主题口语练习1（developing a topic）

kevinliu6883UID：2338522

I believe this is a good idea.

Many test takers feel they lack of proper volcabulary for the spoken test. Some fail because they are not able to deliver their ideas and develop the topic by details.

If we hope to score high in spoken test, we should be well prepared including the familiar topic, comments and arguements, summary and repeatation. If we can make our own 10 exercises and read about 100 topic, we should have no difficult to deal with spoken test.

Support the proposed activity.

skyline302UID：2346239

支持

piemsUID：2245566

我还以为沉下去了，就没太管。呵呵，不久后就继续。大家要积极参与：哪怕是用中文列出的提纲，最好是经过自己用心严密思考的，不然一起练习互改就没有什么效果了。

[ 本帖最后由 piems 于 2007-6-18 16:47 编辑 ]

china122UID：2315735

up to the top

fuxiaolingUID：2351450

支持一下

beckwinnerUID：2292478

我练我练我练练练!! 谢谢LZ  我已经开始按照题目练了! thank u

kevinliu6883UID：2338522

My favorite toy was a gun. It was a gift from my uncle in a Chinese spring festival when I was a 4th grader. That gun was fabulous. It just looked like a real one. It had wood body with steel pipe. It was better than those of my fellows. It was not as fragile as others. It could make a very big noise. Many my fellows were jealous at me then. One of my cousins even stole my gun for a while. I got my gun back through the help of my aunt, my cousin’s mother.

piemsUID：2245566

:))待会把主题口语练习2打出来，两个结合起来练练就无敌了。

[ 本帖最后由 piems 于 2007-6-19 19:06 编辑 ]

piemsUID：2245566

My favorite toy was a gun. It was a gift from my uncle in a Chinese spring festival when I was a 4th grader. That gun was fabulous. It just looked like a real one. It had wood（woody） body with steel pipe. It was better than those of my fellows. It was not as fragile as others. It could make a very big noise. Many my fellows were jealous at（of） me then. One of my cousins even stole my gun for a while(这句动词时态和时间修饰语不对). I got my gun back through the help of my aunt, my cousin’s mother.（最后感觉后面应该还有话要说的样子）
感觉时态有点值得商榷，是不是不是很特别强调过去的地方，叙述用一般时听上去舒服些？:(

bearlaughyouUID：2316440

我想把我的口语上传。有什么办法吗？

piemsUID：2245566

这个帖子里介绍了一种方法，就是上传到odeo，然后把链接贴过来就可以，你也可以直接再odeo里录音。

[ 本帖最后由 piems 于 2007-6-19 19:50 编辑 ]

nirvana_coolUID：2347927

”还有


新东方老师说开头用些和题干相关的同、近意词，可以让你的答案和其他人有所区别，不知道对加分有没用，因此我想，开头或许可以是：When I was a little girl(boy),I cherished a toy very much(or I have a special toy)。只是我猜想的，不知是否可行，大家多提意见。“

我觉得这个建议挺好，实用

sky00UID：2299711

提个建议给kevinliu6883 ：你的句子基本上都是短句，且不是很coherent。piems兄弟说的，看完后总不是很舒服，好像在凑句子一样，你可以加些连接词进去。结构也比较混乱。注意固定搭配。我直接改了一下。My favorite toy was a gun. It was a gift from my uncle in a Chinese spring festival when I was a 4th grader. The gun was fabulous，it had wood body with steel pipe and could make a very loud noise，just like a real one.  Besides, It was also firm and not as fragile as the guns of my fellows . so , Many of  my fellows were jealous of me then. Once,One of my cousins even stole my gun and kept it for a while. Of course I had got my gun back, because  it was really part of my life then, how could I be without it!

kevinliu6883UID：2338522

Thank you for correction. It sounds much better now.

jupandjayUID：2250409

up+DING!!