|||有些改错请教一下^_^

michellechinUID: 2301188

备考5月SAT呢```谢谢各位的帮忙哦```
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1.Lawrence likes to entertain his neighbors and invite them to dinner parties on special occasions; on the other hand, he values privacy and relaxation as well and thus does not want to see one showing up at the door every night.
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- ]- p1 R# g6 j6 [2.While we no longer live so far from school, we no longer worry about missing the bus.
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key: A. Why?

3.As the bell rang, Ms.Gutierrez realized that she had failed to instruct the students to bring their grammar books, so she sent the class to their lockers to retrieve the needed materials.

Key: D why?

4. Deleted from the play during the editing process was a scene which the author felt could offend many people and a potentially controversial reference to the recent civil strife in his country.
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Key: B. why?
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, W+ L/ M! w+ I4 M+ M" F/ S5 e5.When Ms.Ruiz arrived at the holiday sale, she realized that she had left her wallet at home and must go back to get it.

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[ 本帖最后由 michellechin 于 2007-4-21 17:09 编辑 ]

杀生玲UID: 2204304

1/ 应该改成somebody吧,one的前面没有可以指代的...

, ?" @1 I# h( |3 b2/ 应该是因果关系的吧... because之类的...
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3/ class这里是集合名词了吧,关系代词应该用单数,而这里明显指class里面的每一个个人,所以应该把class换掉,换成表示学生的复数名词...
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4/ 不清楚了...><
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5/ 时态不统一... :confused:

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忘得差不多了,呼唤达人...

michellechinUID: 2301188

感谢小杀JJ的解答！不过有个问题：用one一定要前面有可以指代的东东么？那么比如One shouldn't do exercise immediately after meals. 这里的one指代了什么呢？

杀杀UID: 2329451

介个... 差了下字典,这个one做宾语的情况比较少吧... 一般可以用作表语如 is one who... 然后作主语 one should...
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michellechinUID: 2301188

厄....谢谢杀杀（其实我一开始还以为是杀生玲JJ改名了.....被T飞.........— — )
5.When Ms.Ruiz arrived at the holiday sale, she realized that she had left her wallet at home and must go back to get it.
8 {" g; k" i6 d- [# F( V这句偶自己解决了，把must改成had to。。。听课笔记上发现个...

michellechinUID: 2301188

4. Deleted from the play during the editing process was a scene which the author felt could offend many people and a potentially controversial reference to the recent civil strife in his country.

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杀杀UID: 2329451

:funk: 额... 介个... 杀生玲俗称杀杀... 呵呵... (悄悄啊...) 其实是一个人的... ;d:
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$ i4 S( R& l' z% z1 o2 m帮你顶...:loveliness:

杀生玲UID: 2204304

LS正解...

帮你顶... :loveliness:

kanganqiUID: 2156211

:confused: :confused: :confused: :confused:

又来了个杀杀???!!!

heng8866UID: 2327829

第一个前面是都是用发复数吧？
后面几个还没看

heng8866UID: 2327829

第四的一个是不是该用gerund形式？

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michellechinUID: 2301188

.......恩...先谢谢楼上诸位...
对不起我第四句答案写错了，应该是B错了，继续请教.........

michellechinUID: 2301188

这个......那第4句真诡异....高人们...嗯?

lq21233UID: 2166224

第四个没有主语啊，非谓语动词不能做主语，应该是*** which Deleted from the play,至于***应该是随便吧
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我也5月SAT,第二次了....

haiwuyaUID: 2234526

4. Deleted from the play during the editing process was a scene which the author felt could offend many people and a potentially controversial reference to the recent civil strife in his country.
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