5T同主题写作第3期--topic7:

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请大家多多批评！！

king820606UID: 166847

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看过其他大牛的高作以后，小可实在是相形见绌。但迫于无奈，还是望各位高手指正哦。

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麻烦大家提出宝贵的意见。大家的任何一点小建议对我来说，都是宝贵的参考意见。拜托大家了。

对了，有些同学是设定一个链接地址，比如
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什么的，让大家去另外一个页面看作文。大大方便了大家看作文。
请问这个链接地址和页面是怎么设置的呢？谢谢



When it comes to the effects and influence that television and movies exert on people’s behaviors, some people hold the viewpoints that television and movies have brought too much passive negative influence on people, such as causing people to spend so much time on TV that there’s insufficient communication among people and children become much more apt to violence. However, that’s only part of the story. Another far more important effect TV brought is highly positive. Several factors are presented in the following.
   The principle positive factor lies in that TV provides a great deal of opportunities and chances for people to broaden their view sights, increase their knowledge and upgrade their abilities and capacities. As you know, there are many meaningful programs in the aspects of science, technology, education, health, geology and life. People can learn a lot from them. Furthermore, as many programs are so vivid in images, processes and details that they make people be able to learn a great deal in a short period of time.
  Second, as there are more and more programs involving families and groups, they result in many chances for families and friends to participate in certain programs cooperatively, which help increase the communication among families and friends. An instance is that the “Lucy 52” and “Happy Dictionary” in CCTV in China, which require families and friends to cooperate effectively in the process.
   In summary, although TV and movies have caused some negative results, the positive ones far outweigh the former ones. The key point lie in that we should make a proper use of TV and movies.

king820606UID: 166847

上次发错连接了
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u571UID: 2175894

唉，前几天没空，来晚了。就算自己补加 的一个任务吧。。。:):)

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[ 本帖最后由 u571 于 2006-4-24 13:08 编辑 ]

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我的 比较迟 希望大家看看 也希望斑竹看看 谢谢

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交作业了，交的晚请版主见谅。
大家帮忙拍砖啊。

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请帮忙！ 如有需要，我一定帮您的忙。:)