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TWE,第三篇,大家有时间的话帮我改改:)谢谢 [复制链接]

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选择朋友,可靠重要还是幽默,风趣重要?
Friend, the person who always stands on your side saving out of plight,shares with you the happiness and sadiness, provides you with steady supporting and the alike,plays a so important part in everyone’s life that no one can ignore him or her.People always argue that what kind of characteristic of a friend should be appreciated.I would miss anything but the reliability.
  
Why I make such a decision?A friend of mine who was never rejiected by others because he acted as the very perfect company with intelligence and humor that you desire,cheated me in an important interview for a company that both of us expected to work in by hiding the notice letter.If you have the same experience as me ,you will agree with my opinion.In fact ,this example is not rare for most people .Basic to maintain a pleasilu and profound relationships with your friends is realiability.Just imagine that, how do you  make a friend with someone who you can not trust?Only given the requisite of trust reliability,friendship can bring you a enjoyment and be developed to a more profound degree.
   
I do not deny intelligence and humor as a friend’s good qualities.It is obvious that the experience will be more comfortable and interesting with a friend has such characteristics.But they are not enough for a friend of yours,especially a true friend,the one you can truse under any situation.

In a conclusion, I think reliability is the first important quality a friend should have since friendship need trust to cultivate.I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose a reliable friend as my final choice.
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比较着急,作文比较差,该考试了,各位能不能帮我改一下呢

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