上周的机警作文，恳请大侠指正，谢了

jingjing8008UID: 2348846

从别人的jj上看来的，agree or disagree：人们在未来的20年会有更多地leisure time.

People have controversial view on what kind of future is ahead of us. Will the future be easy because of the economic development, or it will be more competitive than the present? As far as I was concerned, people will have a peaceful, convenient life in the following decade.

People will get more leisure time because of the development in the whole society, such as in the technology and in the communication. The technology development in the Artificial Intelligence will liberate the human being from the tedious works. For example, the housework will be done by a robot, then the family members may go for a walk after dinner, otherwise they have to spend time washing the dishes, and mop the floor.

People are beginning to realize the importance of the leisure time with the time flies by. People, in the future, will seek more and more leisure time for the sake of health. The competitions in the modern society are much fiercer than ever before. Thus, it is easy to imagine that the competition between the following generations may get even fiercer and they have to face more pressures. In order to reduce the pressure, people have to find an effective way to get relax. It is suggested by the psychologist that the best way to reduce the stress is to spend some leisure time together with the family members or with the friends, such as watching TV, or playing chess. The more pressures there are, the more leisure time there should be. Therefore, in the future, we have more leisure time in order to have a heath body.

From what I have discussed above, we can easily draw the conclusion that we will have more leisure time in the following decade. The development in the technology will promise us an easy, happy life, because lots of the routine would be done by the machine instead of human being. In addition, we have more leisure time in the future for purpose of having a long life span.

感觉理由很牵强，可又没什么好的观点阿

[ 本帖最后由 jingjing8008 于 2007-6-13 07:04 编辑 ]

jingjing8008UID: 2348846

大家给提点意见吧，这周末就要上考场了阿:(

dinckeyUID: 2310950

很难有人理阿，我也写过作文，有人看没人改，唉

jingjing8008UID: 2348846

:confused:

kevinliu6883UID: 2338522

Please list the topic.
life in the future will easier or harder than present?
competition will be more fierce or assuaged?
Scince I can not determine your arguemen from your work, it is hard to make further comment.

jingjing8008UID: 2348846

从别人的jj上看来的，agree or disagree：人们在未来的20年会有更多地leisure time.

kevinliu6883UID: 2338522

I belive people will enjoy more leisure time in future.

1 the development of technology means high efficiency in production. People will spend less time in activities to produce ample material to meet their needs. thus they will have more time to do sports, to travel, to go to cinema, or whatever they like, without any pressure.

2 the development of civilization endow individuals more right to do what they like. Slavery existed in the past. At present, there are still many people suffering unfair treatment. As the justice is carried to all levels, more people will share their freedom and civilian right.

3 the development of economy greatly improves the living condition. Many people become rich. They can afford to the expenditure involved in the comsuming their leisure time such as golf.

The high efficiency will require workers better educated and receive more training. This may take some time. But compared with the reward of advanced technology, the time spent in edication and training will be overwerghted. Not long ago, people usually had to work 48 hours or even more time a week. But now averagely they work 40 hour from Monday to Friday. Two days of spare time gives people more chance to enjoy life.

[ 本帖最后由 kevinliu6883 于 2007-6-13 10:53 编辑 ]

jingjing8008UID: 2348846

你的理由是很好噢，但是我在那么短的时间内也就想出来了那么些个东西，:(

water116UID: 2282878

好东东，
顶
thanks