issue208 超级恶心的题, 重写的..

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TOPIC: ISSUE208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
WORDS: 631          TIME: 0:43:00          DATE: 2007-2-27

Whether the way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests? As far as I concerned, there is no denyint the fact that through people's apperance, the way the look, dress, and behaviors, the way they act, we can tell people's characters, including their attitudes and interests. Since the society is constituted by it people, the society's ideas and values can be discerned a lot by observing the appearance and behavior of its people. However, to get a in-depth understanding of a society, other factors such as the history and political climate etc. should also be taken into account.

To begin with,  in most occasions, people's apperance can leak much informatoin of their attitudes and interests. To illustrate this point, many empirical examples are implete with our daily lives. A girl, who make up everyday and dress up neatly and fashionably, has a optimistic attitude to life, for she wants to please everybody she met and herself. Similarily, a person who has a cold look to others, probably has a hatred to society and his/her life.True, people's attitudes and interests play a significant role in their apperance.

Besides, people's behaviors, which are always impulsed by people's inner motivation, can reveal their attitudes and interests.  It is human's instinct to act at their will, and the will, stems from human's attitude to life and to society, as well as human's interests. For instance, a well-educated person tends to have a grateful and content attitude to his/her life and the society, therefore, he/she will be ready to help others in almost every situation. In a not dissimilar way, a boy will talk about football games with his friends and play football evey weekend, because he has a intensive interest on football. Consequently, by watching people's behaviors, we could more often than not judge their attitudes and interests.

Therefore, to some extent, since the society's ideas and values are deprived from the attitudes and interests of the majority of its members, we can tell much about the society's ideas and values from observing its peoples' behavior and appearance. As an old saying goes, the ocean is formed by a myriad of water drops. The ideas and values of a society are formed by attitudes and interests of its people at large.  For instance, citizens in America  would prefer wear various kinds of clothes at their convenience, which reflects the value of freedom and individuals in the country.  While women in Arab countries cover a mask from head to toe, and this circumstance reveals the idea that women are possessed by men and they have a lower status.

However, while we can learn much about a society from its people's appearance and behavior, we should not lose sight of the fact that sometimes appearance and behavior are so deceiving that they can't speak for what the real ideas and values in people's heart. The example of the change of a person's appearance from University to work outside can aptly illustrate this point.  When one was a student at a freely university, he would be affected by the contagious trends caused by vigious young students. And thus most time, he chose sports clothes. When he attened a company and become a formal worker, he should obey the rule of company that men should wear suits at the work time. Therefore, his sports clothes were locked into darkness and suits rein preme of his bureau.  We can see from this appearance exchange that people's apperance may not reflect their real attitudes and interests but could be confined by the environment.

In summary, I fundamentally agree that we can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people. However, this way is not the only method to research a society since sometimes it would cheat observers. To better know the ideas and values of a society, we should also study the society's history and cultural which will be quite helpful.

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Whether the way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests? As far as I concerned, there is no denyint the fact that through people's apperance, the way the look, dress, and behaviors, the way they act, we can tell people's characters, including their attitudes and interests. Since the society is constituted by it people, the society's ideas and values can be discerned a lot by observing the appearance and behavior of its people. However, to get a in-depth understanding of a society, other factors such as the history and political climate etc. should also be taken into account. 开头冗长了。。。

To begin with,  in most occasions, people's apperance can leak这个词用在这里比较怪 much informatoin of their attitudes and interests. To illustrate this point, many empirical examples are implete with our daily lives. A girl, who make up everyday and dress up neatly and fashionably, has a optimistic attitude to life, for she wants to please everybody she meets and herself. Similarily改为Contrarily, a person who has a cold look to others, probably has a hatred to society and his/her life.True, people's attitudes and interests play a significant role in their apperance. 例子可以，分析说理不够

Besides, people's behaviors, which are always impulsed by people's inner motivation, can reveal their attitudes and interests.  It is human's instinct to act at their will, and the will, stemssteming from human's attitude to life and to society, as well as human's interests. For instance, a well-educated person tends to have a grateful and content attitude to his/her life and the society, therefore, he/she will be ready to help others in almost every situation. In a not dissimilar way, a boy will talk about football games with his friends and play football evey weekend, because he has a intensive interest on football. Consequently, by watching people's behaviors, we could more often than not judge their attitudes and interests. 这么多的例子，不分析太可惜了。。。通过这两个例子可以归纳一下子，然后总结出一些形而上的东西出来。

Therefore, to some extent, since the society's ideas and values are deprived from the attitudes and interests of the majority of its members, we can tell much about the society's ideas and values from observing its peoples' behavior and appearance. As an old saying goes, the ocean is formed by a myriad of water drops. The ideas and values of a society are formed by attitudes and interests of its people at large.  For instance, citizens in America  would prefer wear various kinds of clothes at their convenience, which reflects the value of freedom and individuals in the country.  While women in Arab countries cover a mask from head to toe, and this circumstance reveals the idea that women are possessed by men and they have a lower status.
感觉论点论据脱离了。看了The ideas and values of a society are formed by attitudes and interests of its people at large.以为下面是证明为什么社会的价值观是来源于个人的价值观，看了下面才知道，是证明可以通过个人衣服看出社会价值。这两个命题是有区别的。

However, while we can learn much about a society from its people's appearance and behavior, we should not lose sight of the fact that sometimes appearance and behavior are so deceiving that they can't speak for what the real ideas and values in people's heart. The example of the change of a person's appearance from University to work outside can aptly illustrate this point.  When one was a student at a freely university, he would be affected by the contagious trends caused by vigious young students. And thus most time, he chose sports clothes. When he atteneds a company and becomes a formal worker, he should obey the rule of company that men should wear suits at the work time. Therefore, his sports clothes were locked into darkness and suits rein preme of his bureau.可以分析一下例子原因以及意义，他要遵守公司规定这个不是原因，至少不是分析出来的原因，比如是可以推出人在江湖身不由己这个原因。如果说你说下面这一句话是在分析原因，那么你这段话又没有总结了，总结就要更抽象一点，比如人的衣着行为是会受某些因素影响的，这个结论就比"环境"抽象得多。  We can see from this appearance exchange that people's apperance may not reflect their real attitudes and interests but could be confined by the environment.

In summary, I fundamentally agree that we can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people. However, this way is not the only method to research a society since sometimes it would cheat observers. To better know the ideas and values of a society, we should also study the society's history and cultural which will be quite helpful.


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我就是不知道可以抽象出什么东西来.....所以第一次写的时候别扭了半天...
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