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Issue49  第14篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：61分0秒     509 words
从2006年0月31日14时57分到2006年0月31日15时61分
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Imaginative works such as novels, plays, films, fairy tales, and legends present a more accurate and meaningful picture of human experience than do factual accounts. Because the creators of fiction shape and focus reality rather than report on it literally, their creations have a more lasting significance.
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Does imaginative works like novels or plays better express accurate and meaningful human experience than factual does and have more lasting significance? I concede that those works plays a more important under certain circumstance than factual does, however, they are not always better.

Admittedly, works like novels, plays and films, especially novels, plays a significant role in representing the present sociey.It is decided by the form of those works. Understandably, every one tends to accept a conversation which expresses one's dissatisfaction to a certain society than a long paragraph of boring statement. The human experience is formed from us, the novels and films are doing works like represent certain situations where the experiences come from. Based on it, the works can express more accurate and meaningful picture is no longer surprising.

Consider, for example, Balzac's human comedy has well expressed the problematic French society at the 18th century. The novel revealed those problems by Old Grande’s greedy, by Uncle Julian’s sadness life in a boat and so for. These vivid characters were based on the real society in France, but the novel enable us experience the society again by conversations, by perfect description which factual which only contains statistic, boring statement can't achieve.

Yet, we also accept the idea that art is based on life, but beyond life. No one can deny that in plays, films there exist a certain part-big or small- which is undoubtful literally. Especially the plays and films in recent years. Is Spiderman representing more accurately the real situation in our present society than the record in police department does? This kind of situation reveals the inside hope of modern people of being a hero and the human wish to become perfect, but the film is not the reality.

But we cannot deny that not all kinds of such works are more accurate than factual. For example, we cannot assert that the Greek legend is shape and focus reality. These kinds of works express the human’s pursues: intelligence, power, bravery and also express what the human dislike: greedy, fear. There imaginative work is a good work to enable human to understand ourselves, to know the nature of human, they are meaningful. But the reason why they have a more lasting significance is not they are more realistic than literally, it's the form of art, which give human the sense of beauty that make them ever lasting. We cannot explain the history based on certain legends because they are pure imaginary effort that human want to better understand ourselves, there are no accuracy in such works, because they have different function with factual.

In sum, the exact function that all kinds of imaginative works have is different from each other. There have certain kinds of novels and plays which vividly and accurately express the exact situation in a certain period than factual does. But as for legends, fairy tales, the conclusion might be unfairly. After all, imaginative works are based on the author's imagination, even if the author's aim is to reflect the reality.




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Issue49  第14篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
------摘要------
作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：61分0秒     509 words
从2006年0月31日14时57分到2006年0月31日15时61分
------题目------
Imaginative works such as novels, plays, films, fairy tales, and legends present a more accurate and meaningful picture of human experience than do factual accounts. Because the creators of fiction shape and focus reality rather than report on it literally, their creations have a more lasting significance.
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Does imaginative works like novels or plays better express accurate and meaningful human experience than factual does and have more lasting significance? I concede that those works plays a more important under certain circumstance than factual does（than factual does under certain circumstance） , however, they are not always better（这个句子太随意了）.

Admittedly, works like novels, plays and films, especially novels, plays（s去掉） a significant role in representing the present sociey.It is decided by the form of those works. Understandably, every one tends to accept a conversation（这个词那冒出来的？） which expresses one's dissatisfaction （about）to a certain society than a long paragraph of boring statement. The human experience is formed from us, the novels and films are doing works like represent certain situations where the experiences come from. Based on it, the（fact that） works can express more accurate and meaningful picture is no longer surprising. 一些语句很混乱

Consider, for example, Balzac's human comedy has well expressed the problematic French society at the 18th century. The novel revealed those problems by Old Grande’s greedy, by Uncle Julian’s sadness life in a boat and so for. These vivid characters were based on the real society in France, but the novel enable us experience the society again by conversations, by perfect description which factual which only contains statistic, boring statement can't achieve. 这个跟第二段和为1,到底是法语专业的balzac用的好

Yet（however）, we also accept the idea that art is based on life, but（and） beyond life. No one can deny that in plays, films， there exist a certain part-big or small- which is undoubtful（undoubted） literally. Especially the plays and films in recent years（这个句子放在flims后面）. Is Spiderman representing more accurately the real situation in our present society than the record in police department does?（这个反问句好） This kind of situation reveals the inside hope of modern people of being a hero and the human wish to become perfect, but the film is not the reality.

But we cannot deny that not all kinds of such works are more accurate than factual. For example, we cannot assert that the Greek legend is shape and focus reality. These kinds of works express the human’s pursues（pursuits）: intelligence, power, bravery and also express what the human dislike: greedy, fear. There imaginative work is a good work to enable human to understand ourselves, to know the nature of human, they are meaningful. But the reason why they have a more lasting significance is not they are more realistic than literally（这是什么）, it's the form of art, which give human the sense of beauty that make them ever lasting.（them指什么？） We cannot explain why the history based on certain legends because they are pure imaginary effort that human want to better understand ourselves, there are no accuracy in such works, because they have different function with factual.

In sum, the exact function that all kinds of imaginative works have is different from each other. There have certain kinds of novels and plays which vividly and accurately express the exact situation in a certain period than factual does. But as for legends, fairy tales, the conclusion might be unfairly. After all, imaginative works are based on the author's imagination, even if the author's aim is to reflect the reality.
提纲没有列，句法错误很多，语言平淡。例子列的不错,但论证显然单薄