issue38 [加州阳光]第二次作业

盈盈飞飞UID: 2217743

In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books.
电视时代的读书已经不像以前那么重要了。人们通过看电视学到的和他们读书所能学到的一样多。


读书的优点：方便，快捷，不受节目安排的限制，选择的余地大，体会细致的描写，很多不能或者还没有拍成电视，可以收藏
     缺点：抽象，枯燥，记忆效果不好，买书花钱多，有时间延搁
电视的优点：直观，形象，生动。记忆深刻，花钱少，买下一个台可以看多有的节目，实时性
     缺点：受限，电视对原著的篡改，加入导演，演员，编剧的个人感情，不能随时随地，受电的限制

论点：电视时代读书的地位依然不可动摇，读书跟电视结合起来
1，        读书不可替代的有点
2，        电视并不能学到跟读书一样多
3，        电视也是有优势的
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Throughout the human history of learning, reading books is an indispensable element not only in the past days but also at present. However, with the rapid development of television, it seems that people can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books. Notwithstanding many people hold this opinion, personal experience tells me that reading books still have its vigorous life in the process of pursuing knowledge.

Why reading books is important in former times? From my perspective, its advantages can be sorted in there aspects which are convenience, abundance and duplication. To begin with, convenience is an innate advantage of book as it is light and small to carry. In campus, the scene that a student, carry one or more books, make speed with his or her journey can be seen at all time and all places. As for me, I have the habit of carrying at least one book with me wherever I go. Thus, books are surely convenient for people to gain knowledge. Secondly, books are resourceful pools of every field of research. Since the invention of paper and pens, our forbears began to write down significant things happened in their daily life, which might be called the embryo of a book. As time went by, books, serving as a remarkable invention of human being, have formed their own structure which content with every sphere of knowledge. No one can deny that each realm is able to find its share of portion in books, physiology, sociology, psychology, zoology, philosophy and so forth. Thirdly, the way of reading books to learn knowledge provides learners with reviewing for many times. As is know to all, duplication is the indispensable way of learning, this advantage will definitely make reading books unreplaceable. In brief, reading books has its unique benefits which make this way of learning rich of vitality.

Watching television cannot supply as much knowledge as reading books. The chief problem of watching television is that it is limited by the arrangement of program. Imagine that a person has a passion of learning botany at a time, nevertheless, he or she happened to find no program of this subject at the time, what will he or she feel? Certainly be very frustrated. What’s more, if this occasion happens too frequently since every television program needs to make profit so that editors should select what to be on with cautions, a person might lose his or her interest in the subject. Moreover, there are many subject, such as mathematics, physics, philosophy which cannot be well developed into television. All of these kinds of subjects need digestion repeatedly to master. Furthermore, when it comes to novels, which seems to be the most suitable form to be developed into plays, television plays are against the author’s initial intention to some extent. A researcher must turn to original books in order to study the works. Thus, watching television could replace reading books is not a believable idea.

Admittedly, watching television has its especially advantage such as quick, vivid, animated, impressing. The subjects like biology, medicine, tourism are fit for learning with the help of watching television. Television programs show the television viewers visual pictures as well as explain abstract knowledge in a plain way. Take biology for example, when learning the fundamental mechanism of respiration, study will becomes more easy and acceptable if the learner can watch the process of the cycle.

To sum up, reading books is not only a indispensable way of learning attribute to its three unique advantages which can not be replaced by any other kinds of learning means but also it has it distinctive aspect of passing down knowledge. Although, watching television has some good quality, it will never replace the means of reading books.

leaf99UID: 2174003

Throughout the human history of learning, reading books is an indispensable element not only in the past days（去掉） but also at present. However, with the rapid development of television, it seems that people can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books. Notwithstanding many people hold this opinion, personal experience tells me that reading books still have its vigorous life in the process of pursuing knowledge.（开头不错）

Why reading books is important in former times（what is former times）? From my perspective, its advantages can be sorted in there aspects which are convenience, abundance and duplication. To begin with, convenience is an innate advantage of book as it is light and small to carry. In(On) campus, the scene that a student, carry one or more books, make speed with his or her journey can be seen at all time and all places. As for me, I have the habit of carrying at least one book with me wherever I go. Thus, books are surely convenient for people to gain knowledge. Secondly, books are resourceful pools of every field of research. Since the invention of paper and pens, our forbears began to write down significant things happened in their daily life, which might be called the embryo of a book. As time went by, books, serving as a remarkable invention of human being, have formed their own structure which content with every sphere of knowledge. No one can deny that each realm is able to find its share of portion in books, physiology, sociology, psychology, zoology, philosophy and so forth. Thirdly, the way of reading books to learn knowledge provides learners with reviewing for many times. As is known to all, duplication is the indispensable way of learning, this advantage will definitely make reading books unreplaceable. In brief, reading books has its unique benefits which make this way of learning rich of vitality.

Watching television cannot supply as much knowledge as reading books. The chief problem of watching television is that it is limited by the arrangement of programs. Imagine that a person has a passion of learning botany at a time, nevertheless, he or she happened to find no program of this subject at the time, what will he or she feel? Certainly be very frustrated. What’s more, if this occasion happens too frequently since every television program needs to make profit so that editors should select what to be on with cautions, a person might lose his or her interest in the subject. Moreover, there are many subject, such as mathematics, physics, philosophy which cannot be well developed into television. All of these kinds of subjects need digestion repeatedly to master. Furthermore, when it comes to novels, which seems to be the most suitable form to be developed into plays, television players are against the author’s initial intention to some extent. A researcher must turn to original books in order to study the works. Thus, watching television could replace reading books is not a believable idea.

Admittedly, watching television has its especially advantage such as quick, vivid, animated, impressing. The subjects like biology, medicine, tourism are fit for learning with the help of watching television. Television programs show the television viewers visual pictures as well as explain abstract knowledge in a plain way. Take biology for example, when learning the fundamental mechanism of respiration, study will becomes more easy easier and more acceptable if the learner can watch the process of the cycle.

To sum up, reading books is not only an indispensable way of learning attribute to its three unique advantages which can not be replaced by any other kinds of learning means but also it has it distinctive aspect of passing down knowledge. Although, watching television has some good quality, it will never replace the means of reading books.

总体 思路清晰 写的挺好的哦。第二部分的原因不要显得太主观吧
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[ 本帖最后由 leaf99 于 2006-6-10 11:06 编辑 ]

stone_lueUID: 2154056

Throughout the human history of learning, reading books is an indispensable element not only in the past days but also at present. However, with the rapid development of television, it seems that people can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books. Notwithstanding many people hold this opinion, personal experience tells me that reading books still have its vigorous life in the process of pursuing knowledge.(很精彩)

Why reading books is important in former times（past）? From my perspective, its advantages can be sorted in there aspects which are convenience, abundance and duplication. To begin with, convenience is an innate advantage of book as it is light and small to carry. In campus, the scene that a student, carry one or more books, make speed with his or her journey can be seen at all time and all places. As for me, I have the habit of carrying at least one book with me wherever I go. Thus, books are surely convenient for people to gain knowledge. Secondly, books are resourceful pools of every field of research. Since the invention of paper and pens, our forbears began to write down significant things happened in their daily life, which might be called the embryo of a book. As time went by, books, serving as a remarkable invention of human being, have formed their own structure which content with every sphere of knowledge. No one can deny that each realm is able to find its share of portion in books, physiology, sociology, psychology, zoology, philosophy and so forth. Thirdly, the way of reading books to learn knowledge provides learners with reviewing for many times. As is know to all, duplication is the indispensable way of learning, this advantage will definitely make reading books unreplaceable. In brief, reading books has its unique benefits which make this way of learning rich of vitality.

Watching television cannot supply as much knowledge as reading books. The chief problem of watching television is that it is limited by the arrangement of program. Imagine that a person has a passion of learning botany at a time, nevertheless, he or she happened to find no program of this subject at the time, what will he or she feel? Certainly be very frustrated. What’s more, if this occasion happens too frequently since every television program needs to make profit so that editors should select what to be on with cautions, a person might lose his or her interest in the subject. Moreover, there are many subject(s), such as mathematics, physics, philosophy which cannot be well developed into television. All of these kinds of subjects need digestion repeatedly to master. Furthermore, when it comes to novels, which seems to be the most suitable form to be developed into plays, television plays are against the author’s initial intention to some extent. A researcher must turn to original books in order to study the works. Thus, watching television could replace reading books is not a believable idea.

Admittedly, watching television has its especially advantage such as quick, vivid, animated, impressing. The subjects like biology, medicine, tourism are fit for learning with the help of watching television. Television programs show the television viewers visual pictures as well as explain abstract knowledge in a plain way. Take biology for example, when learning the fundamental mechanism of respiration, study will becomes more easy(easier) and acceptable if the learner can watch the process of the cycle.

To sum up, reading books is not only a indispensable way of learning attribute to its three unique advantages which can not be replaced by any other kinds of learning means but also it has it distinctive aspect of passing down knowledge. Although, watching television has some good quality, it will never replace the means of reading books.
开头写得很精彩，明确地表达了自己的观点；
主体部分比较充分的讨论了问题的各个方面，但在论述书的便携时引用自己是否有些冗赘和不妥。
总的来说，是一篇很精彩的文章

sandyfriendUID: 157486

Throughout the human history of learning, reading books is an indispensable element not only in the past days but also at present. However, with the rapid development of television, it seems that people can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books. Notwithstanding many people hold this opinion, personal experience tells me that reading books still have its vigorous life in the process of pursuing knowledge.

Why reading books is important in former times[in foretime]? From my perspective, its advantages can be sorted in [there? three]aspects which are convenience, abundance and duplication. To begin with, convenience is an innate advantage of book as it is light and small to carry. In campus, the scene that a student, carry one or more books; make speed with his or her journey can be seen at all time and all places. As for me, I have the habit of carrying at least one book with me wherever I go. Thus, books are surely convenient for people to gain knowledge. Secondly, books are resourceful pools of every field of research. Since the invention of paper and pens, our forbears began to write down significant things happened in their daily life, which might be called the embryo of a book. As time went by, books, serving as a remarkable invention of human being, have formed their own structure which content with every sphere of knowledge. No one can deny that each realm is able to find its share of portion in books, physiology, sociology, psychology, zoology, philosophy and so forth. Thirdly, the way of reading books to learn knowledge provides learners with reviewing for many times. As is know to all, duplication is the indispensable way of learning, this advantage will definitely make reading books [unreplaceable? irreplaceable] . In brief, reading books has its unique benefits which make this way of learning rich of vitality.

Watching television cannot supply as much knowledge as reading books. The chief problem of watching television is that it is limited by the arrangement of program. Imagine that a person has a passion of learning botany at a time, nevertheless, he or she happened to find no program of this subject at the time, what will he or she feel? Certainly be very frustrated. What’s more, if this occasion happens too frequently since every television program needs to make profit so that editors should select what to be on with cautions, a person might lose his or her interest in the subject. Moreover, there are many subjects, such as mathematics, physics, philosophy which cannot be well developed into television. All of these kinds of subjects need digestion repeatedly to master. Furthermore, when it comes to novels, which seems to be the most suitable form to be developed into plays, television plays are against the author’s initial intention to some extent. A researcher must turn to original books in order to study the works. Thus, watching television could replace reading books is not a believable idea.

Admittedly, watching television has its especially advantage such as quick, vivid, animated, impressing. The subjects like biology, medicine, tourism are fit for learning with the help of watching television. Television programs show the television viewers visual pictures as well as explain abstract knowledge in a plain way. Take biology for example, when learning the fundamental mechanism of respiration, study will becomes more easier and acceptable if the learner can watch the process of the cycle.

To sum up, reading books is not only an indispensable way of learning attributes to its three unique advantages which can not be replaced by any other kinds of learning means but also it has it distinctive aspect of passing down knowledge. Although, watching television has some good quality, it will never replace the means of reading books.

写得不错论证也很清晰，个人觉得第三段的例子不是太好，因为这里是指电视媒体，包括了电视教学，那时可以随时放的，例子可以在你后边的论证部分举，电视经常加工一些东西，不是真实的；或者，电视大部分都是形象的，具体的概括的。
总体来说不错。

kejia0422UID: 170864

Throughout the human history of learning, reading books is an indispensable element not only in the past days but also at present[不太舒服，前面说了throughout..这里又说past and nowadays]. However, with the rapid development of television, it seems that people can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books. Notwithstanding many people hold this opinion[这里不通哦], personal experience tells me that reading books still have its vigorous life in the process of pursuing knowledge.

Why reading books is important in former times? From my perspective, its advantages can be sorted in there aspects which are[用：] convenience, abundance and duplication[该是可重复性，我想是duplicability]. To begin with, convenience is an innate advantage of book as it is light and small to carry. In campus, the scene that a student, carry one or more books, make speed with his or her journey can be seen at all time and all places. As for me, I have the habit of carrying at least one book with me wherever I go. Thus, books are surely convenient for people to gain knowledge. Secondly, books are resourceful pools of every field of research. Since the invention of paper and pens, our forbears began to write down significant things happened in their daily life, which might be called the embryo of a book. As time went by, books, serving as a remarkable invention of human being, have formed their own structure which content with every sphere of knowledge. No one can deny that each realm is able to find its share of portion in books, physiology, sociology, psychology, zoology, philosophy and so forth. Thirdly, the way of reading books to learn knowledge provides learners with reviewing for many times. As is know to all, duplication is the indispensable way of learning, this advantage will definitely make reading books unreplaceable. In brief, reading books has its unique benefits which make this way of learning rich of vitality.[我不太确定，但似乎听说过也感觉一端应该论述一个意思，这样重点突出，力道还深刻，供参考]
Watching [不用watching]television cannot supply as much knowledge as reading books. The chief problem of watching television is that it is limited by the [one-way]arrangement of program. Imagine that a person has a passion of learning botany at a time, nevertheless, he or she happened to find no program of this subject at the time, what will he or she feel? Certainly be very frustrated. [感觉不要用这种设问句，英语中也挺少见这种表达方法]What’s more, if this occasion happens too frequently since every television program needs to make profit [把原因引向了利益方面]so that editors should select what to be on with cautions, a person might lose his or her interest in the subject. Moreover, there are many subject, such as mathematics, physics, philosophy which cannot be well developed into television. All of these kinds of subjects need digestion repeatedly to master. Furthermore, when it comes to novels, which seems to be the most suitable form to be developed into plays, television plays are against the author’s initial intention to some extent. A researcher must turn to original books in order to study the works. Thus, watching television could replace reading books is not a believable idea.

Admittedly, watching television has its especially[special] advantage such as quick, vivid, animated, impressing. The subjects like biology, medicine, tourism are fit for learning with the help of watching television. Television programs show the television viewers visual pictures as well as explain abstract knowledge in a plain way.[感觉是在陈述，论述的感觉似乎没有出来，要论述他在什么地方和看书不一样，怎么不一样] Take biology for example, when learning the fundamental mechanism of respiration, study will becomes more easy and acceptable if the learner can watch the process of the cycle.

To sum up, reading books is not only a indispensable way of learning attribute to its three unique advantages which can not be replaced by any other kinds of learning means but also it has it distinctive aspect of passing down knowledge. Although, watching television has some good quality, it will never replace the means of reading books.