Issue50 [Transcend小组]第二次作业

chenmi8812UID: 2261072

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Issue 50 whether should faculty work outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach?
    I strong agree the speakers’ claim that teachers working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach is beneficial to students they teach. However, a threshold qualification should be added to this claim, which is how to seek the balance between working outside the academic world and teaching and researching in their professions. With limited energy, if the professors spend most of his time working outside, it is impossible for them to give much attention to the teaching and academic research, which will impede the improvement of the quality of instruction at the college and university. In fact, such problem is real appeared in the complex modern world especially regarding to the work have a profitable income which is much more than they can earn in the college or have something do with rising the professors' reputation and position in their areas of specialty. In the field economics, for example, it is quite common to see that the professors plunge themselves into stock market or making a business project for corporations, which result in lacking time to do the college work.
   Aside from the qualification working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach will definitely do well to the improvement of the quality of instruction at the college and university level. There are two benefits of doing so. Firstly, the faculty working outside will get much personal experience about the professions outside the academia, which can be applied into the daily teaching. As a university student, the practical experience and real-world examples always sparks our great interests. Consequently, the class is full of a contagious excitement, which will inspire us to seek more knowledge or even to pursue the field as the career.
  Secondly, faculty who work outside will have the knowledge about the recent development of the application of the field, which is crucial to students' making the decision whether to choose the field as the career. The professors with field experience will bring up-to-data information about the widely used technology in the field, the current job market or the development aspect of the market of the field, while it is difficult for college job-directing department to give these details. Further more, a large project always needs not only the experts in only one field, but also experts in other profession. And such projects will also call for cooperation of all the experts, which will let them know the application of their profession in other fields. Such knowledge will be informed the students and in result will give them more choice about future career. For instance, more and more students major in mathematics come to the economics field which is, to some extent, due to the intercommunication of two fields in the working outside the academia.
  In the final analysis, basing on the balance between the field work and college work, both students will surely benefit from faculty's field work and the college and university should promote this.




Argument提纲
Argument 2
1 平均价格的提升并不一定是因为这个restriction 的提出，可能哟其他原因，如地价，人民收入，经济发展等。
2. 就算是因为restriction 的提出， 7年前有效的措施应用到现在不一定有效
3. 未考虑Brookville 和Deerhaven的差异，这有可能导致相同的措施无法生效

Argument 51
1.       两组病人的具体情况未知：如受伤程度，年龄， 性别
2.       两个不同科目的医师可能除了使用抗体上有差别外可能还有许多其他的疗法上的不同。
3.       该理论是建立在严重肌肉扭伤的前提下，所以不能让所有的肌肉扭伤者都服用抗生素。

荧惑UID: 2280559

?????无开头段?????标新立异?????
    I strong agree the speakers’ claim that teachers working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach is beneficial to students they teach. However, a threshold qualification should be added to this claim, which is how to seek the balance between working outside the academic world and teaching and researching in their professions. With limited energy, if the professors spend most of his time working outside, it is impossible for them to give much attention to the teaching and academic research, which will impede the improvement of the quality of instruction at the college and university. (这句子8错啊...) In fact, such problem is real appeared in the complex modern world especially regarding to the work have a profitable income which is much more than they can earn in the college or have something do with rising the professors' reputation and position in their areas of specialty. In the field economics, for example, it is quite common to see that the professors plunge themselves into stock market or making a business project for corporations, which result in lacking time to do the college work.
   Aside from the qualification working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach will definitely do well to the improvement of the quality of instruction at the college and university level. There are two benefits of doing so. Firstly, the faculty working outside will get much personal experience about the professions outside the academia, which can be applied into the daily teaching. As a university student, the practical experience and real-world examples always sparks our great interests. Consequently, the class is full of a contagious excitement, which will inspire us to seek more knowledge or even to pursue the field as the career.
  Secondly, faculty who work outside will have the knowledge about the recent development of the application of the field, which is crucial to students' making the decision whether to choose the field as the career. The professors with field experience will bring up-to-data information about the widely used technology in the field, the current job market or the development aspect of the market of the field, while it is difficult for college job-directing department to give these details. Further more, a large project always needs not only the experts in only one field, but also experts in other profession. And such projects will also call for cooperation of all the experts, which will let them know the application of their profession in other fields. Such knowledge will be informed the students and in result will give them more choice about future career. For instance, more and more students major in mathematics come to the economics field which is, to some extent, due to the intercommunication of two fields in the working outside the academia.
  In the final analysis, basing on the balance between the field work and college work, both students will surely benefit from faculty's field work and the college and university should promote this.

----写得很好啊,只是条理很乱,段落结构不清楚

chenmi8812UID: 2261072

我也觉得，能不能说得具体一点

Sam_WinnieUID: 2310173

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荧惑UID: 2280559

第三篇的结构就好很多了