不知道这里有人帮着修改作文吗？发一篇来试试看。

化蝶UID: 206080

最近，广告大量涌入我们的生活，给我们带来很多负面影响，
尤其是小孩子。因此有人提出要全面禁止广告。你同意不同意？



Advertisements are becoming the mainstream from which we get the information recently. It presents colorful and various information in front of us both useful and useless. Some false information plays a bad role in the cognitions of children. Therefore, some people suggest that forbid advertisements all over the time and it will avoid the harm. I cannot follow this view.   

Admittedly, advertisements bring many conveniences to us. Firstly, advertisement can transform information instantly. It can lead us to find what we want right away with very impressive dynamic pictures and sounds. We often choose productions what the advertisement shows to us such as refrigerator, TV, furniture even cosmetic and clothes. Advertisements can also tell us the latest news of commodities and the fashion trend nowadays, which can keep us abreast with the world.  

Secondly, commonweal advertisements also play an important educational role, especially for children. For instance, they can study history, culture and languages from some commonweal advertisements. A nice advertisement would bring them abundant words.

Lastly, People can get entertainment from some funny advertisements. That will be nice for our bodies, and no doubt for relaxation. You can adjust your mood during watching them.

However, we should not neglect the false information from some advertisements. It is full of violence and cheat. We should teach the youth distinguishing them.  

In conclusion, advertisement is one of the main sources of information and very convenient for our human beings to get news. It is not good to forbid advertisement from our life in the future.

金金鱼UID: 2202172

advertisement还有一个词可替换了用了commercial
LZ重心更多的放在广告对小孩子的作用上，这方面写的不够深入。
花了多少时间完成？

化蝶UID: 206080

谢谢！！呵呵。。。我写了2个小时。。。。

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

see ur watch and measure ur time on every task

化蝶UID: 206080

:L好惭愧i。。。 。。。
能否请教一下怎么写模版？我的作文从来没有在40min完成过。真是郁闷。。。

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

其实我觉得所谓的摸版就是你用习惯的一种写作方式，所以应该在积累的基础上面创造出自己的东西，至于时间问题，我觉得还是多多练习为妙~~
好运~~

phyllisUID: 143680

你能写出来已经是进步了，

我一次都没写过：（

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

i think the thoughts are more important