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一共有8句.....十分感谢各位能赐教一下...备考中，怪紧张的......

1. Instead of using pencils and paper to record their work, students in frontier schools rather used pieces of chalk and a slate for their daily lessons.
key: C.i know it's wrong but  how to improve?

2.Upon reviewing a map of his property, John realized that he could not build the barn where he had intended because it belonged to a neighboring farmer.
key: C. 是不是it指代不清？

3.They say comedians face a difficult task: they must challenge and mock the status quo without alienating their audiences who live in the status quo.
key:A. why and how to improve?

4.两句比较一下。为什么一个对一个错：
(1)  When it debuted, the show was criticized by the press for being sophomoric; by the time the show reached it's third season, however, some critics came to appreciate the redeeming features of this witty comedy.
  key: B.
(2) The controversial magazine has been criticized for being partial, in every article, of the most conservative causes.
  key: C.是改成to 吧？可是这边B为什么是对的？

5.That our professor spoke so movingly about our history, but knew so very little about it, is perplexing.
key: no error. 有so very little 这个用法么？读着别扭阿..?

6. Only after he had wrote the note did Jason begin to feel remorse.
key: A.改成written, 不过我觉得remorse应该改成remorseful?

7.Unless they begin to accept the current political situation without responding violently, many guerillas will continue to be imprisoned by military leaders.
key: A. why and how to improve?

8.Unless scientists discover new ways to increase food production, the Earth will not be able to satisfy the food needs for all its inhabitants.
key: C. 介词搭配问题么？ BUT how to improve?

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9.Just a few years ago, DVDs utilizing advanced digital technology has experienced a marked rise in use over that of VHS cassettes.
B.experienced a marked rise in use
D.markedly rose in use
key: B, BUT what's wrong with D?

10.Although we were opposed to the program, we thought that despite its bilateral support, it would accomplish little.
B. We were opposed to the program because we thought it would have little accomplishment depite its bilateral support.
D. We opposed the program, despite its bilateral support, because we thought it would accomplish little.
key: D. What's wrong with B? wordy?

11.To go to the first rodeo, you need to visit Pecos, Texas, in 1883.
A.不变
B.have gone to the first rodeo, you needed to went to
C. be going to the first rodeo, you will need to visit
D. go to the first rodeo, you needed to visit
E. have gone to the first rodeo,you would have needed to visit
key:E.不太明白这是什么时态语态，ms不是虚拟?还有就是，E中冒出一个you是不是不对啊?

12.The validity of personality tests as an accurate measure of a person's innate capacities and desires have been frequently called into question.
key: has been frequently called into question.
为什么 is frequently called into question 不行?

13.The choice commuters make between taking the train or driving often come down to a preference for either stress reduction or increase in control.
C.The choice commuters make between taking the train or driving often comes
D.Commuters who choose to either take the train or drive often come
key: C. 可是C里怎么会是 between...or..?
   D为什么不行?

14. Societies acting through their governments make the rules to state which acts are illegal, but although war is the most violents of human activities, it has not been declared illegal by any of the world's governments or their agencies.
key: stating
厄..不太明白，主语是 societies acting through their governments 吧，那 make sth. doing?

UPDATING2
15.The ad stated that a piano was needed for the school play in good condition.
key: in good condition错了

16.Mr.Jones's decision to retire came as a  shock to all who respected his ability.
key: no error.不过我觉得who是否该改成whom,因为是在介词to后面？

17.Does that remark infer that you are displeased with the way I am managing the business?
key: infer错了...难道改成refer?

18.A work of singular beauty, Stanhope's painting Love and the Maiden captivates the longings and aspirations of an artistic generation that sought relief from the grim realities of urban life created by the Industrial Revolution.
key: captivates  是用词错还是时态错？

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