Issue51 Victors 第2周 第2次作业

菲子UID: 2311527

51. "Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."

提纲：

1．  同意题目给出的观点
2．  给每个人合适的教学方法可以带来更好的教学效果。（举例，某项调查显示，较低的师生比带来较高的成绩， 家长为教师的儿童可以获得更好的学业成就）
3．  教给学生每个人感兴趣的课程内容可以提高学习效率。
4．  教给每个学生最擅长的课程内容可以充分发挥他们的优势(心理学理论，乔丹的例子)
5．  结尾概括。

Nowadays, it is very common for a teacher to teach many students (often more than ten) in one class at the same time, so it is almost impossible to teach everyone individually. But I do agree with the idea of designing education to meet the individual needs and interests of each student.

In the first place, the appropriate teaching method applied to the students respectively may cause better result. For instance, it is fairly common that some students who can not get good marks are reproached by parents. As is shown in many researches of psychology, the way people dealing with information are various. Good marks attribute not only to the diligence of the students but also to the indigenous factors. If the students are taught in proper way for them, they will find it easier to learn, which makes them think that they can learn as good as others.

As is shown in a survey conducted at 2 classes in a primary school by Education School of Peking University, the average mark of a class containing only 15 students is significantly higher than that of a class of 50 students, with other conditions controlled. The advanced study demonstrates that because the students in small class will receive more attention from the teachers, they are more likely to have special education from teachers. The different teaching methods for each one are more likely to be applied.

As is accepted by many people, children of teachers often have better academic achievements than others for their parent can instruct them individually, especially when they encounter some problems in academic. The process of individual instruction is not only concerning the knowledge, more importantly, but also concerning the learning methods.

In the second place, the knowledge that students are interested in differ from each other. Some students prefer Maths, while some others prefer Arts. Teaching students what they really want to learn is of great importance, which will make them active, consequently enhance their efficiency in learning.

In addition, everyone has his or her own advantages. Many psychologists have agreed that intelligence is not a simple thing, but a multiple integrity. In the theory of multi-intelligences, the famous psychologist Howard Gardener claims that there are 8 sorts of intelligence in human’s mind. Consequently, teaching what is really appropriate for them can fully exploit their potential. If Michael Jordan, one of the most famous basketball players in American, was forced to study Mathematics, he might not become as successful as now.

To conclude, when every student can receive appropriate education designed to their own need concerning the teaching methods and the knowledge, along with their own interests, the education will truly be effective.

ghost33UID: 2267869

51. "Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."

提纲：

1．  同意题目给出的观点
2．  给每个人合适的教学方法可以带来更好的教学效果。（举例，某项调查显示，较低的师生比带来较高的成绩， 家长为教师的儿童可以获得更好的学业成就）
3．  教给学生每个人感兴趣的课程内容可以提高学习效率。
4．  教给每个学生最擅长的课程内容可以充分发挥他们的优势(心理学理论，乔丹的例子)(好象论点不是很充分)
5．  结尾概括。

Nowadays, it is very common for a teacher to teach many students (often more than ten) in one class at the same time, （逻辑性不够）so it is almost impossible to teach everyone individually. But I do agree with the idea of designing education to meet the individual needs and interests of each student.

In the first place, the appropriate teaching method applied to the students respectively may cause better result（有这种表达？）. For instance, it is fairly common that some students who can not get good marks are reproached by parents As is shown in many researches of psychology, the way people dealing with information are various. （这两句话没说好，感觉突兀.） Good marks attribute not only to the diligence of the students but also to the indigenous factors. If the students are taught in proper way for them, they will find it easier to learn, which makes them think that they can learn as good as others.

As is shown in a survey conducted at 2 classes in a primary school by Education School of Peking University, the average mark of a class containing only 15 students is significantly higher than that of a class of 50 students, with other conditions controlled. The advanced study demonstrates that because the students in small class will receive more attention from the teachers, they are more likely to have special education from teachers. The different teaching methods for each one are more likely to be applied.（最好有句话统领这一段）

As is accepted by many people, children of teachers often have better academic achievements than others for their parent can instruct them individually, especially when they encounter some problems in academic. The process of individual instruction is not only concerning the knowledge, more importantly, but also concerning the learning methods.（这句话需要进一步阐述）

In the second place, the knowledge that students are interested in differ from each other. Some students prefer Maths, while some others prefer Arts. Teaching students what they really want to learn is of great importance, which will make them active, consequently enhance their efficiency in learning.

In addition, everyone has his or her own advantages. Many psychologists have agreed that intelligence is not a simple thing, but a multiple integrity. In the theory of multi-intelligences, the famous psychologist Howard Gardener claims that there are 8 sorts of intelligence in human’s mind. Consequently, teaching what is really appropriate for them can fully exploit their potential. If Michael Jordan, one of the most famous basketball players in American, was forced to study Mathematics, he might not become as successful as now.

To conclude, when every student can receive appropriate education designed to their own need concerning the teaching methods and the knowledge, along with their own interests, the education will truly be effective
写得不错。
只是逻辑不够清晰，最后一个论点不够有力。

菲子UID: 2311527

谢谢