寄托天下
楼主: yanhuangbaby
打印 上一主题 下一主题

5T同主题写作第3期--topic7: [复制链接]

Rank: 9Rank: 9Rank: 9

声望
12
寄托币
4867
注册时间
2005-8-4
精华
7
帖子
381

Pisces双鱼座 荣誉版主

16
发表于 2006-4-19 18:23:00 |只看该作者
seat taken

使用道具 举报

Rank: 2

声望
0
寄托币
343
注册时间
2006-3-6
精华
0
帖子
2
17
发表于 2006-4-19 18:32:29 |只看该作者
赶紧拿个马扎坐下

第二篇新鲜出炉了,欢迎品尝:)
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 bert2006 于 2006-4-20 13:52 编辑 ]

使用道具 举报

Rank: 8Rank: 8

声望
0
寄托币
2777
注册时间
2004-4-4
精华
0
帖子
171
18
发表于 2006-4-19 19:18:12 |只看该作者
up

交作业啦! 请大家多指教啊,有改必回

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 susan8940 于 2006-4-20 20:10 编辑 ]

使用道具 举报

Rank: 9Rank: 9Rank: 9

声望
48
寄托币
43630
注册时间
2005-5-12
精华
15
帖子
522

Leo狮子座 荣誉版主 挑战ETS奖章

19
发表于 2006-4-19 21:04:37 |只看该作者
又来晚了..


交作业啦


http://edu.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... age%3D2&page=22

[ 本帖最后由 approach 于 2006-4-23 03:22 编辑 ]
Nobody can casually succeed, it comes from the thoroughself-control and the will.


使用道具 举报

Rank: 2

声望
0
寄托币
85
注册时间
2005-10-1
精华
0
帖子
0
20
发表于 2006-4-19 21:20:58 |只看该作者
占座  占座!

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 danielfei 于 2006-4-20 21:18 编辑 ]
dsafd

使用道具 举报

Rank: 5Rank: 5

声望
56
寄托币
12252
注册时间
2004-9-21
精华
18
帖子
16

Golden Apple

21
发表于 2006-4-19 21:30:55 |只看该作者
小于动作真快!
Mencius said,"When heaven is about to confer a great office on any man,it first exercises his mind with suffering, and his sinews and bones with toil.It exposes his body to hunger………….By all these methods, it stimulates his mind, consolidates his character, and increases his efficiency".

使用道具 举报

pirate_sql 该用户已被删除
22
发表于 2006-4-19 22:24:02 |只看该作者
提示: 作者被禁止或删除 内容自动屏蔽

使用道具 举报

Rank: 2

声望
0
寄托币
77
注册时间
2006-3-16
精华
0
帖子
2
23
发表于 2006-4-19 22:39:54 |只看该作者
小弟我就不怕献丑了,请大家多指教:
With the development of technology, many inventions changed our life. Of the numerous innovations movies and televisions certainly influence people’s behavior both physically and psychologically.

Firstly, it is obvious that many people imitate the dress and gesture of a film star in a movie or a popular singer in the television, especially for teenagers. In recent years, Korean TV programs are favored particularly in China by both juniors and seniors. Many teenagers love the TV stars so much that they imitate their dress, speak the tone like them and even want to learn the language of Korean. That is not what I advocate, but the phenomenon is the fact we face in my country.

What is more, films and TV programs can satisfy some people’s emotional need to some degree. Though we all known that what happens in the films or TV programs is not realistic, some may be addicted to the imaginary situations and laugh and cry for the characters in the scenario. Take the housewives as an example, several years after their marriages, they may feel boring about their ordinary life. As a result, they are eager for the exciting or peculiar things which can be found in the TV programs.

Last but not the least, some new values can bring with films, especially the foreign ones. Nowadays, films from Hollywood are favored by most people all around the world. The consequence is that new values, regardless of whether they are positive or negative, are accepted by the people who are not native Americans. With the tendency of globalization, this step is accelerated by commercial trades.

In conclusion, movies and televisions are changing people’s clothes, emotional feelings and even values or cultures, which leads to the advancement of the whole world.
大家能帮忙改下吗?或者打个分吧 ? 小弟我第一次考托 不知道这篇够不够上5分啊?请高手指点!不胜感激!

[ 本帖最后由 musiclicn 于 2006-4-22 03:40 编辑 ]

使用道具 举报

Rank: 3Rank: 3

声望
0
寄托币
470
注册时间
2005-11-13
精华
0
帖子
0
24
发表于 2006-4-19 22:45:50 |只看该作者

有拍一定回啊,我急的都感冒了……

使用道具 举报

Rank: 1

声望
0
寄托币
9
注册时间
2006-1-1
精华
0
帖子
0
25
发表于 2006-4-19 23:09:33 |只看该作者
先占位

使用道具 举报

Rank: 3Rank: 3

声望
0
寄托币
921
注册时间
2005-1-20
精华
2
帖子
2
26
发表于 2006-4-19 23:13:43 |只看该作者
wait for me , coming tomorrow
坚持,追我所求

赐我长袖,我必善舞

使用道具 举报

Rank: 1

声望
0
寄托币
15
注册时间
2005-3-27
精华
0
帖子
0
27
发表于 2006-4-19 23:35:25 |只看该作者
抢个位子  文章即刻补上  欢迎大家给予指教

使用道具 举报

Rank: 2

声望
0
寄托币
69
注册时间
2006-1-28
精华
0
帖子
1
28
发表于 2006-4-20 00:08:00 |只看该作者
大家速度好快,先占位,明天交作业:)

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

交作业,有拍必回

[ 本帖最后由 ishida1981 于 2006-4-21 23:44 编辑 ]

使用道具 举报

Rank: 3Rank: 3

声望
0
寄托币
519
注册时间
2006-2-8
精华
0
帖子
1
29
发表于 2006-4-20 00:09:46 |只看该作者
感觉很不好写内……
草鸟文章~大家拍吧~
http://edu.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=449686&extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 ben26102 于 2006-4-20 17:21 编辑 ]

使用道具 举报

Rank: 4

声望
0
寄托币
1022
注册时间
2005-10-4
精华
0
帖子
1
30
发表于 2006-4-20 08:24:30 |只看该作者
交作业!快来拍啊

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 xinxinw 于 2006-4-21 23:17 编辑 ]

使用道具 举报

RE: 5T同主题写作第3期--topic7: [修改]

问答
Offer
投票
面经
最新
精华
转发
转发该帖子
5T同主题写作第3期--topic7:
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-449084-1-1.html
复制链接
发送
回顶部