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TOPIC: ISSUE99 - "In any realm of life-whether academic, social, business, or political-the only way to succeed is to take a practical, rather than an idealistic, point of view. Pragmatic behavior guarantees survival, whereas idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate options."
WORDS: 646          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2006-8-8

The booming epoch witnesses great development in almost every field; and this process inevitably results in complex and confuse among people of the world. While it is rational to emphasis pragmatism, we should not lose sight of its side-effect and the benefit of idealism.

Pragmatism, as it shows, serves to accentuate more on substance. And its function is to deal with everyday life, finding a more efficient way to deal with the problems that people encounter everyday. Pragmatism is useful and effective in almost every field of human beings. To be specific, one needs look no further than academic areas. As is known to all, every sphere of academic research is based on practical experiment, and the soul of these experiments is pragmatic. If a scientist is found distorting the experimental result, he or she might be dismissed and deprived all the reputation and kudos. For example, a Korean biology scientist, Hwang Woo-Suk, claimed that he had made a breakthrough in the field of clone. But the fact demonstrates that he just tells a lie, by belying the truth of his research work. Therefore, the survival of a scientist in  academic fields is partly decided by a prerequisite that whether he or she bases the research work on reality, in other words, whether they are practical. From this point, the meaning of pragmatism is to guarantee survival.

But the function of pragmatism may merely confined in survival, but not a broader range, say, thrive. Over-emphasis on pragmatism will lead to disastrous result, either expand too much or lose way in the complex. For example, if a business man place too much time and energy on finance, his or her pragmatic pursue, he or she may finally become a monster, who devotes his or her heart and soul, adopts every possible mean to collect money. This process will cause chaos in the regulation in the market. Or maybe he or she is lack or the ability to court so much utmost finance, but loses the faith to compete with his or her counterparts, since all that in his or her mind is that substance but not a higher goal. Gradually, this kind of people may evaporate from the battle field represents business. The negative effect of over-pragmatism may finally lead to an unstable and roaring world. Therefore, we should bring an effective tool to measure the degree of pragmatism.

When it comes to the opposite of pragmatism—idealism, common people may tell its uselessness almost at first glance that it is of no use but create daydreamers. Whereas the negative influence of idealism, it indeed serves as a supplement of practical behavior. The marriage of pragmatism and idealism will be fruitful--not simply in those realms such as academic, but also in people's mental world. Take political sphere as an example. When elites of American are devoting themselves in the competition of the President, they will always advocate their future plan. The plan, including tax cut, children's care, medical enhancement, can be safely called future idea. In the long run, these plans compel the energy of the people; regulate the behavior of the officials when they are digging themselves in the practical affairs. Were not these idealistic plans, the whole nation might fail to cling to a solitary goal, along with the faith to improve their living quality. The combination of pragmatism and idealism shapes a healthier and more productive nation. From this point of view, when idealism meets pragmatism, there may not always generates conflict, but harmony and mutually benefit.

In the finally analysis, the meaning of pragmatism is to tackle with daily life, keeping a high rate of development, but we, people of the nation, people of the world should keep in mind an appropriate degree on pragmatism. In addition, to further our success, we should consult idealism as a complement for the practical matter.

首先得问题是practical & Pragmatic可不可以理解成实事求是？注重实际？

按照实用好处-过度实用主义的坏处--实用主义的和理想结合的好处，本来想把理想分开写，但是时间不太充足，就直接写结合了，不知道这样写合不合适！

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ohyeah
谢谢火星, tackle with这个词组一直都在我脑海里面徘徊, 但一直都想不起来. 终于还是看到它了
这个词组和我的渊源比较深, hehe

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The booming epoch witnesses great development in almost every field; and this process inevitably results in complex and confuse among people of the world. While it is rational to emphasis pragmatism, we should not lose sight of its side-effect and the benefit of idealism.

Pragmatism, as it shows, serves to accentuate more on substance. And its function is to deal with everyday life, finding a more efficient way to deal with the problems that people encounter everyday. Pragmatism is useful and effective in almost every field of human beings.[TS?] To be specific, one needs look no further than academic areas. As is known to all, every sphere of academic research is based on practical experiment, and the soul of these experiments is pragmatic. If a scientist is found distorting the experimental result, he or she might be dismissed and deprived all the reputation and kudos. For example, a Korean biology scientist, Hwang Woo-Suk, claimed that he had made a breakthrough in the field of clone. But the fact demonstrates that he just tells a lie[lies], by belying the truth of his research work. Therefore, the survival of a scientist in  academic fields is partly decided by a prerequisite that whether he or she bases the research work on reality, in other words, whether they are practical. From this point, the meaning of pragmatism is to guarantee survival.// idealism=fantasy

But the function of pragmatism may merely confined in survival, but not [是不是缺一个动词? 不能把confine的意思用在这吧] a broader range, say, thrive. Over-emphasis on pragmatism will lead to disastrous result, either expand[? Expand what] too much or lose way in the complex[-ity]. For example, if a business man place[spent是不是更恰当] too much time and energy on finance, his or her pragmatic pursue, he or she may finally become a monster, who devotes his or her heart and soul[with一下就可以了], adopts every possible mean to collect money. This process will cause chaos in the regulation in the market. Or maybe he or she is lack or[of] the ability to court so much utmost finance, but loses the faith to compete with his or her counterparts, since all that in his or her mind is that substance but not [a higher goal]. Gradually, this kind of people may evaporate from the battle field [直接of business感觉更顺一些]represents business. [不够说服力, 利益很大程度上的确是商业的动力, 不见得追名逐利一定会最后失败. 换个角度, 可以说单纯的关注利益, 比起那些有higher goal的人更不容易成功]The negative effect of over-pragmatism may finally lead to an unstable and roaring world. Therefore, we should bring an effective tool to measure the degree of pragmatism.// idealism=理想, 目标?

When it comes to the opposite of pragmatism—idealism, common people may tell its uselessness almost at first glance that it is of no use but create daydreamers. Whereas the negative influence of idealism, it indeed serves as a supplement of practical behavior. [TS]The marriage of pragmatism and idealism will be fruitful--not simply in those realms such as academic, but also in people's mental world. Take political sphere as an example. When elites of American are devoting[dedicating…to上面用过这个词了 ] themselves in the competition of the President, they will always advocate their future plan. The plan, including tax cut, children's care, medical enhancement, can be safely called future idea. In the long run, these plans compel the energy of the people; regulate the behavior of the officials when they are digging themselves in the practical affairs. Were not these idealistic plans, the whole nation might fail to cling to a solitary goal, [后面句和这里意思不对应]along with the faith to improve their living quality. The combination of pragmatism and idealism shapes a healthier and more productive nation. From this point of view, when idealism meets pragmatism, there may not always generates[generate] conflict, but harmony and mutually benefit[推荐红宝词reciprocal]. //idealism= vista

In the finally analysis, the meaning of pragmatism is to tackle with[zan~] daily life, keeping a high rate of development, but we, people of the nation, people of the world[这个递进感觉比较怪] should keep in mind an appropriate degree on pragmatism. In addition, to further our success, we should consult idealism as a complement for the practical matter.

除了第二段, 另两段的ts都没在首句提出, 是特意为之, 还是忽略了呢?
不过我现在也认为这个倒也不是那么死的
有个问题是我觉得对idealism的理解, 在你的三段里面是不同的, 至少主体的第1,3段的定义差别很大. 我认为影响了你的整体一致性, 你觉得呢?

[ 本帖最后由 jalline 于 2006-8-8 14:06 编辑 ]

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有个问题是我觉得对idealism的理解, 在你的三段里面是不同的, 至少主体的第1,3段的定义差别很大. 我认为影响了你的整体一致性, 你觉得呢?

我B1的看法是注重实际，写的是弄虚作假的反义词……，B3正如你说是远景目标，按照理想主义扩展应该还算凑合吧……
    是不大一致，开始写B1的时候就遇到点问题，主要是想不出来什么例子，我下来好好改一下吧，毕竟类似的题目还很多，要多多准备……

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除了第二段, 另两段的ts都没在首句提出, 是特意为之, 还是忽略了呢?

关于TS，我觉得只要有，别太靠后就好了，毕竟开头就提出主题句好像跟前面缺乏衔接的感觉，呵呵，谢谢你那个建议，这题我也觉得写得不怎么样……

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TOPIC: ISSUE99 - "In any realm of life-whether academic, social, business, or political-the only way to succeed is to take a practical, rather than an idealistic, point of view. Pragmatic behavior guarantees survival, whereas idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate options."
WORDS: 646          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2006-8-8

The booming epoch witnesses great development in almost every field; and this process inevitably results in complex and confuse among people of the world. While it is rational to emphasis pragmatism, we should not lose sight of its side-effect and the benefit of idealism.

Pragmatism, as it shows, serves to accentuate more on substance. And its function is to deal with everyday life, finding a more efficient way to deal with the problems that people encounter everyday. Pragmatism is useful and effective in almost every field of human beings. To be specific, one needs look no further than academic areas. As is known to all, every sphere of academic research is based on practical experiment, and the soul of these experiments is pragmatic. Unless buttressed by concrete practical experiment result, never can a theory be accepted by the world. A Korean scientist, Hwang Yoo-Suk, fabricate experiment result in order to gain his kudos in biology field. The high standard that the first breakthrough of clone should be achieved by him jeopardizes not only himself but also the whole nation. If only had he replace his utmost aim with a kind of pragmatic action, the consequence of the whole affair would be reversed. Therefore, the survival of a scientist in academic fields is partly decided by a prerequisite that whether he or she bases the research work on practical steps rather than void high idealism. From this point, the meaning of pragmatism guarantees survival.
这一段改成了注重务实，而不是盲目定高远的目标

But the function of pragmatism may merely confined in survival, but can not be extended to a broader range, say, thrive, even if we place extra effort on it. Over-emphasis on pragmatism will lead to disastrous result, either expand their ambition too much or lose way in the complexity. For example, if a business man spent too much time and energy on finance, his or her pragmatic pursue, he or she may finally become a monster, who adopts every possible mean to collect money with his or her heart and soul. This process will cause chaos in the regulation in the market. Or maybe he or she is lack or[of] the ability to court so much utmost finance, but loses the faith to compete with his or her counterparts, since all that in his or her mind is that substance but not a higher goal. His or her horizon may merely be circumscribed in the minor profit, but lose a sence of future gigantic interest. Gradually, this kind of people may evaporate from the battle field of business. The negative effect of over-pragmatism may finally lead to an unstable and roaring world. Therefore, we should bring an effective tool to measure the degree of pragmatism.

When it comes to the opposite of pragmatism—idealism, common people may tell its uselessness almost at first glance that it is of no use but create daydreamers. Whereas the negative influence of idealism, it indeed serves as a supplement of practical behavior. The marriage of pragmatism and idealism will be fruitful--not simply in those realms such as academic, but also in people's mental world. Take political sphere as an example. When elites of American are dedicating themselves to the competition of the President, they will always advocate their future plan. The plan, including tax cut, children's care, medical enhancement, can be safely called future idea. In the long run, these plans compel the energy of the people; regulate the behavior of the officials when they are digging themselves in the practical affairs. Were not these idealistic plans, the whole nation might fail to cling to a solitary goal, along with the faith to improve its quality for all the people’s welfare. The combination of pragmatism and idealism shapes a healthier and more productive nation. From this point of view, when idealism meets pragmatism, there may not always generate conflict, but harmony and reciprocal.

In the finally analysis, the meaning of pragmatism is to tackle with quotidian life, keeping a high rate of development, but we, people of the world should keep in mind an appropriate degree on pragmatism. In addition, to further our success, we should consult idealism as a complement for the practical matter.

这样三段应该稍微统一了。主要是写务实和高远理想的事情了，不知道合时否？

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The booming epoch witnesses great development in almost every field; and this process inevitably results in complex and confuse among people of the world. While it is rational to emphasis pragmatism, we should not lose sight of its side-effect and the benefit of idealism.

Pragmatism, as it shows, serves to accentuate more on substance. And its function is to deal with everyday life, finding a more efficient way to deal with the problems that people encounter everyday. Pragmatism is useful and effective in almost every field of human beings. To be specific, one needs (need to) look no further than academic areas. As is known to all, every sphere of academic research is based on practical experiment, and the soul of these experiments is pragmatic. If a scientist is found distorting the experimental result, he or she might be dismissed and deprived all the reputation and kudos. For example, a Korean biology scientist, Hwang Woo-Suk, claimed that he had made a breakthrough in the field of clone. But the fact demonstrates that he just tells a lie, by belying the truth of his research work. Therefore, the survival of a scientist in  academic fields is partly decided by a prerequisite that whether he or she bases the research work on reality, in other words, whether they are practical. From this point, the meaning of pragmatism is to guarantee survival. (pragmatic does not equal to reality,just as 实用不等于真实，例子不能生搬硬套)

But the function of pragmatism may merely confined in survival, but not a broader range, say, thrive. Over-emphasis on pragmatism will lead to disastrous result, either expand too much or lose way in the complex. For example, if a business man place too much time and energy on finance, his or her pragmatic pursue, he or she may finally become a monster, who devotes his or her heart and soul, adopts every possible mean to collect money. This process will cause chaos in the regulation in the market. Or maybe he or she is lack or the ability to court so much utmost finance, but loses the faith to compete with his or her counterparts, since all that in his or her mind is that substance but not a higher goal. Gradually, this kind of people may evaporate from the battle field represents business. The negative effect of over-pragmatism may finally lead to an unstable and roaring world. Therefore, we should bring an effective tool to measure the degree of pragmatism. （弱弱地认为应该讲长短期比较来说明实用与理想化的差别，毕竟商业活动就是追逐利益的过程）

When it comes to the opposite of pragmatism—idealism, common people may tell its uselessness almost at first glance that it is of no use but create daydreamers. Whereas the negative influence of idealism, it indeed serves as a supplement of practical behavior. The marriage of pragmatism and idealism will be fruitful--not simply in those realms such as academic, but also in people's mental world. Take political sphere as an example. When elites of American are devoting themselves in the competition of the President, they will always advocate their future plan. The plan, including tax cut, children's care, medical enhancement, can be safely called future idea. In the long run, these plans compel the energy of the people; regulate the behavior of the officials when they are digging themselves in the practical affairs. Were not these idealistic plans, the whole nation might fail to cling to a solitary goal, along with the faith to improve their living quality. The combination of pragmatism and idealism shapes a healthier and more productive nation. From this point of view, when idealism meets pragmatism, there may not always generates conflict, but harmony and mutually benefit.

In the finally analysis, the meaning of pragmatism is to tackle with daily life, keeping a high rate of development, but we, people of the nation, people of the world should keep in mind an appropriate degree on pragmatism. In addition, to further our success, we should consult idealism as a complement for the practical matter.

总体感觉有点跑题（个人感觉而已），黄禹锡的例子有点不合适，商业那个也不像在讲pragmatic and ideal. B3还好，不过再对那些elites的 idealistic plans和 practical affairs讲得清楚些会更好。TS我没有注意就没有找到，虽然这个东东不是必须段首写，但还是觉得写得显眼些的好。语言句法我不太在行，赞4楼大虾。
个人见解，不知是否对LZ有帮助。我的文，表客气。
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=509868&extra=page%3D1

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pragmatic: relating to matters of fact or practical affairs often to the exclusion of intellectual or artistic matters
MW的解释，斟酌中，改下再发

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还是写idealism比较容易一些，想了半天pragmatism的例子也想不出来什么，明天重新写一下吧，这篇有心情再改

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TOPIC: ISSUE99 - "In any realm of life-whether academic, social, business, or political-the only way to succeed is to take a practical, rather than an idealistic, point of view. Pragmatic behavior guarantees survival, whereas idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate options."

The booming epoch witnesses great development in almost every field; and this process inevitably results in complex and confuse among people of the world. While it is rational to emphasis pragmatism, we should not lose sight of its side-effect and the benefit of idealism.

Pragmatism, as it shows, serves to accentuate more on substance. And its function is to deal with everyday life, finding a more efficient way to deal with the problems that people encounter everyday. Pragmatism is useful and effective in almost every field of human beings. To be specific, one needs look no further than society life. For example, when a country suffers a severe inflation, the pragmatic way of solving it is to reduce the interest of saving; similarly, when a nation confronts climate upheaval and residents face distress, the most practical solution is to distribute some financial support and endeavor the government’s effort to help rally the people. François Mitterrand, former French President, known for his pragmatism in dealing nation affairs, such as tax revolution, decentralizes the power of government, and so forth. And France gained its status in the world and also acquired tremendous development during his two terms. Therefore, the survival of a scientist in academic fields is partly decided by a prerequisite that whether he or she bases the research work on practical steps rather than void high idealism. From this point, the meaning of pragmatism guarantees survival.

But over-emphasis on pragmatism will lead to disastrous result, either expand their ambition too much or lose way in the complexity. Nevertheless pragmatism do guarantee survival, it may never effective in the respect of thrive, or even lend side-effect. For example, if a business man spent too much time and energy on finance, his or her pragmatic pursue in the short run, he or she may finally become a monster, who adopts every possible mean to collect money with his or her heart and soul. This process will cause chaos in the regulation in the market. Or maybe he or she is lack of the ability to court so much utmost finance, but loses the faith to compete with his or her counterparts, since all that in his or her mind is that substance but not a higher goal. His or her horizon may merely be circumscribed in the minor profit, but lose a sense of future gigantic interest. Gradually, this kind of people may evaporate from the battle field of business. The negative effect of over-pragmatism may finally lead to an unstable and roaring world. Therefore, we should bring an effective tool to measure the degree of pragmatism.

Whereas the negative influence of idealism, as many people content that it is unpractical, it indeed serves as a supplement of practical behavior. The marriage of pragmatism and idealism will be fruitful--not simply in those realms such as academic, but also in people's mental world. Take political sphere as an example. When elites of American are dedicating themselves to the competition of the President, they will always advocate their future plan. The plan, including tax cut, children's care, medical enhancement, can be safely called future idea. In the long run, these plans stimulate the energy of the people; regulate the behavior of the officials when they are digging themselves into the practical affairs. Were not these idealistic plans, the whole nation might fail to cling to a solitary goal, along with the faith to improve its quality for all the people’s welfare. The combination of pragmatism and idealism shapes a healthier and more productive nation. From this point of view, when idealism meets pragmatism, there may not always generate conflict, but harmony and reciprocal.

In the finally analysis, the meaning of pragmatism is to tackle with quotidian life, keeping a high rate of development, but we, people of the world should keep in mind an appropriate degree on pragmatism. In addition, to further our success, we should consult idealism as a complement for the practical matter.

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François Mitterrand~~

他的政绩好像不是很良好阿

His domestic policy was less successful, and France experienced high unemployment.

Wiki上查到的

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Mitterrand worked to strengthen France's position in the European Union and internationally.
这个Encarta是这个写的，他在经济上1982有过inflation，所以调整为保守的经济政策
By 1982 France faced economic problems with rising inflation and unemployment. In response, Mitterrand reversed many of his policies, adopting a more conservative approach. Austerity measures were adopted in June 1982 and March 1983 including wage freezes, increased charges for health services, and cuts in public expenses.
可能是外面还行，国内不行吧，毕竟是Mitterrand was the only president of the Fifth Republic to complete two terms in office


Microsoft ? Encarta ? 2006. ? 1993-2005 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved.

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The booming epoch witnesses great development in almost every field; and this process inevitably results in complex and confuse among people of the world. While it is rational to emphasis pragmatism, we should not lose sight of its side-effect and the benefit of idealism.开头很好 直接暗示文体内容

Pragmatism, as it shows, serves to accentuate more on substance. And its function is to deal with everyday lifeand 多余吧 这句改为Its functionis to deal with daily life, finding a more efficient way to deal withchange a word --resolve the problems that people encounter faceeveryday.来个例子就好了 Pragmatism is useful and effective in almost every field of human beings. To be specific, one needs look no further than academic areas. Asit is known to all, every too absolute may be "most " is bettersphere of academic research is based on practical experiment, and the soul of these experiments is pragmatic. If a scientist is found distorting the experimental result, he or she might be dismissed and deprived all the his or her reputation and kudos. For example, a Korean biology scientist, Hwang Woo-Suk, claimed that he had made a breakthrough in the field of clone. But the fact demonstrates that he just tells a lie, by belying the truth of his research work. Therefore, the survival of a scientist in  academic fields is partly decided by a prerequisite that whether he or she bases the research work on reality, in other words, whether they are practical. From this point, the meaning of pragmatism is to guarantee survival.

But这个词很少见到打头 换成however 可能好点 the function of pragmatism may merely confined in survival, but not ina broader range, say, thrive. Over-emphasis on pragmatism will lead to disastrous result, either expand too much or lose way in the complex. For example, if a business man placespend too much time and energy on finance, his or her pragmatic pursue, he or she may finally become a monster, who devotes his or her heart and soul, adopts every possible mean to collect money. 这个例子好像说明ts不是很好把 或者我没理解 你说明一下This process will cause chaos in the regulation in the market. Or maybe he or she is lack orof the ability to court so much utmost finance, but loses the faith to compete with his or her counterparts, since all that in his or her mind is that substance but not a higher goal. Gradually, this kind of people may evaporate from the battle field represents business. The negative effect of over-pragmatism may finally lead to an unstable and roaring world. Therefore, we should bring an effective tool to measure the degree of pragmatism.这段中对practical view 的负面影响的说明 我不太理解这种说法 不知道practical view 带来让人懈怠的 不能积极进取的想法 这种负面影响是否准确，如果可以的话，我也想写写这方面

When it comes to the opposite of pragmatism—idealism, common people may tell its uselessness almost at first glance that it is of no use but create daydreamers. Whereas the negative influence of idealism, it indeed serves as a supplement of practical behavior. The marriage of pragmatism and idealism will be fruitful--not simply in those realms such as academic:Osuch as 是接多个词的？还是一个的？我也想问问, but also in people's mental world. Take political sphere as an example. When elites of American are devoting themselves in the competition of the President, they will always advocate their future plan. The plan, including tax cut, children's care, medical enhancement, can be safely called future idea. In the long run, these plans compel the energy of the people; regulate the behavior of the officials when they are digging themselves in the practical affairs. Were not these idealistic plans, the whole nation might fail to cling to a solitary goal, along with the faith to improve their living quality. The combination of pragmatism and idealism shapes a healthier and more productive nation. From this point of view, when idealism meets pragmatism, there may not always generates conflict, but harmony and mutually benefit.

In the finally analysis, the meaning of pragmatism is to tackle with daily life, keeping a high rate of development, but we, people of the nation, people of the world should keep in mind an appropriate degree 这边的成分没看懂on pragmatism. In addition, to further our success, we should consult idealism as a complement for the practical matter.
规定时间内能写这么多的内容  真是佩服！

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