Issue153 [Shining Sep 作文组] 8.30

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规定时间只写了380字，还差倒数第二段没写，多花了10分钟。

TOPIC: ISSUE153 - "Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively."
WORDS: 502          TIME: 0:55:00          DATE: 2006-8-30

In this age of new knowledge and technology emerging fast, information people could get is increasing exponentially. To examine the authenticity of these new informations, studying with certain skepticism is necessary. The speaker asserts students should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively. However, in my view, it is unreasonable to encourage every student to doubt whatever they study.

Skepticism makes great progress. In the academic field, scientists with skepticism always discover significant laws and inventions, because they dare to doubt the knowledge they learn. For example, Copernicus, the famous scientist in Renaissance, discovered the truth that the earth is rotated around the sun, and creates the new concept heliocentricism. His momentous achievement attributes to his courage of doubting what the authority taught. In the political field, skepticism is also important to prompt the society progress.  When people understand the purpose of a policy, some of them would suspect the negative effects which it could bring. After gathering information and searching solutions, the new policy would be better to citizens. Hence, if people consider a new policy with a certain skeptical attitude, the new policy would be amended much better than the original policy.

Doubting what they learn is an important ability to students, accepting knowledge passively is not a good choice. What students learn in the schools is not absolutely correct. The new knowledge and concepts are invented every year. What is correct today may be wrong tomorrow. There is a very typical example in astronomy field. From last century, people all accepted that there are nine planets in the solar system, but today after astronomer carefully researched and discussed, Pluto was degraded to a dwarfplanet. Hence, there are only eight planet in the solar system, and what people learned before is wrong. Moreover, the ability of doubting is an important way to study new knowledge and get more experience. Students do not stay in schools forever. When they get into the society, they would face various information and knowledge. Indeed, there are many fake information in them, therefore with a skeptical attitude can help students get real and useful information in the society.

Nevertheless, people should not ask children to bring certain skepticism to whatever they study. Children lack the ability of distinguishing right and wrong, and they can not analyze issues in different aspects roundly. If children see some negative samples on TV, they would doubt what teachers and parents tell them. This suspicion is improper. And what children learn in schools is fundamental knowledge, which is absolutely correct. It is unnecessary to doubt the credibility of one and one is two. Furthermore, many truths are eternal. For instance, no matter when, the virtues such as braveness, honest, hardworking should not be doubted. Therefore, people should doubt what they are taught selectively.

In conclusion, skepticism plays an essential role in the progress of human civilization. Learning knowledge selectively is better than accepting all passively. And when people doubt some theories, they should be objective and rational.

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TOPIC: ISSUE153 - "Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively."
WORDS: 502          TIME: 0:55:00          DATE: 2006-8-30
字数相对于时间而言有点少，写的时候可以少想点big words，哪怕用小学生的话写也好过停笔思考

In this age of new knowledge and technology emerging fast, information people could get is increasing exponentially. To examine the authenticity of these new informations, studying with certain skepticism is necessary. The speaker asserts students should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively. However, in my view, it is unreasonable to encourage every student to doubt whatever they study.

Skepticism makes great progress. In the academic field, scientists with skepticism always discover significant laws and inventions, because they dare to doubt the knowledge they learn. For example, Copernicus又是他！刚看了cc的就是他，我看的都快疯了，考官估计也受不来所有人都举他了吧？, the famous scientist in Renaissance, discovered the truth that the earth is rotated around the sun, and creates the new concept heliocentricism. His momentous achievement attributes to his courage of doubting what the authority taught. In the political field, skepticism is also important to prompt the society progress.  When people understand the purpose of a policy, some of them would suspect the negative effects which it could bring. After gathering information and searching solutions, the new policy would be better to citizens. Hence, if people consider a new policy with a certain skeptical attitude, the new policy would be amended much better than the original policy. 这个...无法说一定好吧？

Doubting不如Keeping skeptic好 what they learn is an important ability to students, accepting knowledge passively is not a good choice. What students learn in the schools is not absolutely correct. The new knowledge and concepts are invented every year. What is correct today may be wrong tomorrow好. There is a very typical example in astronomy field. From last century, people all accepted that there are nine planets in the solar system, but today after astronomer carefully researched and discussed, Pluto was degraded to a dwarfplanet. Hence, there are only eight planet in the solar system, and what people learned before is wrong你可以说得细一点，例如占星术，希腊神话等等. Moreover, the ability of doubting is an important way to study new knowledge and get more experience. Students do not stay in schools forever. When they get into the society, they would face various information and knowledge. Indeed, there are many fake information in them, therefore with a skeptical attitude can help students get real and useful information in the society.

Nevertheless, people should not ask children to bring certain skepticism to whatever they study. Children lack the ability of distinguishing right and wrong, and they can not analyze issues in different aspects roundly. If children see some negative samples on TV, 这个和skeptic有点远了吧？？they would doubt what teachers and parents tell them. This suspicion is improper. And what children learn in schools is fundamental knowledge, which is absolutely correct. It is unnecessary to doubt the credibility of one and ---> add one is two. Furthermore, many truths are eternal. For instance, no matter when, the virtues such as braveness, honest, hardworking should not be doubted.这个不好说吧？比如从小被灌输殖民主义思想，军国主义思想，这也是bravery，就不应该skeptic么？ Therefore, people should doubt what they are taught selectively.

In conclusion, skepticism plays an essential role in the progress of human civilization. Learning knowledge selectively is better than accepting all passively. And when people doubt some theories, they should be objective and rational.

文章成文很好，结构统一，不过和我的某些观点不大一致，呵呵，Issue嘛，能自原其说最关键，观点倒是次要。例证方面，我觉得有待反复考量

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In this age of new knowledge and technology emerging fast, information people could get is increasing exponentially. To examine the authenticity of these new informations, studying with certain skepticism is necessary. The speaker asserts students should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively. However, in my view, it is unreasonable to encourage every student to doubt whatever they study.

Skepticism makes great progress. In the academic field, scientists with skepticism always discover significant laws and inventions, because they dare to doubt the knowledge they learn. For example, Copernicus, the famous scientist in Renaissance, discovered the truth that the earth is rotated around the sun, and creates the new concept heliocentricism. His momentous achievement attributes to his courage of doubting what the authority taught. In the political field, skepticism is also important to prompt the society progress.  When people understand the purpose of a policy, some of them would suspect the negative effects which it could bring. After gathering information and searching solutions, the new policy would be better to citizens. Hence, if people consider a new policy with a certain skeptical attitude, the new policy would be amended much better than the original policy. //学术和政治领域分说,清楚~结尾少句总结~


Doubting what they learn is an important ability to students, accepting knowledge passively is not a good choice. What students learn in the schools is not absolutely correct. The new knowledge and concepts are invented every year. What is correct today may be wrong tomorrow. There is a very typical example in astronomy field. From last century, people all accepted that there are nine planets in the solar system, but today after astronomer carefully researched and discussed, Pluto was degraded to a dwarfplanet. Hence, there are only eight planet in the solar system, and what people learned before is wrong. Moreover, the ability of doubting is an important way to study new knowledge and get more experience. Students do not stay in schools forever. When they get into the society, they would face various information and knowledge. Indeed, there are many fake information in them, therefore with a skeptical attitude can help students get real and useful information in the society./ /两个分论点我标出来了~后面说怀疑有助于学习新知识, 前面一个例子说过去对的现在不一定对,怀疑有助于什么?发现错误?点点出来~~

Nevertheless, people should not ask children to bring certain skepticism to whatever they study. Children lack the ability of distinguishing right and wrong, and they can not analyze issues in different aspects roundly. If children see some negative samples on TV, they would doubt what teachers and parents tell them. This suspicion is improper. And what children learn in schools is fundamental knowledge, which is absolutely correct. It is unnecessary to doubt the credibility of one and one is two 太强了~~. Furthermore, many truths are eternal. For instance, no matter when, the virtues such as braveness, honest, hardworking should not be doubted. Therefore, people should doubt what they are taught selectively. //怀疑时的注意~

In conclusion, skepticism plays an essential role in the progress of human civilization. Learning knowledge selectively is better than accepting all passively. And when people doubt some theories, they should be objective and rational.

基本上我们的结构差不多~ 其实这种文章写成这样很容易,但是貌似也高分不了,
我现在就是先要求自己把结构先弄清楚,说理还有点乱,你的好不少~理一下~