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The speaker asserts that it(it 没有指代看看也不是强调句) is value (value是名词valuable)only to the aspect that it is correlative to our daily lives by means of studying history. However, in my views, I am not completely disagreeing(进行时??) with the issue, for one reason, study of history conduces to solve current problems in the society, which is related with people's life. For another aspect, similar, its study is value to the potential problems in the future.
Admittedly, the value of studying history is embodied on all-side aspects in people' daily lives, which may be involve dressing, diet, lodging, and traffic. To some extent, the study of history means studying history knowledge. Without history knowledge, it will be hard to imagine for the human society. In order to better solve current problems, which is always related with our daily lives, people usually search the answers from history. For example, study of art may raise people's dressing taste; study of nutrition may alter our diet structure; study of architecture may promote people's resident environment; study of technology can enable people to be more convenient whether we are for travel or for business. (排比例子不错但是也要强调出这些是通过历史中的architecture...研究得出的吧)In a word, it is more precisely to say it is the knowledge that alters our lives. As the famous British Bacon once said (and I paraphrased), History makes man wise." Consequently, study and development of history knowledge influence people's daily lives.
What' more, the study of history has value on establishing future policy, which has a powerful reference. Take political fields for example, to study its past will be helpful to the stability and security of the nation, and therefore it is no doubt to guarantee the nation's long-term purpose to be come true. In addition, we can learn lesson through history and avoid making mistakes again. President Nixon' Water Gate will be an instructive example that prevent the gerent from abusing his or her power. Another illustrating example involves the relationship between China and Japan, it is very important to avoid the past unhappy history occurring again and therefore, in order to the people's benefits of two countries, the two country history inevitably become crucial factor to establish the diplomacy policy. Therefore, the study of history plays a vital role in working out the future course.(对于中日关系我觉得不是避免类似事情发生 而是日本这个国家对事情是否发生的态度问题 日本根本不改过 我觉得还是举德国比较好)
As a matter of fact, whether now or future, the study of history will be an effective and significant job to the human society. When it comes to history, it can not only depend on history itself to study history.(啥意思呢不靠历史自己去研究?? 历史本来就是后人研究的阿) Only through developmental, variable, and dialectic views can the true value of history be embodied, only so, we can truly regard history as a mirror and impel the whole society to a splendid position at length. (这段观点不错 看提纲才明白的 但是你这段也太不充分了吧 )
All in all, the value of history is embodied not only the current people's daily lives but also the potential social problems in the future. No matter now or future, as the proverb said," History is a mirror." By the mirror, I believe that the people's lives in the future will be more glorious and splendid.
还有最后一点阿 我听了孙远的网络课堂 他说gre 作文是以复杂句为主的 你可以变化一下 |
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