Issue97 【METTLE小组】第二次作业 by yangzengli

yangzengliUID: 2332195

97"It is unfortunate but true that political decisions and activities affect all aspects of people's lives."

              I agree with the speaker that it is indeed true that political decisions and activities have been permeated through all aspects of people's lives, but people usually benefit from them. Thus, they shouldn't be always considered as unfortunate things. As evading from them is impossible, it is wise to live with them in harmony and make good use of them in our current life.
               To begin with, all aspects including economy, culture and science are influenced by political decisions and activities directly or indirectly. To some extent, economy and culture is determined by the policies emended by the government. Let's take economy for example. As a hurricane comes out of people’s anticipation and causes a catastrophe over several states, then the price of the commodities over there rockets highly due to the shortage of daily goods. After that, the government promptly makes a decision to transfer a large amount of necessaries from other places to the states suffered from hurricane. By doing this, the economy condition over there soon improves a little and people's lives gradually resume from the miserable situation. From that viewpoint, it is largely attributed to political decisions bringing peace and aid to them. Now that political decisions and activities can make the economy recover from the recession, will they have the power to permeate into the field of science? In my observation, the development of science generally depends on the strategy of national defence. That is to say, the high-tech is originally motivated by the military purpose manipulated by politics. To enhance the power of national defence, arranged by the politics, many erudite scientists from different areas gather together to research on the foundation of the up-to-date military establishment. Thus, in some ways, political decisions and activities accelerate the speed of science development. In the end, the high-tech will make people’s life more convenient than before.
               However, besides these aspects, it is unfortunate that harsh political decisions and activities also partly affect our mind, which belongs to incorporeal aspects. And they simultaneity astrict people's deeds by shaping their value system, so that many people fail to realize their potential value absolutely. The conflicts between Israel and Palestine, deriving from the two country's political decisions and activities at times, cause several citizens who have received high education to become terrorists in the form of body bomb. This behavior brings convulsion to the whole society, therefore it should be cautious to handle the relationship between countries by politics. Otherwise, more unfortunate things will occur in this complicated world.
Admittedly, proper regulations and rules established by the government will facilitate the improvement of people's lives and boost the progress of the society. As humans have some innate foibles, only by enforcing people to abide with them, can human learn how to be their best selves and how to handle interpersonal things. Not until we have the ability to tell the right from the wrong and perform this moral ideology well, can regulations and rules be abolished, can political decisions and activities concerning personal restrictions be cancelled, and can the benefits brought by political decisions and activities of people be ignored.
                To sum up, political decisions and activities affects all aspects of people’s lives and they strongly resemble two-edged swords: utilizing them in an adroit way and be responsible for others will benefit people a lot, while performing them in a wrong method will make people suffer a lot. Just because sometimes it may be unfortunate, therefore, the major job of society is to convert them into the forms which are conducive to people’ lives, and the only thing left is to seek for a balance between them.


[ 本帖最后由 yangzengli 于 2007-6-9 23:59 编辑 ]

happyhappypigUID: 2342810

I agree with the speaker that it is indeed true that political decisions and activities have been permeated through all aspects of people's lives, but people usually benefit from them. Thus, they shouldn't be always considered as unfortunate things. As evading from them is impossible, it is wise to live with them in harmony and make good use of them in our current life.
               To begin with, all aspects including economy, culture and science are influenced by political decisions and activities directly or indirectly. To some extent, economy and culture is determined by the policies emended by the government. Let's take economy for example. 感觉好像前两句重复了？As a hurricane comes out of people’s anticipation and causes a catastrophe over several states, then可以去掉的吧 the price of the commodities over there rockets highly due to the shortage of daily goods. After that, the government promptly makes a decision to transfer a large amount of necessaries from other places to the states suffered from hurricane. By doing this, the economy condition over there soon improves a little  a little 去掉更好啊and people's lives gradually resume from the miserable situation.好例子，学习学习 From that viewpoint, it is largely attributed to political decisions bringing peace and aid to them. Now that political decisions and activities can make the economy recover from the recession, will they have the power to permeate into the field of science.不知道这个是疑问还是倒装？ In my observation, the development of science generally depends on the strategy of national defence. That is to say, the high-tech is originally motivated by the military purpose manipulated by politics. To enhance the power of national defence, arranged by the politics, many erudite scientists from different areas gather together to research on the foundation of the up-to-date military establishment. Thus, in some ways, political decisions and activities accelerate the speed of science development. In the end, 可不可以用 consequently but unexpectedly ? 在这里the high-tech will make people’s life more convenient than before.
               However, besides these aspects, it is unfortunate that harsh political decisions and activities also partly affect our mind, which belongs to incorporeal aspects incorpororeal aspects鬼佬会这么说吗，我不知道哦. And they simultaneity astrict people's deeds by shaping their value system, so that many people fail to realize their potential value absolutely. The conflicts between Israel and Palestine, deriving from the two country's political decisions and activities at times, cause several citizens who have received high education to become terrorists in the form of body bomb. This behavior brings convulsion to the whole society, therefore it should be cautious to handle the relationship between countries by politics. Otherwise, more unfortunate things will occur in this complicated world.

好像你写得是在生活中一段，在精神方面上一段，但是看例子好像可以说成是国内影响一段，国际影响一段，而且相对来说第二段body有点单薄虽然论证的很好也有例子

Admittedly, 上段however, 这个admittedly我就知道应该和b1 or b2有逻辑关系？我有点逻辑混乱proper regulations and rules established by the government will facilitate the improvement of people's lives and boost the progress of the society. As humans have some innate foibles, only by enforcing people to abide with them, can human learn how to be their best selves and how to handle interpersonal things. Not until we have the ability to tell the right from the wrong and perform this moral ideology well, can regulations and rules be abolished, can 后边这些can可以不用的吧political decisions and activities concerning personal restrictions be cancelled, and can the benefits brought by political decisions and activities of people be ignored.
                To sum up, political decisions and activities affects all aspects of people’s lives and they strongly resemble two-edged swords: utilizing them in an adroit way and be responsible for others will benefit people a lot, while performing them in a wrong method will make people suffer a lot. Just because sometimes it may be unfortunate, therefore, the major job of society is to convert them into the forms which are conducive to people’ lives, and the only thing left is to seek for a balance between them.
我不会写issue，也不会改，希望没有改错~~~
语言很好，但是感觉ts之间的关系紧密一些更好
拍拍我的吧，我写得也够差，劳烦劳烦