很沮丧，第一篇ISSUE（1），只有266字

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Improve, Although You Are Disparate
The speaker regards rapport of opinions as an positive ingredient to the process of learning. Admittedly, the ambience of conformity will offer us a agreeable and favorable feeling, so as to stir our initiation and make us move forward. But we also recognize that adversity will not always debar the process of learning. And there are also other spiritual resources for progress.
  Firstly, it always comes to us several academic discussions, even debating, like the construction of Quantum Mechanics, while referring to the recent history of the development of natural science. And we should never question the huge momentum those contradictory views provided to the progress of physics principles. And the consummation of modern science is greatly profited in the process of improvement of the prior conclusions in the constant academic debating. So, variance can be the catalyst of progress.
  On the other hand, there may be many reasons to make the propulsion of learning. And what really matters most should the disposition of one’s own. It’s not probable for a vain person to learn much sometimes even he has a lot in common with others, let alone in some averse environs. But for a humble and receptive man, a controversial circumstance fits him better apparently. It’s not cognate to attribute the reason of learning more to a relatively more compatible ambience.
  Above all, yourself should always be the principal ingredient among so many reasons of progress. No matter what kind of environment you are in, you’ll succeed only if you’re craving towards improving yourself and learning more then just do it.

而且用了将近一个小时。
任重道远，再修改。

[ 本帖最后由 smartrat 于 2006-8-9 13:02 编辑 ]

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以后把题目要一起贴上来, 发贴有格式的, 看置顶

文章一般不需要拟标题
每段顶格, 段间空一行

有了具体例子, 字数就上去了: )
没具体例子就编造, 或纯论证, 可以正反对照, 或说完一个意思接一个"换言之"再bla, bla, ..., 或说完个体, 来个概括总结.
每一段结尾再总结本段大意, 字数就可以多不少了

但思路的培养还是很重要的

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第一篇总是这样,加油！

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大家的第一篇都是不堪入目的 赫赫
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有什么不明白到这里来交流
G友们都是很热心的

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