同主题写作第二期——topic75 by june

junewindUID: 2225038

先报告下完成情况：
基本上算是按时完成的，不过没有时间检查了
打成电子版时改了一些语法和表述上的错误
因为限时，只能想到什么写什么，句式单一，用词重复之类的毛病就比较难纠正了~~
而且，要是速度再提高一些就好了~~


In universities, students should study subjects widely or deeply, this question has been hotly debated over a long period of time. As far as the students, youths just about 20 years old, are concerned, I would prefer widely study. There are many reasons to justify my inclination; I just in here illuminate a few of the most important ones.

Why students enter universities? I think the purposes are not only learning some knowledge and skills in a narrow subject for getting a job after graduate, but also grasping the spirit of the whole world and improving the ability to face a variety of circumstances. Only specializing in one field can not achieve what we require.

Secondly, with the developing of science and technology, different subject affect each other profoundly. We hardly imagine how they will develop in the future. Today we all know there is a subject called bio-chemistry, but may be in some day, the geography may take part in the development of bio-chemistry. So it is much better to get a general understanding of other subjects.

Last but not least, as young people, they may haven’t found which subject they are interested in. So taking classes in many subjects can help them take a glance of different areas. They will absorb knowledge of what they love.

Some people may argue that taking many classes many waste their time on deeply study. But they still are a lot of graduate school for whom want to study more deeply. Finding destination first can save a lot time for them, isn’t it?

From what has been discussed above, we may safety draw conclusion that university students should take classes in many subjects. He will benefit from what he learns in the whole life.

[ 本帖最后由 junewind 于 2006-7-31 11:30 编辑 ]

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In universities, students should study subjects widely or deeply, this question has been hotly debated over a long period of time.   2个分句中间需要一个and吧?


主体部分有点短,可以再把理由多阐述一下.

[ 本帖最后由 sissilei 于 2006-7-31 13:10 编辑 ]

junewindUID: 2225038

嗯
谢谢指教
就是时间有点来不及
想不了那么细~~

Iam13UID: 2116357

考试时是难免顾此失彼,尽最大努力就好:)