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发表于 2007-3-30 17:58:03 |只看该作者

问一下，bz的铁匠铺还开么？。。。。。

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发表于 2007-3-30 18:08:26 |只看该作者

这期同主题总结完了就开

要不要为了title换学校重新申加拿大学签？

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发表于 2007-3-30 18:17:18 |只看该作者

谢谢
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=638685&extra=page%3D1

1 To begin with, the argument simply connects a questionable correlation between the high consumption and people there visiting the doctor for few times.
2 In addition, even if fish consumption actually contributes to the treatment of colds, it is illegitimate to judge the recommend of daily use of Ichthaid, according to the nutritional supplement derived from fish oil.
3 Finally, the arguer believes that people without colds--which are the reason mort frequently given for absences from school and work.

[ 本帖最后由 dennis1230 于 2007-3-31 02:01 编辑 ]

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发表于 2007-3-30 20:56:13 |只看该作者

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-638490-1-1.html

版主帮我改一下!
谢谢

1.First of all, the argument base on the unsubstantiated assumption that colds are the reason for the absenteeism in the schools and workplaces
2.The second is that other neglect other seasons that may cause people in East Meria less visits the doctor.
3.Even if the people in East Meria less catch a cold, it is not necessary means that it is the fish that prevent colds.
4.Even if it is the fish that prevent colds, the author do not provide evidence that it is the Ichthaid in fish oil that prevent the colds.

[ 本帖最后由 iq28 于 2007-3-30 21:43 编辑 ]

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发表于 2007-3-30 21:32:03 |只看该作者

原帖由 iq28 于 2007-3-30 18:08 发表
这期同主题总结完了就开

周一就考了，看来是赶不上了:(

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发表于 2007-3-30 21:43:51 |只看该作者

回复 #20 chongxinlai 的帖子

加油，最后两天稍微休息一下

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发表于 2007-3-30 22:55:02 |只看该作者

。。。。。。。原来这样

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发表于 2007-3-30 23:56:34 |只看该作者

帮忙看看，不过没有限时...
:loveliness:

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=638687&extra=page%3D1

1) the author fails to substantiate an unreasonable assumption that eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds.
2) it is presumptuous for the author to recommend that the everyday use of Ichthaid has the same effect as eating fish.
3) it is reasonably dubious for the author to assert that the daily use of Ichthaid would lead to the decrease of absenteeism.
4) Finally, the author fails to find out the real reasons of absenteeism.

[ 本帖最后由 Prudence 于 2007-4-1 10:42 编辑 ]

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