Universities usually have their every course well designed and fully planned. Before a professor standing on the platform, too much research could have been done to define the scope, choose the slides, prepare for the handout and design the assignment and so on. All these preparations serve for a better understanding or potential help for the students in the class. And the thing is you never know what you are going to get until you take the class.

Actually, sometimes to say the classes are worthless is just an excuse for skipping class. In that case, requiring them to attend the class is kind of helping students focus on their study and protect them from addicting to games or other kind of entertainment. Obviously, we will have more fun with games comparing with classes. Study might be an interesting work but the tedious process always makes people give up. Therefore when classes are optional, properly students will spend their precious time on entertainment. After all, not every student will be so thirsty to knowledge that he or she has the insistence to attend all the class spontaneously.


In conclusion, university student should be required to attend classes though they are mature enough to take responsible for their choice. They will benefit from the action in long term though they think it is useless now.

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