第3期写作，大家来拍啊，谢了

麦芒UID: 2190630

Nowadays,movies and television are the most common entertainments in people's daily life.So they influence people's behavior violently, mainly , in the following ways: advertisements,giving us views of new life styles and tales,which are either true or fictional.
  First,the most important one is advertisement.There are always numerous advertisements on television ,which are about all kinds of goods.The advertisements often use so intriguing and persuasive words to introduce the articles that we can not help having a try.For example,when you see someone in advertisement wears a pair of excellent shoes,do you want to buy one ?Moreover the advertisement always lead the comsumption fashion .
  In addition,movies and television also impact our behavior through showing us pictures of different parterns of life all over the world.We are often so curious about fresh things and sometimes we will try them on,such as forigen manners ,food habits and even decorations of house.
  Furthermore,the story displayed by television or movie may also affect our attitude towards life and other things.Just for instance,if a true love story is played on and it is so moving and profound,I believe that ,there is no doubt,all of us will appreciate it and hope to enjoy such a piece of true love oneday,like the movie.
  Generally speaking ,movies and television have changed our life completely during the last century.Obviously, advertisements,informations of distinguished life parterns and tales are the three specific means.In my opinion movies and television may impact our behavior for another century.

susan8940UID: 160449

结构没问题，句子表达还需修炼，彼此，加油！：）

mine:
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timboyUID: 193944

结构很清晰，句子和词汇变化欠缺一些
ps：有时间帮忙看看我的作文
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