Issue144 [smile B] 第7次作业 请不吝赐教

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Issue144
"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."
*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
Outline
1 artist plays a key role in the inherent quality of his/her artistic work just like the producer determining the quality of his products.
2 Critic exerts his/her forces through his directional and insightful comment on art.
3 the artist and the critic can cooperate closely and effectively to create a valuable artistic work

Comparing an artistic work as a product, the artist and the critic are just like a producer and a advertiser. As for a lasting value of an art, both artist and critic are important, just as that a popular product depends on not only the producer but also the advertiser.

Undoubtedly, an artist plays a key role in the inherent quality of his/her artistic work just like the producer determining the quality of his products. With creative mind and adroit skill, it is only the artist who can create a high quality art such as a wonderful movie, a meaningful novel or an insightful painting. Steven Spielberg, the famous movie director, has created many spectacular films like the series of ' Jurassic Park ' through his special photographing and story development. This example can illustrate how important the artist is in a high quality artistic article.

Critic, who is like the advertiser to make an extensive advertisement for the product, exerts his/her forces through his directional and insightful comment on art. Often, through critics, can people acquire some common sense and individualistic characteristic of some artistic works, which is not only useful for the public to understand the given art but also important for its wide distribution. Vincent Van Gogh, for instance, is one of greatest artists, whose paintings have been widely spreaded and high evaluated in later generation through some displays in which some critics played key role to let people catch the gist of Vincent's works.  So, critics can give a meaningful introduction and direction for the publicity of artistic works.

More over, the artist and the critic can cooperate closely and effectively to create a valuable artistic work being similar to a producer and an advertiser to make a hot product. For one thing, the critic can provide some constructive advice for artist to improve his/her job, just like an advertiser give advices about the package of the product. For another thing, critic can draw people's attention effectively through the comment or even criticism of the artist. Steven Hawking, the famous artist of the cosmos, is a good example to illustrate this point. by the advice of critics, Hawking has explain his book 'A brief history of time' vividly with plenty of sketch graphs in the third edition. By doing so, his book has given many people an easy way and access to understand his abstract theory.

Just as a hot product needs not only the innovative producer but also the powerful advertiser, the lasting value of an artistic work rests with both the creative artist and the competent critic.

[ 本帖最后由 zhy5186612 于 2006-8-5 22:46 编辑 ]

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Issue144
"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."
*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
Outline
1 artist plays a key role in the inherent quality of his/her artistic work just like the producer determining the quality of his products.
2 Critic exerts his/her forces through his directional and insightful comment on art.
3 the artist and the critic can cooperate closely and effectively to create a valuable artistic work

Comparing an artistic work as a product, the artist and the critic are just like a producer and a advertiser. As for a lasting value of an art, both artist and critic are important, just as that a popular product depends on not only the producer but also the advertiser.开篇用类比很有新意！只是，advertiser不是很准起不到反馈的作用，不过我也没想到更合适的

Undoubtedly, an artist plays a key role in the inherent quality of his/her artistic work just like the producer determining the quality of his products. With creative mind and adroit skill, it is only the artist who can create a high我觉得high和lasting value还有一点距离excellent quality art such as a wonderful movie, a meaningful novel or an insightful painting. Steven Spielberg, the famous movie director, has created many spectacular films like the series of ' Jurassic Park ' through his special photographing and story development. This example can illustrate how important the artist is in a high quality artistic article. 例子说了作品的杰出，但没有体现how

Critic, who is like the advertiser to make an extensive advertisement for the product, exerts his/her forces through his directional and insightful comment on art. Often, through critics, can people acquire some common sense and individualistic characteristic我不知道what is the difference of character & characteristic能帮我解释下吗    of some artistic works, which is not only useful for the public to understand the given art but also important for its wide distribution. Vincent Van Gogh, for instance, is one of greatest artists, whose paintings have been widely spreaded and high evaluated in later generation through some displays in which some critics played key role to let people catch the gist of Vincent's works.  So, critics can give a meaningful introduction and direction for the publicity of artistic works.

More over, the artist and the critic can cooperate closely and effectively to create a valuable artistic work being similar to a producer and an advertiser to make a hot product. For one thing, the critic can provide some constructive advice for artist to improve his/her job, just like an advertiser give advices about the package of the product.package is a little different with lasting value For another thing, critic can draw people's attention effectively through the comment or even criticism of the artist. Steven Hawking, the famous artist of the cosmos, is a good example to illustrate this point. by the advice of critics, Hawking has explain his book 'A brief history of time' vividly with plenty of sketch graphs in the third edition. By doing so, his book has given many people an easy way and access to understand his abstract theory. 呵呵，霍金不知算不算艺术家闹

Just as a hot product needs not only the innovative producer but also the powerful advertiser, the lasting value of an artistic work rests with both the creative artist and the competent critic.the rhetoric is glorious
挺有闪光点的阿
我的文章写了2个小时，一限时就什么都想不起来了，郁闷

erjinmuziUID: 2143557

我觉得楼主这样类比应该不行吧，艺术家怎么可能和评论家合作呢，那不是有点蒙大众的感觉吗，生产商和广告商那就是互惠互利的嘛

zhy5186612UID: 2167373

谢谢，vitaminxixi和muzi
To：muzi，用他们的一些侧面的关系应该可以啦，其实一定程度上他们也是互惠互利的嘛
To：vitaminxixi 艺术类的我总想不出怎么写，不像你了解的比较多，所以只好乱写啦
霍金是有点问题，但是其他的当时我又想不到，想到后在讲吧 哈哈；

关于difference of character & characteristic
我个人认为character做名词最常用的意思是标志、象征和角色的意思，而characteristic做名词最常用的意思就是特征和特性的意思，下面是我在webster里查的意思贴出来，你参考一下：
Main Entry:1character
Pronunciation:*kar-ik-t*r
Function:noun
Etymology:Middle English caracter, from Middle French caract*re, from Latin character mark, distinctive quality, from Greek charakt*r, from charassein to scratch, engrave; perhaps akin to Lithuanian deyti to scratch
Date:14th century

1 a : a conventionalized graphic device placed on an object as an indication of ownership, origin, or relationship  b : a graphic symbol (as a hieroglyph or alphabet letter) used in writing or printing  c : a magical or astrological emblem  d : ALPHABET  e (1) : WRITING, PRINTING (2) : style of writing or printing (3) : CIPHER  f : a symbol (as a letter or number) that represents information;  also   : a representation of such a character that may be accepted by a computer
2 a : one of the attributes or features that make up and distinguish an individual  b (1) : a feature used to separate distinguishable things into categories;  also   : a group or kind so separated *advertising of a very primitive character* (2) : the detectable expression of the action of a gene or group of genes (3) : the aggregate of distinctive qualities characteristic of a breed, strain, or type *a wine of great character*  c : the complex of mental and ethical traits marking and often individualizing a person, group, or nation  d : main or essential nature especially as strongly marked and serving to distinguish *excess sewage gradually changed the character of the lake*
3 : POSITION, CAPACITY *his character as a town official*
4 : REFERENCE 4b
5 : REPUTATION
6 : moral excellence and firmness *a man of sound character*
7 a : a person marked by notable or conspicuous traits *quite a character*  b : one of the persons of a drama or novel  c : the personality or part which an actor recreates  d : characterization especially in drama or fiction  e : PERSON, INDIVIDUAL *some character just stole her purse*
8 : a short literary sketch of the qualities of a social type
synonyms see DISPOSITION, QUALITY, TYPE
  朿haracterless \-l*s\  adjective  
  杋n character : in accord with a person's usual qualities or traits
  杘ut of character : not in accord with a person's usual qualities or traitsggregate of distinctive qualities characteristic of a breed, strain, or type *a wine of great character*  c : the complex of mental and ethical traits marking and often individualizing a person, group, or nation  d : main or essential nature especially as strongly marked and serving to distinguish *excess sewage gradually changed the character of the lake*
3 : POSITION, CAPACITY *his character as a town official*
4 : REFERENCE 4b
5 : REPUTATION
6 : moral excellence and firmness *a man of sound character*
7 a : a person marked by notable or conspicuous traits *quite a character*  b : one of the persons of a drama or novel  c : the personality or part which an actor recreates  d : characterization especially in drama or fiction  e : PERSON, INDIVIDUAL *some character just stole her purse*
8 : a short literary sketch of the qualities of a social type
synonyms see DISPOSITION, QUALITY, TYPE
  朿haracterless \-l*s\  adjective  
  杋n character : in accor

Main Entry:1characteristicPronunciation:*kar-ik-t*-*ris-tik
Function:noun
Date:1664

1 : a distinguishing trait, quality, or property
2 : the integral part of a common logarithm
3 : the smallest positive integer n which for an operation in a ring or field yields 0 when any element is used n times with the operation

[ 本帖最后由 zhy5186612 于 2006-8-6 21:19 编辑 ]

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Issue144
"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."
*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
Outline
1 artist plays a key role in the inherent quality of his/her artistic work just like the producer determining the quality of his products.
2 Critic exerts his/her forces through his directional and insightful comment on art.
3 the artist and the critic can cooperate closely and effectively to create a valuable artistic work

Compared an artistic work as a product, the artist and the critic are just like a producer and a advertiser. As for a lasting value of an art, both artist and critic are important, just as that a popular product depends on not only the producer but also the advertiser.

Undoubtedly, artist plays a key role in the inherent quality of his/her artistic work just like the producer determining the quality of his products. With creative mind and adroit skill, it is only the artist who can create an excellent quality art such as a wonderful movie, a meaningful novel or an insightful painting. Steven Spielberg, the famous movie director, has created many spectacular films like the series of ' Jurassic Park ' through his special photographing and story development, in which there are beautiful landscape, exciting story and insightful perspective about society. This example can illustrate how important the artist is in an excellent quality artistic article with lasting value.

Critic, who is like the advertiser to make an extensive advertisement for the product, exerts his/her forces through his directional and insightful comment on art. Often, through critics, can people acquire some common sense and individualistic characteristic of some artistic works, which is not only useful for the public to understand the given art but also important for its wide distribution. Vincent Van Gogh, for instance, is one of greatest artists, whose paintings have been widely spread and high evaluated in later generation through some displays in which some critics played key role to let people catch the gist of Vincent's works.  So, critics can give a meaningful introduction and direction for the publicity of artistic works.

More over, the artist and the critic can cooperate closely and effectively to create a valuable artistic work being similar to a producer and an advertiser to make a hot product. For one thing, the critic can provide some constructive advice for artist to improve his/her job, just like an advertiser give advices about the package of the product. For another thing, critic can draw people's attention effective through the comment or even criticism of the artist. Steven Hawking, the famous artist of the cosmos, is a good example to illustrate this point. by the advice of critics, Hawking has explain his book 'A brief history of time' vividly with plenty of sketch graphs in the third edition. By doing so, his book has given many people an easy way and access to understand his abstract theory.

Just as a hot product needs not only the innovative producer but also the powerful advertiser, the lasting value of an artistic work rests with both the creative artist and the competent critic.
这篇很难写啊，霍金那个例子我本来想写儒勒凡尔纳的，但是一则他不是那么有名，二来他的事难以英语叙述，所以就找霍金啦，想不到其他更好的例子啦

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楼主很用心。。

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xieixie

guorUID: 2101547

格式这样写可以吗？
是不是不能空行。

zhy5186612UID: 2167373

要空行的啦 格式要求的 看ETS的指导或者范文