六月IELTS 七分保底小组 (A类)H-Kevin 第三次作业 5/5

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As can be seen from table, the preference for features of automatic washing machine is varied in different countries.

In Germany and France, people have the same choice in shell dimensions with 34' & narrow, drum material in enamel, capacity with 5 kilos and washing action in agitator. Compared to German and France, the people in United Kingdom and Sweden have the equal favorite data in shell dimensions with 34' & wide, drum material in stainless steel, front loading, capacity with 6 kilos and washing action in tumble.

Only in Germany, top loading is one of preferred features. Take account into the spin speed, the people in United Kingdom like the highest speed about 850 rps of all other three countries, 800 rpm in Sweden, 700 rps in Germany and 600 rps in France. The water heating system is popular not in Germany and Sweden but in United Kingdom and France.

The styling feature is totally different among four countries. Indestructible appearance, inconspicuous appearance, elegant appearance and strong appearance is listed separately in United Kingdom, Germany, France and Sweden.

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[ 本帖最后由 H-Kevin 于 2007-5-21 21:39 编辑 ]

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图表题 2

In order to finish a formal academic essay, we need pass through two parts, including six steps, before we submit by deadline.

The first part has three steps. At the beginning of writing, we should discuss task and topic with tutor, and gain the reading list what conclude the context we might use in our essay. Then we do research about our assignment, by reading books and taking notes in library, and by giving questionnaires and conducting interviews or surveys. The end step of the first part is writing first draft in which we utilize our outline of essay and material got from last steps to finish our first draft in formal written style and checked language.

There are also three steps in the second part after which we will submit our complete essay. We bring our first essay in the study group discussion for solving some problems and asking for new ideas and suggestions. Then we start the writing of second draft essay, in this step, we need read materials again for checking quotations and find out some new context. Finally, we will achieve our final draft after the precondition which includes checking spell, compiling bibliography and adding title page is finished. When we finish all of six steps, submitting by deadline will be the epilogue of entire process.

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图表题 3

As can be seen from the diagram, before product goods appear in markets, it passed a series of stages. And there are two main flow formed the production process

The first flow is manufacturing process. Raw material and manufactured components will be collected into storage, and then production planning will utilize these substances to assemble the goods. After the inspection and testing, the middle part of whole manufacturing process, qualified goods will be packaged and dispatched into sales department.

However, through the entire manufacturing process, the flow of information feedback is showing their function in several stages. Both the design stage, in which the information collected from product research, market research and testing are sent into production planning, and market stage in which the important information collected from sales stage are sent into design stage, package stage and advertising department. Sales department and production planning stage also sent back their information respectively to production planning stage and storage.

Thus the goods not only produced based on the fundamental manufacturing process, but also pass the process of information feedback for modifying the fault and improving the techniques in the manufacturing process.

H-KevinUID: 2182070

After the First World War, the nuclear technology has a rapid progress due to the needing of nuclear weapon in some industrial countries. This aim might be already became one of the faults what the people use for critic this technology. But, with the development of human culture, advantage are brought by the promising research of new nuclear technology has changed our life in a unconverted way, such as the benefit from clear energy and space exploration.

The traditional energy, coal and wood, already serve human being in several centuries with their serious pollution. In stead of finding out the solution of this contamination, the nuclear power, a replaced energy, will be a good material to replace this traditional energy. For instance, the percentage of entire energy in France rises at 80% during these years. Incontestably, this kind of energy caused serious damage in India and Russia last century. However, if we can use perfect technology in prevention, as that done in France, there will be no damage harm from this clear energy.

As a power for the space craft, nuclear energy also contributes to the field of space exploration. In order to discovering the unknown space to exploit new planet for human being living, scientist must research out the spacecraft what can drive in space for several years. Without the nuclear power, based on recent research level, scientist still have no better idea about the power substance for their planet craft.

However, there is undeniable fact that the abusive nuclear energy must cause catastrophic event in the world. When we take account of the nuclear bomb exploding in two cities of Japan where thousands of millions innocent people lost their life, the research of nuclear technology should be more preciously.

Finally, considering the nuclear technology has bring us with such many benefits as clear energy and spacecraft power, left along the damage might accompany with, our ordinary life has been changed much more by not its damage and fault but benefit and promising application.

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

sigh....long time no see such a complicated article..有点Chinglish的痕迹，但是可以进步。。一些语法还是存在问题。。
我觉得给分应该在6-7之间

H-KevinUID: 2182070

多谢yidi版，那我就按照这个模式写作文了:handshake

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

....model....最好弄个。。。

H-KevinUID: 2182070

魔板估计给分会卡死吧，我都不敢用``````````````;d:

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

:o用自己创作的模版啊。。

H-KevinUID: 2182070

这个吗......好难啊.......我试验一下看看:loveliness:

H-KevinUID: 2182070

Comparing artists and cultural projects, basic infrastructure projects contribute to the living of entire citizens. In addition, minority people still live in the poor condition in the corner of cities, so the money used for the artists and cultural projects could improve their living condition by supporting basic infrastructure projects. So I agree with that basic infrastructure projects should receive more money than artists and cultural projects.

Firstly, such basic infrastructure projects as education system and health care system are important program in every city. If the government could spent money on developing these two systems, for example purchasing computer for every students in college and increase the health insurance for residents, students will have more chance to learn new technology and residents will reduce their burden that the fee of medicine and treatment are keep rise each year. Due to the improved living environment, I think every one will accept that government moves the money from the planned artists and cultural projects to basic infrastructure projects.

Secondly, the majority of unemployed people and handicapped people need money to support their ordinary consumption. Government could not assure that every one like unemployed people and handicapped people will have a good salary, however the basic living condition should be provided by government for creating a well-being society. From this point, I still think the money used for the public welfare have a more obvious effect than that used in artists and cultural projects.

Finally, I concede that artists and cultural projects, such as theatre, museum and sport consortium could provide citizens entertainment and cultural edification. In a civilized society, these artists and cultural projects are symbol of civilization degree of this city. So government also need appropriate funds for developing its construction of civilization, nevertheless government still need treat improving basic living condition as first stage.

In conclusion, artists and cultural projects will provide citizens entertainment and advocate civilization, so government should spent money on it. However, related to the common life of every citizens and basic life of majority of unemployed people and handicapped people, basic infrastructure projects should gain more money than that achieved by artists and cultural projects.



[ 本帖最后由 H-Kevin 于 2007-5-21 22:04 编辑 ]

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

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H-KevinUID: 2182070

写作真是4项里面最痛苦的！！~~~！

zeshowUID: 2270078

我使用word改的，一发上来就没有格式，放在附件里了

[ 本帖最后由 zeshow 于 2007-5-29 13:20 编辑 ]