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ISSUE 152 - "The only responsibility of corporate executives, provided they stay within the law, is to make as much money as possible for their companies."

提纲：
1．赚钱的确是经营者的首要责任
2．经营者同时还有回报社会创造社会效益的责任
3．不应该仅仅限制在法律范围之内

As long as staying within the law, is the corporate executives' only responsibility is to maximize the profit for companies? I don't think so. Making money is a fundamental aim of the executives, and creating as much social benefits as possible is also their responsibility. Furthermore, only staying in the range of law is not enough.

In the first place, the corporate executives' primary aim is earning as much profit as possible for the companies. The companies are built to earn money, without this aim, the modern society, which is pushing by the accumulation of capitals, would not develop in such a speed. The modern industry world is based on the value that making as much money as possible at lowest cost. Holding this value, the executives have to try their best to maximize profits of the corporations, otherwise, they will fail in the competitive business world. So in order to make corporate improving and keep the position of all the employees, the executives' most important responsibility is to earn profits. Of course, it could also ensure their own good lives. Making more and more money, the lives of whole corporate workers' will be better, the tax incomes of the nation will raise, the business market will be active, and the society will develop faster. Accordingly, making more economical benefits is the aim of the corporations, and the responsibility of executives.

However, although making profits is the primary purpose of executives, it does not equal to that making profits is the only goal. At the same time, making social benefits is also important for executives. Corporations’ money is not only gained by the efforts of the executives and employees, but also by the help of the whole society. Without the society's support, companies could not get so many benefits from it. Therefore, it is important for executives to return something to society. Take Bill Gates for example. Leading the biggest company of the world, Gates never forgets to create social benefits for the society. Up to now, he have donated more than 3 billion dollars to respond the world’s help. He help poor country deal with some serious diseases, support scientist to research on human bodies, fund the welfare of the nation, help improve the education, and donate to various kinds of charity groups. The rewards of such behaviors are obvious and enormous. The Microsoft may gain a better reputation, and the whole market condition may thrive in the long rung, either of which will defintely make sense for the lasting profits of Microsoft. Seeing all those mentioned above, it is clear that executives should help society to reach balanced improvement just as Gates did.

Besides the restrain of social responsibilities, the executives should also act within a range which is wider than laws. Law is merely the most basic limit of people; also, there is morality for individuals and groups to obey. As corporate executives, people should also keep a high level of morality, for they are the representatives of the companies, and the public person who noticed by ordinary people. So being honest, respect others, helping people as they could are all necessary regulations for executives. That could help the corporations and the society keep harmonious. In addition, laws are not always perfect. There are often some holes among them, since the laws could not react as soon as the newest changes of the world happen. For instance, the laws of the internet are not consummate yet, so there are a lot of behaviors which have not been regulated. And executives have the responsibility to keep away from those behaviors which could lead to unfair competing or damage to the society, even if they might bring corporations big economical benefits.

In conclusion, the economical and social benefits, which are significant factors for social development, both should be pursued by corporate executives. And those behaviors which are towards any purposes should within the limits of morality rather than basic laws.

[ 本帖最后由 iq28 于 2007-6-26 03:59 编辑 ]

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As long as staying within the law, is the corporate executives' only responsibility is to maximize the profit for companies? I don't think so. Making money is a fundamental aim of the executives, and creating as much social benefits as possible is also their responsibility. Furthermore, only staying in the range of law is not enough.
很明确的态度

In the first place, the corporate executives' primary aim is earning as much profit as possible for the companies. The companies are built to earn money, without this aim, the modern society, which is pushing by the accumulation of capitals, would not develop in such a speed. The modern industry world is based on the value that making as much money as possible at lowest cost. Holding this value, the executives have to try their best to maximize profits of the corporations, otherwise, they will fail in the competitive business world. So in order to make corporate(corporation) improving and keep the position of all the employees, the executives' most important responsibility is to earn profits. Of course, it could also ensure their own good lives. Making more and more money, the lives of whole corporate workers' will be better, the tax incomes of the nation will raise, the business market will be active, and the society will develop faster. Accordingly, making more economical benefits is the aim of the corporations, and the responsibility of executives.

In the second place, making social benefits is also important for executives. Besides making economical benefits for the society, the corporate has other responsibilities, which on the social level这个从句跟的是哪里呢？是不是少了个动词. Corporations’ money is not only gained by the efforts of the executives and employees, but also by the help of the whole society. Without the society's support, companies could not get so many benefits from it. Therefore, it is important for executives to return something to society. Take Bill Gates for example. Leading the biggest company of the world（微软是世界最大的公司？。。保险起见，还是说IT届巨头之类的比较好）, Gates never forgets to create social benefits for the society. Up to now, he have donated（has） more than 3 billion dollars to respond the world’s help. He help(helps) poor country deal with some serious diseases, support(s) scientist to research on human bodies, fund(s) the welfare of the nation, help(s) improve the education, and donate(s) to various kinds of charity groups. 这一句话动词Governments have no ability to settle all problems, so the executives should help society to reach balanced improvement just as Gates did.


Moreover, the executives should stay within a range which is wider than laws. Law is the most basic limit of people; there is also morality for individuals and groups to obey. As corporate executives, people should also keep a high level of morality, for they are the representatives of the companies, and the public person[这个说法好像也不太常见,figure who noticed by ordinary people. So being honest, respect others, helping people as they could are all necessary regulations for executives. That could help the corporations and the society keep harmonious. In addition, laws are not always perfect. There are often some holes among them, since the laws could not react as soon as the newest changes of the world happen. For instance, the laws of the internet are not consummate yet, so there are a lot of behaviors which have not been regulated. And executives have the responsibility to keep away from those behaviors which could lead to unfair competing or damage to the society, even if they might bring corporations big economical benefits.

In conclusion, the economical and social benefits, which are significant factors for social development, both should be pursued by corporate executives. And law is not the only limits of corporations.

我还有8天就考了~从来没有写过你这么多字数呢。
提纲很清楚的。
要是你有时间的话（我就是题都还没看完的那种没时间的人）可以背一些 好的短语，以免文章里面说来说去都是这几个词~~
说的不对的地方请指出~
加油~~

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As long as staying within the law, is the corporate executives' only responsibility is to maximize the profit for companies? I don't think so. Making money is a fundamental aim of the executives, and creating as much social benefits as possible is also their responsibility. Furthermore, only staying in the range of law is not enough.

In the first place, the corporate executives' primary aim is earning as much profit as possible for the companies. The companies are built to earn money, without this aim, the modern society, which is pushing by the accumulation of capitals, would not develop in such a speed. The modern industry world is based on the value that making as much money as possible at lowest cost.这句话~~:L Holding this value, the executives have to try their best to maximize profits of the corporations, otherwise, they will fail in the competitive business world. So in order to make corporate improving and keep the position of all the employees, the executives' most important responsibility is to earn profits. Of course, it could also ensure their own good lives. Making more and more money, the lives of whole corporate workers' will be better, the tax incomes of the nation will raise, the business market will be active, and the society will develop faster. Accordingly, making more economical benefits is the aim of the corporations, and the responsibility of executives.可以举例子，这方面的例子不少啊，人才战，市场战，公共关系学public relation的崛起,都可以说明商家为了获得最大利润不遗余力，表达可以更简洁而且更有力
In the second place, making social benefits is also important for executives. Besides making economical benefits for the society, the corporate has other responsibilities, which are on the social level. Corporations’ money is not only gained by the efforts of the executives and employees, but also by the help of the whole society. Without the society's support, companies could not get so many benefits from it. Therefore, it is important for executives to return something to society. Take Bill Gates for example. Leading the almost biggest company of the world, Gates never forgets to create social benefits for the society. Up to now, he have has donated more than 3 billion dollars to respond the world’s help. He help poor country deal with some serious diseases, support scientist to research on human bodies, fund the welfare of the nation, help improve the education, and donate to various kinds of charity groups. Governments have no ability to settle all problems, 这句话太绝对了so the executives should help society to reach balanced improvement just as Gates did.

Moreover, the executives should stay within a range which is wider than laws.寒，我的理解没有想到这个层面，我以为题目说的是合法的责任 Law is the most basic limit of people; there is also morality for individuals and groups to obey. As corporate executives, people should also keep a high level of morality, for they are the representatives of the companies, and the public person who noticed by ordinary people. So being honest, respect others, helping people as they could are all necessary regulations for executives. That could help the corporations and the society keep harmonious. In addition, laws are not always perfect. There are often some holes among them, since the laws could not react as soon as the newest changes of the world happen. For instance, the laws of the internet are not consummate yet, so there are a lot of behaviors which have not been regulated. And executives have the responsibility to keep away from those behaviors which could lead to unfair competing or damage to the society, even if they might bring corporations big economical benefits. 这一段论证的，与其说是总裁的责任，不如说是作为一个人最基本的责任，不过也不能算偏题，是论证的一种好方法啊
In conclusion, the economical and social benefits, which are significant factors for social development, both should be pursued by corporate executives. And law is not the only limits of corporations.
感觉这一篇例子举得不像以前那么多，其实仔细找也能找到很多的说
看过你给我改的之后，我想换一个角度，改成大正小负的写法