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发表于 2006-5-31 22:59:08 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

在本版受益两多，把自己的一些感想贴出来，给后来者有点东西

我原专业国际经济与贸易，录取专业经济学，全奖，第一次签证，签证前一个星期开始准备，出来第一稿，自以为很强的样子，给了高手看，结果……，以下是我的设计和高手(非中介)的分析，主要是批判。
(1)What will you study in the United States?
I will pursue Ph.D. degree in***in University **. We use economic, legal and other method to analyze the issue. －－－－第一句不错，第二局及格，应该更生动形象具体的说，而且要注意留下继续阐述的空间，万一vo一直听你称述你的专业和应用，答不出来就怀疑你背答案。专业，专业方向，专业具体用途是第一句话需要说明的。

(2)I noticed your undergraduate major is International Trade and Economics. So why do you transfer?
First I am very interested in this area.－－－－兴趣一定不要放第一原因要现实的以你自己能力的发展来讲，社会经济价值的体现，社会意义
转专业的重点不是吹嘘新的专业好，而是重点说新旧的承上启下，辅以说明新的专业为何好
Second, I have participated in several projects in this field. (Would you like to see my resume?) My research field is also the *** economics. Besides, when I was interviewed by University **, the professor said he also appreciated my research on the game theory. The game theory is needed in my future projects there. It is also one of the reasons that I am offered the fellowship. (Would you like to see my papers?)－－－－－－－－太干瘪了
   为何参加那几个project，万一是浪费时间呢？
(3) What is your plan? What will you do after graduation?
I have several choices in China.－－－－只需要说plan，不要绕圈子
First I want to be a professor in universities. In the same time, I can be a consultant in the government, just like my current advisor. －－－－计划不错，不过应该是唯一不是几个选择之一 The payment is high; the job is decent and the life is stable－－－不好不要直接说收入高，理由呢？？顾问就该收入高？？？    It is my favorite choice.
Second is to be a member in the government.－－－居然人生路都不确定，难道到了美国再说，我还有一个选择，留在美国不走呢。  Today, the ** economy is booming in China－－－最好补充为何booming，一句简洁的话, but the specialists are few, so I think I have good opportunities.
The third is to enter some companies, using my knowledge in economy.
future plan忌讳复杂，所以－－－－
(4)It seems that you cherished the time, so why don't you stay in US?
So to speak, the economy in China is like a white piece of paper and it is easier to draw a more beautiful picture in this white paper, and I want to be the first group of people. 凑合，但是不强，漏洞很多。             你一直都干巴巴的说中国这块是空白，不要讲大道理，一定要有具体东西
(5) Why do you choose this Univ.?
University of ××× is very strong in this area. I am very interested in this field and my research also matches with it. Besides, I am familiar with this university since the undergraduate year when I browsed its website for latest development in this area.  后一个原因sucks    建议看看我的选择原因，那几个

(6) Why do you like your major?
I want to be a professional in this area, in the same time I will be also a consultant in the government. Meanwhile, the** economy is booming in China, and the specialists in this area are few. If I come back with advanced knowledge in USA and Ph.D. degree in such good university as **, my future is promising. Personally,             要从社会，经济等方面阐述，必须是逻辑紧密的
高手说问题很大，巨受打击，发奋修改，从而有了第二稿，
(1)What will you study in the United States?
I will pursue my Ph.D. degree in **  in University **. We use economic method to analyze the issue. For example,举例我这个方向的经济学的用途. 好些了

(2)I noticed your undergraduate major is International Trade and Economics. So why do you transfer?
Strictly speaking, this is not a transfer. In fact what I will do is essentially the same thing. I just become more specialized. In my current university, we analyze the **（my major） in International Economics and Trade, such as……. That is we combine the ** Economics with International Economics. So all my papers are related to ** Economics. Then I can better fulfill my career goal in China. (到这里是不是该停一下,让VO问我的职业规划，否则这个问题的回答就太长了?)I want to be a specialist in universities or institutions in China and be the first group of professors to offer the Ph.D. degree in ** Economics in China. At the same time, after years' hard work, I want to be the consultant in the government. By pursuing the Ph.D. degree in** in university, it is easier to fulfill it. After all, U of ** is one of the best in ** and my future advisor, the director of my program, Dr. ** is very famous in this area.  总体提高了需要简练点和更开门见山点
(3) What is your plan? What will you do after graduation?
I want to be a specialist in ** Economics in universities or institutions in China. I want to be the first group of professors who offer the Ph.D. degree in ** Economics. At the same time, after years' hard work, I want to be the consultant in the government. By pursuing the Ph.D. degree in** in **, it is easier to fulfill it. After all, U of** is one of the best in ** and my future advisor, the director of my program, Dr.** is very famous in **. 好多了
(5) Why do you like your major?
I want to be a professional in this area and offer the first Ph.D. degree in ** Economics in China. At the same time I want to be a consultant in the government. Meanwhile, the economy is booming in China, and the specialists in this area are few. No Ph.D. degree in** Economics in China means there are not enough intelligent involving it. 不够直接开门见山
我又修改了一稿，但是和第二稿相比只是局部的修改，就不贴了。下边是VO的问题：
你是第一次去美国吗？Yes
你的offer letter. Here you are.
然后通过了，呵呵，自己很吃惊，问他：你的意思是我过了？他说是的，于是就去办邮寄。
可能大家看到只有两个问题，准备这么多不值得，但是他在问我offer letter的时候我，我准备了5个A4的袋子，3篇论文原件，一时找不到offer letter就把袋子全拿出来找，他一看准备了那么多，就不值得问什么了，所以充分准备是很有必要的。另外看到版上有很多人说如果材料不够，就往里边塞纸，我觉得这个办法很无耻：难道我们都忘了由于我们自己的不诚信，导致GRE只能笔考，由于我们自己的不诚信，导致推荐信都没有作用吗？所以建议大家准备多少就准备多少，VO也不是傻子，如果让他们看出来，以后的签证者该怎么办，把材料一个一个袋子的倒出来？
最后说一下我所知道的情况：我们对有3个学生签证，另外两个都是返签，所以当VO拒了两个商务的以后只有我在担惊受怕，然后VO有拒了一个女孩探亲，但放了她的奶奶（返签），放了一个返签商务，然后是我。其他队我知道有一个02年被拒的CS，今天纠缠了很长时间后过，其他的不清楚。

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