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发表于 2007-4-10 23:26:33 |显示全部楼层
Issue208  15 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧!
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The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people.
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In most extent, people always do what they like and will, so the appearance and behavior of the people shows their attitudes and interests. Similarly, a society always induces its people to do according to its ideas and values, therefore at most time, the way people look, dress, and act reveals the values and ideas of their society. Admittedly, the speaker's assertion is well-presented and basic rational, and I agree with it.

First, when it comes to school, nowadays in china more or less all the students in schools are more prone to study nature science disciplines, such as maths, chemistry, physics, and the like. And even some students had to choose some culture disciplines, such as history, politics, geography, and so forth, still they do not regard their choose a better one, great possibly because their first choose--the nature science disciplines are extremely difficult to themselves, and they had to give up this choice and catch the other one instead. Obviously, through observing our students' interest in disciplines, it is easy to find that our society place more emphasis on the nature science, and little attention has been paid to human culture science. Such attitudes of our society is due to our society's goal--pursuing the material worth--which can be gain directly by developing the nature science, and on which the culture science is of little effective.

Secondly, take Japan and the Republic of Korea as example. In Japan, their people pay great attention on the economical action. If, many things, they are not used up, their people will not put or throw away. Like a paper, that their students use it to calculate questions, will not be replaced by another one until there is no empty place to write on this one. And such behavior is one of Japan' values---advocate spare. Then to the Republic of Korea, its people may be the best people in doing the recalling the rubbish. In such a country, every one has the sense to put different rubbish into different place for recalling. Clearly, their acts are strong relative with their country's ideas--protecting environment.

Yet, not any case will be concurred to such assertion. Still let's have a look at China. Even our country also has such ideas and values in sparing and protecting environment, our people always do the reverse side. If we only observe our people, it is hardly finding such social ideas and values. The reason of such special condition, I think, is because our people are not strong concerning on such values, and our country does not give large enough measure to induce its people.

In the final analysis, I agree with the speaker’s assertion that in most cases, the way people look, dress, and act reveals they like and will, and the appearance and behavior of the people reveals the values and ideas of their society. However, in some cases, the values of the society may be not easily recognized by observer of the people in society for its people are not accepting such values heart and soul.

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In most extent, people always do what they like and will, so the appearance and behavior of the people shows their attitudes and interests. Similarly, a society always induces its people to do according to its ideas and values, therefore at most time, the way people look, dress, and act reveals the values and ideas of their society. Admittedly, the speaker's assertion is well-presented and basic rational, and I agree with it (很有可能让人误会你完全同意耶,是不是要加个partly在后边阿?).

First, when it comes to school, nowadays in china (China) more or less all the students in schools are more prone to study nature science disciplines, such as maths, chemistry, physics, and the like. And even some students had to choose some culture disciplines, such as history, politics, geography, and so forth, still they do not regard their choose a better one, great possibly because their first choose--the nature science disciplines are extremely difficult to themselves, and they had to give up this choice and catch the other one instead. Obviously, through observing our students' interest in disciplines, it is easy to find that our society place more emphasis on the nature science, and little attention has been paid to human culture science. Such attitudes of our society is due to our society's goal--pursuing the material worth--which can be gain directly by developing the nature science, and on which the culture science is of little effective. (不是很看得懂这段的论点和内容)


Secondly, take Japan and the Republic of Korea as example. In Japan, their people pay great attention on the economical action. If, many things, they are not used up, their people will not put or throw away. Like a paper, that their students use it to calculate questions, will not be replaced by another one until there is no empty place to write on this one. And such behavior is one of Japan' values---advocate spare. Then to the Republic of Korea, its people may be the best people in doing the recalling the rubbish. In such a country, every one has the sense to put different rubbish into different place for recalling. Clearly, their acts are strong relative with their country's ideas--protecting environment.

Yet, not any case will be concurred to such assertion. Still let's have a look at China. Even our country also has such ideas and values in sparing and protecting environment, our people always do the reverse side. If we only observe our people, it is hardly finding such social ideas and values. The reason of such special condition, I think, is because our people are not strong concerning on such values, and our country does not give large enough measure to induce its people.

In the final analysis, I agree with the speaker’s assertion that in most cases, the way people look, dress, and act reveals they like and will, and the appearance and behavior of the people reveals the values and ideas of their society. However, in some cases, the values of the society may be not easily recognized by observer of the people in society for its people are not accepting such values heart and soul.

感觉这篇文章的论点与总的论点基本脱节,貌似跑题了,或是例子不恰当,建议好好研究一下,星期六晚上大家讨论一下也可以。
我是这样分析的:

①      服饰。
A服饰透露出宗教信仰,宗教信仰有时可透露政治信仰。如:Arabia people,男子身着white aba, 女子use headcloth, black gauze. Islamic. They believe that all the political power gender from Allah, every citizen has the right to participate in deciding national policy.
B色彩鲜艳,开放;整齐划一,传统,封闭。
②      行为。对人热情,平等。
③      服饰和行为可具有欺骗性deceivingA.有的人比较conservative B 有的人动机不纯,如:spyC国家机器press

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