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感觉这个issue和issue7很相似,所以还是按照和上次相似的思路写的,结果没上次写的废话多一些,没想到字数会这么少。。。不过第一次用pp3写,写得我好紧张,最后差点没把尾结了
Issue38: 389 words  60 minutes
In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books.

With the speedy development of technology, television has become a popular and useful device in our daily life. Although I concede that reading books may not be as important as it was in the age with no television, I do not reach an agreement that people can learn as much by watching television as by reading books.

The popularity of the television is because of its advantages. Television can give us a vivid description of what we want to know in a visible way and satisfy our vision feelings. For example, we can get the exact pictures of a beautiful view of the sun set, the eruption of a volcano, the amazing spots of the sea bed, and the collision between comets and Jupiter. Lifesome images can be shown by in televisions and can learn knowledge from them as if we learn from the real circumstances. In schools, sometimes teachers use televisions to give the students the precise operations of experiments.

However, although knowledge in aspect of views and sounds can be shown by television, that of psychological aspect can not. What the television shows is just the superficial phenomena with some interpret in form of sounds but what the phenomena's deep signification can not be expressed easily. Take movies for example. After we watched a movie, we can tell what happened in the movie and how the characters performed, but we can never express exactly what the characters were thinking in a certain pot. And this is the fatal disadvantage of televisions which luckily reading books can give a good compensation.

Reading books has been a tradition way we learn knowledge since we invented books. The authors often put their thoughts in their books and when we read them, we can extract the authors' spirit into our own mind and enrich our soles. In this point, television can not surpass the power of books. Nevertheless, albeit books have profuse words and sentences, they still seem weak before televisions when describing the real world.

In sum, watching televisions and reading books have their own advantages and disadvantages respectively. Watching televisions can give us a vivid image of the surface of the knowledge while reading books can leave us the profound meanings of spirits. If we can use the two kinds of learning methods properly, we can better improve ourselves.
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发表于 2006-2-16 22:02:04 |只看该作者
In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books. (开头是不是太简洁了,我觉得在润色一下)
With the speedy development of technology, television has become a popular and useful device in our daily life. Although I concede that reading books may not be as important as it was in the age with no without 就好了 television, I do not reach an agreement that people can learn as much by watching television as by reading books.(前面两段合起来不就好了??你觉得呢?)
The popularity of the television is because of its advantages. Television can give us a vivid description of what we want to know in a visible way and satisfy our vision feelings. 有些中国化的表达了 For example, we can get the exact pictures of a beautiful view of the sun set, the eruption of a volcano, the amazing spots of the sea bed, and the collision between comets and Jupiter. Lifesome images can be shown by in televisions and can learn knowledge from them as if we learn from the real circumstances. In schools, sometimes teachers use televisions to give the students the precise operations of experiments 我建议最后一句可以展开写.

However, although knowledge in aspect of views and sounds can be shown by television, that of psychological aspect can not(是说心理活动吗??). What the television shows is just the superficial phenomena with some interpret in form of sounds but what the phenomena's deep signification can not be expressed easily. Take movies for example. After we watched a movie, we can tell what happened in the movie and how the characters performed, but we can never express exactly what the characters were thinking in a certain pot. And this is the fatal disadvantage of televisions which luckily reading books can give a good compensation.

Reading books has been a tradition way we learn knowledge since we invented books. The authors often put their thoughts in their books and when we read them, we can extract the authors' spirit into our own mind and enrich our soles. In this point, television can not surpass the power of books. Nevertheless, albeit books have profuse words and sentences, they still seem weak before televisions when describing the real world.(books 论述不够细致)

In sum, watching televisions and reading books have their own advantages and disadvantages respectively. Watching televisions can give us a vivid image of the surface of the knowledge while reading books can leave us the profound meanings of spirits. If we can use the two kinds of learning methods properly, we can better improve ourselves.

:victory:天才之梦,你要加油啦!!

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.(前面两段合起来不就好了??你觉得呢?)

你说的第一段不是我的,那是原题目。。。

天才之梦,你要加油啦!!

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发表于 2006-2-17 15:31:59 |只看该作者
With the speedy development of technology, television has become a popular and useful device in our daily life. Although I concede that reading books may not be as important as it was in the age with no television, I do not reach an agreement that people can learn as much by watching television as by reading books.

The popularity of the television is because of its advantages. Television can give us a vivid description of what we want to know in a visible way and satisfy our vision feelings. For example, we can get the exact pictures of a beautiful view of the sun set, the eruption of a volcano, the amazing spots of the sea bed, and the collision between comets and Jupiter. Lifesome images can be shown by in televisions and can learn knowledge from them as if we learn from the real circumstances. In schools, sometimes teachers use televisions to give the students the precise operations of experiments.

However, although knowledge in aspect of views and sounds can be shown by television, that of psychological aspect can not. What the television shows is just the superficial phenomena with some interpret in form of sounds but what the phenomena's deep signification can not be expressed easily. Take movies for example. After we watched a movie, we can tell what happened in the movie and how the characters performed, but we can never express exactly what the characters were thinking in a certain pot. And this is the fatal disadvantage of televisions which luckily reading books can give a good compensation.<我觉得小说在刻画人物心理方面有优势,能够清晰地表现人物的各种想法,电影方面取决于编导对于整部戏的安排,演员的演技,观众的理解能力……>

Reading books has been a tradition(al) way we learn knowledge since we invented books. The authors often put their thoughts in their books and when we read them, we can extract the authors' spirit into our own mind and enrich our soles(souls). In this point, television can not surpass the power of books. Nevertheless, albeit books have profuse words and sentences, they still seem weak before televisions when describing the real world<但却留给人们更多的想象空间不是嘛?>.

In sum, watching televisions and reading books have their own advantages and disadvantages respectively. Watching televisions can give us a vivid image of the surface of the knowledge while reading books can leave us the profound meanings of spirits. If we can use the two kinds of learning methods properly, we can better improve ourselves.

可能内容相对比较少,说服力不够吧,一般,不好也不坏。。。

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