六月IELTS 七分保底小组 (A类)灵雨离子第一次作业(完成4/5)

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图1 （144words）
The bar graph shows that married women do more unpaid work than the men; however, it is not depend on how many kids they have.

Married women without children spend about 30 hours a week on the unpaid work. The hours ascend sharply when they have children. And it rises slowly as the children increasing. Despite married men use fewer hours than their wives. For instance, the hours of a man without children are lacked 10 hours than his wife a week. Compared with the women, men spend less and less hours when they have more and more children.

From the graph we could know that the salary of the men is the main income of their families. So they must pay more attention to the paid work especially they have more kids. In that case the unpaid work is afforded by their wives.


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With the computer breaking into our lives, the manner of life has been changed, and the world has been smaller than before. Some people are in favor of the idea of depending on computers; however others argue that computers have many drawbacks.

The first group believes that computers keep our work efficient and convenient. For instance, in businesses or hospitals the datum are stored be computers, they are reserved more and more on the computer than the paper. With the development of the internet, computers take part in a large field just as fly planes. Moreover, in our lives, we could acquaint others through the blogs, though we don’t know their faces. In short, computers will be the mainstream in the future.

The others are of the opinion that computers have a lot of insecure factors. For one thing, the hackers are the mainly dangerous to the businesses, because the important information will be prowled by hackers. For anther, the Internet Game enables the juveniles to forget their books and wastes parents’ too much money. In addition, the computers keep people more and more chatting on-line, and less and less face to face. In conclusion, computers must be treated more suspiciously.

In summary, computer has both benefits and drawbacks whatever effects it has, one thing is certain; computer in itself is neither good nor bad. It is the use to which it is put that determines its value to society.


加添中。。。

[ 本帖最后由 灵雨离子 于 2007-5-6 18:53 编辑 ]

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

有比较低级的语法错误。。我觉得字数太少。。需要好好练习
5-6分

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加油!

灵雨离子UID: 2332383

没人给改呢？

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图2 (156 words)
The pie graph describes in the percentage of employment patterns between female and male in Great Britain after the Women's Liberation Movement. It is clear that women have remarkable freedom in the opportunities as men.

For one thing, there is greater change in the percents of occupation of clerical and related between females (30%) and males (2%). For another thing, 11% females are engaged in other non-manual, in contrite with 5% males. In addition, other manual saw a gap from 32% in females to 28% males.

However, male also have greater opportunities in managerial and professional, craft or similar and general laborer. Especially in the craft or similar, there are in the percentage of 21 for male, and in the percentage of 4.5 for female. Moreover general laborer saw another difference that 0.5% in women and 5% in men.

As can be seen from the graph, females compared with males have some opportunities in Great Britain.

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图3(149words)

The line graph reveals that Service occupied most parts of GDP and Natural Resource and Industry both occupied only about 19 percent of GDP in 1995. But the statistic of the form show the people who work at Natural Resource accounted for about 77 percent of societal workers in 1992.

From 1986 to 1992, the proportion of Industry kept raise. Because the development of worldwide science technology made many developing countries’ industry to swift improve. For contenting the resource need of young industry, Natural Resource offered millions of jobs for people. As the proportion of Industry increasing, the percentage of Service and Natural Resource in GDP drop successively during 1986 to 1992. The increase of industry became mild since 1994 and the percentage of industry only rose 2 percent in 1994. The Natural Resource in GDP suddenly mounted up about 3 percent in 1992 and kept digressive trend later.