About PS - correction service

KaliUID：110664

After my final exams (12/19), I should have some time free for myself. I am willing to use that time to correct people's personal statements. So if you don't need to hand in your PS until after Christmas, you can send a copy to me to have it corrected.

Please note:

1. The main things I can help you with are grammar and choice of words.

2. I can give very general suggestions about content, but I am not responsible for writing any original text for you.

3. While you can tell me the meaning of a certain sentence in Chinese, I will not to translate an entire PS from Chinese to English.

4. Please limit your PS to about 600 words MAXIMUM.

5. This volunteer service is ONLY available to the continually active participants of this board. I reserve the right to decline submissions from those who I feel are taking unfair advantage of my goodwill. If I receive more statements than I can handle, I will have to cut off those who emailed me late.

6. Although I am very confident in my writing abilities, I don't claim to be perfect.

7. One PS per person, please. If you don't need your PS corrected, I can correct one recommendation letter for you instead.

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A little bit about me: I came to U.S. at the age of 13 and am currently studying Government at Cornell.

KaliUID：110664

I would like to help as many people as possible, so if I have any time left after going through PS, I'll see about recommendation letters. But I don't expect to be able to get to them.

KaliUID：110664

But, if you don't need your PS corrected, I can correct one recommendation letter instead.

booboo1UID：115473

Kali, you are so nice.
especially, you can present in this kind of chinese forum so frequently. I thought many people who came here when they was young already forgot where they came from.
怎么表达得这么繁？不管如何大家应该明白我的意思的，对吧？
问一下，应该怎么说更顺口？

booboo1UID：115473

订正：was---were
尽管知道自己说的不地道，但也不应该有语法错误！

21cnUID：801

真是好人. 虽然我还是打算自力更生.

softcandyUID：114826

好人呀， by the way, kali, are you in USC?
21cn, me too.我也喜欢自力更生。 嘿嘿。

KaliUID：110664

What's USC?

softcandyUID：114826

maybe i made mistake. i have thought you stay in University of South California.

DreammUID：116526

:)

谢谢班竹，You are so nice！

KaliUID：110664

You are welcome. ^_^

To softcandy: Oh no, I only know of USC because I used to go to a business school.... ^_^

glin99UID：108865

oh, that's nice! It will be very helpful!

飞飞~UID：114951

谢谢版主哦!
虽然对我来说也是太晚了,但是相信有很多人需要这样的帮助的!
偶知道PS给尽可能多的人看的话质量会更好的.减少语法错误,表达更地道,甚至结构上的建议.......恩,虽然是大雪寒天,但是这里却觉得暖洋洋啊~~

xuer000UID：115359

Thanks Kali very much. You are so nice.

SongloveUID：114929

热烈支持斑竹，呵呵，我想get help，一个人憋呀憋，也不知到底怎么样，发到哪里呢？
to softcandy
斑竹不是，我可是很想去usc的，呵呵。