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发表于 2007-4-20 12:56:32 |显示全部楼层
一共有8句.....十分感谢各位能赐教一下...备考中,怪紧张的......
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3 ?1 A" X+ `4 l1 ^1. Instead of using pencils and paper to record their work, students in frontier schools rather used pieces of chalk and a slate for their daily lessons.
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2.Upon reviewing a map of his property, John realized that he could not build the barn where he had intended because it belonged to a neighboring farmer.
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! x9 @2 Q2 g) I; h3.They say comedians face a difficult task: they must challenge and mock the status quo without alienating their audiences who live in the status quo.7 M4 S+ q( q9 L6 t$ Z! `
key:A. why and how to improve?
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4.两句比较一下。为什么一个对一个错:
* c4 a' t6 G$ Z1 e+ q1 O(1)  When it debuted, the show was criticized by the press for being sophomoric; by the time the show reached it's third season, however, some critics came to appreciate the redeeming features of this witty comedy.& Z1 |; d: M( a# a8 J4 l4 h
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(2) The controversial magazine has been criticized for being partial, in every article, of the most conservative causes.+ q; s0 `7 r6 L5 b
  key: C.是改成to 吧? 可是这边B为什么是对的?, e1 ^$ {" O2 y, j

6 x- A) @4 f+ y" C( I3 |: h" r5.That our professor spoke so movingly about our history, but knew so very little about it, is perplexing.
) A7 B. J) B4 V1 ~1 W2 Hkey: no error. 有so very little 这个用法么?读着别扭阿..?
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6. Only after he had wrote the note did Jason begin to feel remorse.
4 \3 H; Y9 v5 T& V& y/ qkey: A.改成written, 不过我觉得remorse应该改成remorseful?% J4 R6 R  T1 P& S3 i! P( t- g: i

: M& c4 w- W6 m  |" w( U7.Unless they begin to accept the current political situation without responding violently, many guerillas will continue to be imprisoned by military leaders.! I7 l9 F- V* t) K! h
key: A. why and how to improve?! ]# h2 X& \2 l$ |
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8.Unless scientists discover new ways to increase food production, the Earth will not be able to satisfy the food needs for all its inhabitants.3 T$ p# k1 L$ A( ^8 N* l6 i
key: C. 介词搭配问题么? BUT   how to improve?
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UPDATING:
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5 ~" ]; s* o  \" p3 }* _9.Just a few years ago, DVDs utilizing advanced digital technology has experienced a marked rise in use over that of VHS cassettes.
% E- O& k. w4 r$ G$ [$ L- XB.experienced a marked rise in use, }6 s% r2 }0 j: X
D.markedly rose in use
& I9 _% ?! J8 D; J  Zkey: B, BUT what's wrong with D?
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& n1 l! a. v9 d4 z- b10.Although we were opposed to the program, we thought that despite its bilateral support, it would accomplish little.
3 r) y1 p- a; v! e5 HB. We were opposed to the program because we thought it would have little accomplishment depite its bilateral support.
( @# }9 q$ F/ `! ?; M5 d2 `! nD. We opposed the program, despite its bilateral support, because we thought it would accomplish little.
# g( Z1 b  K6 o# I0 v7 l( Ykey: D. What's wrong with B? wordy?
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11.To go to the first rodeo, you need to visit Pecos, Texas, in 1883.( [! u, F  z  x" t. W
A.不变
% H( k) j  [/ x; h- KB.have gone to the first rodeo, you needed to went to
4 v7 j3 q) a+ F6 yC. be going to the first rodeo, you will need to visit! p" d( d' T0 O% Q2 z" ~
D. go to the first rodeo, you needed to visit
; b" q$ l& J# n& oE. have gone to the first rodeo,you would have needed to visit
0 a* v4 d6 M5 Xkey:E.不太明白这是什么时态语态,ms不是虚拟?还有就是,E中冒出一个you是不是不对啊?0 L/ p* {3 x, P/ d0 J7 x) n; }9 ~

" S$ F' t& i3 `* H2 Z12.The validity of personality tests as an accurate measure of a person's innate capacities and desires have been frequently called into question.
# s" `" D# }: \9 W; E  m& Bkey: has been frequently called into question.' y+ U; w8 F. _, X" _/ d  Y4 A
   为什么 is frequently called into question 不行?3 G6 o' P% V; e7 N
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13.The choice commuters make between taking the train or driving often come down to a preference for either stress reduction or increase in control." A* b5 |' ~# V% x; H
C.The choice commuters make between taking the train or driving often comes
0 W, z- w7 P; i9 `D.Commuters who choose to either take the train or drive often come0 A: f6 O5 O- ]
key: C. 可是C里怎么会是 between...or..?: G5 M% @0 |5 i* W- H
      D为什么不行?& X+ W- k: ]3 G4 }) Q1 x( e1 k

! A) c% [( s( M7 w% ]# o14. Societies acting through their governments make the rules to state which acts are illegal, but although war is the most violents of human activities, it has not been declared illegal by any of the world's governments or their agencies.
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厄..不太明白,主语是 societies acting through their governments 吧,那 make sth. doing?
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15.The ad stated that a piano was needed for the school play in good condition.+ J: N/ p8 O$ e% F! {
key: in good condition错了
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- a" z" n8 J- Z. M5 \16.Mr.Jones's decision to retire came as a  shock to all who respected his ability.
, X+ m; H# h  z; `. H" ckey: no error.不过我觉得who是否该改成whom,因为是在介词to后面?6 \/ u: S# X* J
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17.Does that remark infer that you are displeased with the way I am managing the business?. Z/ h8 p7 w5 h+ E2 N3 v+ T0 m4 b
key: infer错了...难道改成refer?
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18.A work of singular beauty, Stanhope's painting Love and the Maiden captivates the longings and aspirations of an artistic generation that sought relief from the grim realities of urban life created by the Industrial Revolution.9 m% {6 ]1 H( }( P, C* L
key: captivates  是用词错还是时态错?& C" x1 G; X: t5 D& R" I6 }
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发表于 2007-4-20 14:54:39 |显示全部楼层
:funk: 额天天都做这位MM的语法问题... & k/ Y+ n' A- ]9 M, c; h! f# Z
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1/ 删掉rather...
" j& i! l( V4 U5 c2 |2/ 对,因为前面有名词 map property barn... 就不知道指的什么了...9 f& N6 i, D3 A- V( u
3/ 动词后面接双宾语,say不可以,可以改为 judge... 它后面可以接judge sth adj... 8 V5 `) T& r: z; |9 R% r3 K
4/ 介个... 8清楚..." J5 C# w. v; W
5/ 既然有这个用法就记住吧...
6 L6 d4 S0 t8 U2 H  _/ C6/ feel后面可以接N的... 如 feel hunger/a great joy 等...9 f' ^4 _- F+ X  p
7/ 指代不清... 你觉得应该是后面的guerillas呢还是leaders呢...+ k4 r7 s% R- `5 G( u  g
8/ by or from...

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发表于 2007-4-20 15:39:25 |显示全部楼层
呵呵````谢谢杀杀前辈啦````4 B6 E& m9 o+ Z; g- `% g
其实````这两天在弄语法``问题多了黑````
: r0 o$ Z4 I4 c$ j) J# _待会再打上来点....(被T飞...)

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发表于 2007-4-20 20:24:19 |显示全部楼层
9.D因为少了个EXPERIENCE的意义咯.改句子只改语法和表达的问题,不能改变原句的意思.
& X, x9 j6 F/ f6 y10. B好象逻辑有点问题,DESPITE放在后面就感觉是HAVE LITTLE ACCOMPLISHMENT的从句了,这样从意思理解上....就有点不通啊~很诡异的......
* m1 U2 ^% Y' f4 a. x3 t( w11.这个就是虚拟语气拉.那个,YOU单独出现不错的,只有YOU 和ONE一起出现才有错.$ x/ P* e7 b- v' @$ h% ]
12.虽然这题我也有点不理解,但是MS当时我上课的时候老师是说:当频率副词表示的是一段时间的时候,就要用完成式.我也没明白为什么......:confused:
) n6 G" t6 Y- \4 _; t9 k13.那个C选项我记得题目上应该不是OR,而是AND吧
  n3 c& _9 A: }" }    至于另一个选项,那个逻辑有点问题.因为只有可能某个选择归结于某个倾向.人怎么能归结于某个倾向呢?!

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发表于 2007-4-21 08:27:54 |显示全部楼层
先谢谢Olua!!!2 d' G: {0 j( n: K' T+ e4 N
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查了下,[13]原题上是or....题错了?
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& g1 [% D  c5 O. n$ v& o* T[11]的这种虚拟句式...偶才疏学浅,不太明白,只知道 if had done/were/did, could/would have done这种, 题中的虚拟,句子是什么意思?
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13/ 估计是...
: n( t$ B8 P( L* ]+ K10/ 对,是wordy了... 做题是看见最长的那个要格外小心,一般不选最长的... 你可以总结一下... 这仅仅是个人总结,呵呵...: l+ ?) L' G- O
11/ 你说的那种就是题目里的情况啊... 只不过开头换成了to而已...
. X2 O' D: v0 N- m; D4/ 我还是不明白...

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发表于 2007-4-21 16:43:06 |显示全部楼层
12,原句的时态方向没错的话就不要改动了

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发表于 2007-4-21 20:25:00 |显示全部楼层
恩谢谢``懂了``- u8 ?+ d8 U* Z6 ~9 _+ H" M, \
又加了一句上去,望指教^_^

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应该是make sth... 然后sth是rules,这个rules的修饰语是stating...就是说...XXX制订了...样儿的rules...

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发表于 2007-4-21 22:21:32 |显示全部楼层
多谢^-^- }  d( K! I# W7 `4 R  E
下面这几道如何:
. B) W8 h- f6 j3 m5 A1.The ad stated that a piano was needed for the school play in good condition.+ a4 S8 p! r! }$ @
key: in good condition错了1 e" u  w; T4 X

( H9 Y8 E' I- F2 q# \7 R" `2.Mr.Jones's decision to retire came as a  shock to all who respected his ability.
. y; @) T; ~0 S$ A! i% {key: no error.不过我觉得who是否该改成whom,因为是在介词to后面?4 j1 b2 K4 f; o* M- n* c5 a

! ?1 Y: b) b# A3.Does that remark infer that you are displeased with the way I am managing the business?
+ O6 H6 x  e% x  R: kkey: infer错了...难道改成refer?) }6 j' k3 K" r6 b: |

* N' f$ T8 f( Z7 V) M) x4.A work of singular beauty, Stanhope's painting Love and the Maiden captivates the longings and aspirations of an artistic generation that sought relief from the grim realities of urban life created by the Industrial Revolution.
- J1 }( G& B# }$ x, a' R- V- Ukey: captivates  是用词错还是时态错?

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发表于 2007-4-22 12:19:01 |显示全部楼层
恩...自己顶一下....

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发表于 2007-4-22 19:32:33 |显示全部楼层
补充了4个问题上去,请教高人哦^-^  小女子感激不尽......

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发表于 2007-4-22 22:18:24 |显示全部楼层
1.这题好象是BARRON上的.说是 in good condition位置错了,应该放在PIANO后面.. }5 v( o( q4 |
2.WHO没有直接跟在TO后面啊~这里表示宾格的是ALL,至于怎么样的ALL,就来了句定语从句修饰ALL,WHO不能变成宾格.8 i1 J/ `: |/ ~5 P! d
3.好象也是BARRON上的.记得BARRON上说ERROR IN DICTION. 它建议把INFER 改为INDICATE.我觉得可能是INFER偏重于推理得到的结果;而INDICATE偏重于表达出UNDERLIING ASSUMPTION" E( I2 q0 _+ M, {" i5 N) a+ V+ z1 b+ {
4.又是BARRON的, ERROR IN DICTION.  captivates  --- CAPTURE

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发表于 2007-4-22 22:26:44 |显示全部楼层
Thank U SO much!!Olua!

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