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shanjie9988UID: 2252049

1原题：
5 n+ d% B5 O9 TMany changes occurred while she was president of the college, and they increased its educational quality as well as effectiveness.
(A)        college, and they increased its educational quality as well as effectiveness
(B)        college, they both increased the educational quality and effectiveness of the college
(C)        college, which both increased its educational quality as well as increased its effectiveness
) z8 k5 y4 I+ C8 s$ F! Z(D)        college; these changes increased its educational quality and effectiveness
(E)        college; these changes increased both the educational quality and effectiveness of the college
A-        D中的they和its都算指代不清吗？可前面出现过它们各对应的词啦？
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High school graduates usually do not end up earning as much income as college graduates do, this being why so many high school students go on to pursue college degrees.
6 X1 ^  t% i/ _$ Q6 x. x7 U* s0 h(A)        do, this being why so many high school students
3 Q' h, a! G6 y  E9 Y, i5 Y(B)        do, this is why so many high school students
% T' x) P7 F  u, n# C(C)        do; this fact explains why so many high school students
- j' ^3 t( ~  R6 L(D)        do; this fact explaining the reason for why so many high school students
(E)        do, explaining why so many high school students
. B0 _/ l; f. n0 H& P# A  X& d“;”后的主语应与前文主语一致，可“this fact”与 “High school graduates”不一致，怎么能是正确的呢？

9 F$ [  J, b' J  i7 R; W3原题：
The filibuster on voting-rights legislation went on for three days and nights; senators slept when they couldon benches in the hall
(A)        nights; senators slept when they could
- N. n5 J7 i( c(B)        nights, which meant senators sleeping when possible
(C)        nights; therefore, it meant that senators would sleep when possible
(D)        nights and therefore the senators would be sleeping when able to
(E)        nights; with senators sleeping when they could
同第二题一样的问题？

4原题：
In Germany, foresters discovered that trees killed by acid rain had begun to die four years earlier, eyen though the trees had shown no signs of disease then.
(A)        earlier, even though the trees had shown no signs of disease then
(B)        earlier, but not showing any signs of disease the
: L- P5 \8 U5 {(C)        earlier, no outward signs of disease had been shown then in the trees, however
$ w2 G, q; _4 d(D)        earlier without any signs of disease shown then
(E)        earlier, not then having shown any signs of disease, however
D错在哪里呀？

5原题：
- L- n& v) F# T; O  \For the most part, in the actions of how an animal behaves, instinct is the main determinant.
+ P7 p1 R" N6 b* [3 n% k6 ~% R8 z(A)        For the most part, in the actions of how an animal behaves, instinct is the main determinant.
7 A, B* H. ~- u1 ~% \- v3 o(B)        Generally, an animal’s behavior and actions are mostly instinctual ones.
! p3 ~5 S- T: D, s( b, T(C)        An animal’s actions, as to behavior, are by and large instinctively determined.
(D)        An animal’s actions are largely determined by instinct.
0 m" ]7 E. L& K2 G(E)        Animals mainly have their instinct as a determinant for behavior.
3 S5 a7 _  I2 E! ^; R6 l1 d( p为何不选E呢？
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6原题：
When someone shops by mail or through the Internet, you sill be following a tradition begun by the American colonists, who purchased almost everything from Europe.
(A)        you will be following
(B)        it is following
3 H% [" Y# R3 A  k3 D& Q4 Q0 _(C)        you will follow
(D)        he or she follows
$ A, {: h' r3 J- I. ?6 H# O(E)        it follows
4 N6 `; y9 v; E( F: v9 ?我觉得A和C也没有错啊，it在这里算指代不清吗？我觉得D和E也有道理。

shanjie9988UID: 2252049

有知道的告诉一下,谢谢!

shanjie9988UID: 2252049

为什么没有人肯帮忙呢?在一次谢谢,真的很着急.

杀生玲UID: 2204304

页码是多少啊？

重楼UID: 206894

真是可怜天下父母心了。。。这女儿使唤爸爸妈妈真是不知道心疼

shanjie9988UID: 2252049

是呀,因为小孩子太忙了,晚上我把页码发上去,可以帮忙看看吗.谢谢!

重楼UID: 206894

看到您这么辛苦的发帖。。。突然想到了自己的妈妈。。。艾，做点好事吧。不过劝您最好一切事情都交给孩子自己处理。
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1。虽然前面出现了所指代的词，但是这些词和所对应的代词（they its）距离很远而且关联不明显。这种题型的目的是找出最通畅的说法，而不是玩逻辑游戏。
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2。“；”前后主语一致。。。似乎是附会上的语法，没有听说过这种要求。this fact指的就是前面的一个分句的内容。

! |' S" b  |5 ~3 v' [( ^3 h3。同2题一样，语法上没有这样的要求。本题选A
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: `8 Z6 |6 v/ y$ p. j8 f4。选项D在语法上没有错，但是使用了被动语态，而且是without...verb+ed这种很蹩脚的说法，所以不选。做这种题型的时候尽量不要选被动的句子。

5。因为E没有D简洁（虽然D使用了被动语态，但是这个句子是没有动作的发出者的，所以这样说最简洁。）而且E当中的副词mainly显得也不恰当。永远选最简洁流畅的句子。
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" @, {! `+ N$ A' F1 i6。不是很明白您说的什么意思。这个题我认为应该选D，而从您的描述中似乎参考答案是B？比较不可能。这个句子的考点是，When someone...这个从句的主语应该和主句的主语一致，所以是he or she

shanjie9988UID: 2252049

真的非常感谢!在次谢谢!

xukeUID: 2251182

1."Many changes occurred while she was president of the college"这句话中，唯一的复数名词是"many changes";唯一的单数名词就是"the college",所以"they"和"its"都只有一个所指，并没产生歧义。
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! b8 S+ @# h4 q, l! t# [7 x2 、3.";"就代表一个连词，在这里可替换为“and”，只表示句子的顺联承接的关系，并不用完全对应。

4.用了被动语态。由于这类题追求简洁原则，所以不选。这句话本身并没有错，而且请注意，这类题的不选项并不一定错，只是不如正确答案好，不如正确答案简洁惯用罢了。

5.E不如D简洁顺畅，啰嗦。
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- ]; q. O/ L( m! F3 `9 n6.这道题应选D。首先，“someone”不能与“you”相对，“someone”只代表一般第三人称，即“he or she”。至于“it”本来就指代不明啊，所以不选。

azuresnoopyUID: 2166417

:eek: 重楼