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发表于 2006-4-20 12:01:05 |只看该作者
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发表于 2006-4-20 17:04:04 |只看该作者
交作业,请大家多多指教:)

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发表于 2006-4-20 17:05:44 |只看该作者
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限时却让我想痛哭的一篇,自己修改了,才像个样,好可怕啊

大家看看,有拍必回。

[ 本帖最后由 allison 于 2006-4-20 17:11 编辑 ]
坚持,追我所求

赐我长袖,我必善舞

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发表于 2006-4-20 17:43:25 |只看该作者

my section-go!!!

Whether movie or television do influence people’s behavior is becoming a hot issue in society. Although I am not titled to give the correct judgment, I would say it depend on how much you watch them. However, movies or television more or less influence people’s behavior.   
       As the portions of the mass media, it does not only transmit the information but also infuse its internal implication to people’s brain. Meanwhile the reception of the information are processing new signal as a feedback. And your nerve centre will response for the procedure. Just take the violent program for example, it is indeed corrupting the senses of children who read or watch them by any way. Because of the lack of law knowledge induce the youth to the subsequent crime deed. They are so naïve that they can not get the criterion of whether you are granted to do this or not. There always exists some adverse factions in the movie or television programs and they always appears to be cool or handsome which attracts youth a lot. They begin to imitate their performance and make it into practice. I just heard from a awesome news in ZheJiang. Five nonages encase a girl and toss it to the QianTang river after they murder her and cut the corpse into pieces. Their behaviors truly frighten me a lot.
       Affection issue also plays an another role in the people’s daily life. It once distressed many souls of the sensitive people. Their original ways of dealing with affection are distorted by the absorbing in the way of the actor or actress performed in the script. In addition to the situation, they did even more impractical. They have lost their patient to get well with their lover. But the sequence is always leading to the negative effect. The tragedy is always born to the reckless people.
       There are also advantages of the transmitting of the mass media. People can get the instant news from television. They can understand the status of the society and the development of his country. Watching TV also takes place of walking around the place u do not really want to appear but eager to understand it. You can take the advantage of the live sport TV show which you can not get to the scene.
It saves your time and energy even more money. Why do not this!!!
       To sum these points above, I consider the foremost aspect is that we should hold the degree of the time we spend on the watching. Properly watching is benefit for your healthy and help to widen your vision scale.

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发表于 2006-4-20 17:59:08 |只看该作者
我的,第一次发,好紧张呀。

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发表于 2006-4-20 18:02:06 |只看该作者
怎么把连接搞上去啊

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发表于 2006-4-20 22:44:52 |只看该作者

我的,刚修改过的..多提意见

Topic 7 How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer
Apr. 19

It goes without saying that movies and television have a great impact on people’s behavior. They are a source of knowledge and information and can be used to affect personal view toward the life and world (This paragraph works well. But you can combine the functions of movies and television into two categories: knowledge/information and influence.)

As perhaps the most popular media, movies and television give us a broad window on the world. News programs allow us to learn the events all over the world without us being there. Movies and television can provide us the knowledge of local customs, the development condition and diversity of cultures and races of our planet. Many well-made documentary films and television programs provide vivid descriptions and explanations of mystery animal world and outer space and allow us to explore the unknown realm.

Movies and television can also be used as a powerful tool to influence people’s thinking and behavior. A touching movie and TV story series may be always rooted our mind with the unforgettable character image. Such kind of character is often intentionally used to shape a hero or a perfect “person”. Sometimes the character’s behavior and thoughts can be used to create socially desirable moral and behavior standard. Watching live music concert or an art exhibit on TV notably reduces our stress and makes us get a relaxation. It also helps us to develop our own aesthetic criteria and enables us to identify which kind of art forms is our favorite.


The impact of movies and television can be negative. Watching too much movies and television makes us less physically active. Some unhealthy and violent programs cause some people imitate the character on the screen committing crime, even suicide. But such negative impact can be contained by advocating high-quality programs and discouraging excessive watching.
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发表于 2006-4-21 01:08:44 |只看该作者
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已经跟我原来写得有所出入了。。。

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发表于 2006-4-21 10:23:16 |只看该作者
呜呜,~~现在作文还是写得很烂,一点水平都没有
怎么办呢?
憋了好长时间,写得象小学生一样

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发表于 2006-4-21 12:00:32 |只看该作者
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相互拍砖吧,这么一来一去,相互的水平都提高了

时间还是用的长了点,构思7分钟,写作44分钟

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