Issue36【0710G Victors互助小组】第2次作业 by fengyinyang

fengyinyangUID: 2321139

The speaker of the topic makes an assertion that a person's greatness can be only decided by the people live after the person. It’s tempting when we consider the theories and ideology of the great individuals who had suffered a poor lives at their times have significant influence on the modern society .However, from my point of view, the speaker's assertion is only partially correct for the following reasons.

To begin with, some great theories and creation in the scientific field are far beyond the ideology and cognizance in the contemporary time. The elites had a deep insight into the essence that a common person can not easily understand because of the limitation of the knowledge system and productivity. Furthermore, some ideology is totally subversion to the tradition. Therefore, these outstanding theoretic seems to be useless, meaningless or even unforgivable. However, after several decades, as the improvement of the society, when people came back to all the greatness which they ignored or argued against, they was surprised to find it a access to solve the accumulated problems. Let’s bring our discussion to a more present and practical context. A concrete example appealing illustrates this point. Mendel, the founder of the genetics, discovered the inheritance of traits and developed the Mendel’s Laws of Inheritance which the contemporary biologist had no interest in. However, after the great scientist has been dead for 16 years, his theory was proved again and people honored him as the father of genetics. Therefore, we can easily draw a conclusion from the example that some significant contributions to the science can not be judged by their coevals-only by scientists follow them.

Additionally, artistic greatness seems to be much more easily received and can be immediately recognized. The aesthetic perception doesn't vary drastically in different ages. The maim criterion of an art can be decided by its surface. However, some great artworks, such as the works of Vencent van Gogh, were a little apart from the aesthetic inclination. Greatest artists are sometimes out of step of contemporary society but they will be finally recognized by populace.

However, some greatness which can bring the nations huge wealth can be recognizable immediately. Some new inventions and innovative methods has dramatically changed the productivity. This kind of innovation can create material improvement to society and it is readily recognized now. There is no doubt that it is Watt and his steam engine that has brought the Great Briton to the most powerful country in the global and changed the world. Moreover, the great inventions of our times are gradually affecting and updating our life style. This greatness has a common character: it is practical and follows the step of development. That may be the reason why the calculus was taking seriously in 17 century not in the Archimedes' times.

Taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that some greatness, which accord with the contemporary social situation, can be broadly recognized. Nevertheless, other great achievements, especially the ones beyond the ideology of majority, still need time to realize their value.

puzilongUID: 2308557

The speaker of the topic makes an assertion that a person's greatness can be only decided by the people live after the person. It’s tempting when we consider the theories and ideology of the great individuals who had suffered a poor lives at their times have significant influence on the modern society .However, from my point of view, the speaker's assertion is only partially correct for the following reasons.

To begin with, some great theories and creation in the scientific field are far beyond the ideology and cognizance in the contemporary time. The elites had a deep insight into the essence that a common person can not easily understand because of the limitation of the knowledge system and productivity. Furthermore, some ideology is totally subversion[subversive] to the tradition. Therefore, these outstanding theoretic seems to be useless, meaningless or even unforgivable. However, after several decades, as the improvement of the society, when people came back to all the greatness which they ignored or argued against, they was surprised to find it a access to solve the accumulated problems. Let’s bring our discussion to a more present and practical context. A concrete example appealing illustrates this point. Mendel, the founder of the genetics, discovered the inheritance of traits and developed the Mendel’s Laws of Inheritance which the contemporary biologist had no interest in. However, after the great scientist has[had] been dead for [for 有误]16 years, his theory was proved again and people honored him as the father of genetics. Therefore, we can easily draw a conclusion from the example that some significant contributions to the science can not be judged by their coevals-only by scientists follow them.

Additionally, artistic greatness seems to be much more easily received and can be immediately recognized. The aesthetic perception doesn't vary drastically in different ages. The maim[main] criterion of an art can be decided by its surface. However, some great artworks, such as the works of Vencent van Gogh, were a little apart from the aesthetic inclination. Greatest artists are sometimes out of step of contemporary society but they will be finally recognized by populace.

However, some greatness which can bring the nations huge wealth can be recognizable immediately. Some new inventions and innovative methods has dramatically changed the productivity. This kind of innovation can create material improvement to society and it is readily recognized now. There is no doubt that it is Watt and his steam engine that has brought the Great Briton to the most powerful country in[介词误] the global and changed the world. Moreover, the great inventions of our times are gradually affecting and updating our life style. This greatness has a common character: it is practical and follows the step of development. That may be the reason why the calculus was taking seriously in 17 century not in the Archimedes' times.

Taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that some greatness, which accord with the contemporary social situation, can be broadly recognized. Nevertheless, other great achievements, especially the ones beyond the ideology of majority, still need time to realize their value.


羡慕楼主啊.  挑不出什么语法毛病. 结构也很规范,蛮象范文的.