Issue177【07-10G Superstar大帖】第九次作业 by学野

学野UID: 2155973

提纲： 基本同意
1 通过学习形成独特知识体系，看事物有自己独特的角度
2 经学习而使得看同样事物有不同角度是有原因的，不同观点更加丰富同时也促进社会发展
  满足社会专业化需求。否则若学习后大家看法一样，没有进步可言

总感觉陈述事实性的命题挺不好说的，想半天才分出了两段，而且第二分论点感觉有点跑，实在是没话可说，才硬挖深层原因。。
一限时就一堆错误，一点长进都没有。。。sigh一个， 大家狠拍吧

TOPIC: ISSUE177 - "The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes."
WORDS: 545          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2007-6-20 18:40:14

Just as Shakespeare said, “There are one thousand Hamlets in one thousand people's eyes." which indicates that different people have different views toward the same thing and the same world. I fundamentally agree with the speaker that after studying the academic discipline, we alter the way we perceive the world , if not so, there is no use of studying academic discipline and seeking for higher education. It is just the different views and perceiving ways that can fulfill and make our life colorful, and more important is that such different views can satisfy the specialization of the whole society and also contribute to making progress of human being.

To begin with, different disciplines endow us different gifts after we study them, they can not only shape our specific knowledge system and also enable us to form our unique thinking and perceiving way. Just as Bacon once said: histories make men wise; poets witty; the math subtle; natural philosophy deep; moral grave; logic and rhetoric able to contend. For example, It is natural for biologist or students after studying biology to perceive an ordinary oak as a different and good research objective. That is, the oak is not just a tree but the plant where the photosynthesis and other activities are going on. As for the same oak, the poets or students after studying literature may see the oak as a vivid symbol of nature and prefer to write a beautiful poem and other works. It is still possible that the painters or students after learning fine arts treat the oak as a lively impression in their pictures, which may not like the oak itself, but like one of a colorful nature's image. In this sense, the study of an academic discipline can obviously alter the way we perceive the world.

Furthermore, we can also find the hidden meanings of the speaker's assertion, that is why we see the same world as before, but with different eyes after we study the academic discipline, and what is the purpose of higher education--study of academic disciplines. When confronted with such questions, we may be bogged down into a deep thinking. As a matter of fact, the purpose of seeking for higher education and studying disciplines is to catch up with the trend of specialization of the whole world. Since after the invention of steam machines, we were going into a industrialized world and the trend of specialization is more and more apparent. If we still see the same world with the same eyes, how can we make progress in not only science and technology? For example, after Einstein had studied the physics and more specific knowledge about atoms, however he still saw the world just like the ordinary people without forming his own thinking styles, maybe nowadays there is no significant theory of relatives. In addition, the trend of specialization also require students to see the same things from their different and specific angles, otherwise they may not be competent for their future job and be excluded in the fierce competition.

In sum, the study of academic disciplines do not alter the world itself, but alter the way we see the world, which can make progress of our society and catch up with the steps of specialization of the world.

[ 本帖最后由 学野 于 2007-6-20 19:03 编辑 ]

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Just as Shakespeare said, “There are one thousand Hamlets in one thousand people's eyes." which indicates that different people have different views toward the same thing and the same world. I fundamentally agree with the speaker that after studying the academic discipline, we alter the way we perceive the world , if not so, there is no use of studying academic discipline and seeking for higher education. It is just the different views and perceiving ways that can fulfill and make our life colorful, and more important is that such different views can satisfy the specialization of the whole society and also contribute to making progress of human being.

To begin with, different disciplines endow us different gifts after we study them, they can not only shape our specific knowledge system and also enable us to form our unique thinking and perceiving way. Just as Bacon once said: histories make men wise; poets witty; the math subtle; natural philosophy deep; moral grave; logic and rhetoric able to contend.[经典] For example, It is natural for biologist or students after studying biology to perceive an ordinary oak as a different and good research objective. That is, the oak is not just a tree but the plant where the photosynthesis and other activities are going on. As for the same oak, the poets or students after studying literature may see the oak as a vivid symbol of nature and prefer to write a beautiful poem and other works. It is still possible that the painters or students after learning fine arts treat the oak as a lively impression in their pictures, which may not like the oak itself, but like one of a colorful nature's image. In this sense, the study of an academic discipline can obviously alter the way we perceive the world. [例子真的很不错，再突出些个体的前后对比就更好了]

Furthermore, we can also find the hidden meanings of the speaker's assertion, that is why we see the same world as before, but with different eyes after we study the academic discipline[这层意思后面没提到阿], and what is the purpose of higher education--study of academic disciplines. When confronted with such questions, we may be bogged down into a deep thinking. As a matter of fact, the purpose of seeking for higher education and studying disciplines is to catch up with the trend of specialization of the whole world. Since after the invention of steam machines, we were going into a industrialized world and the trend of specialization is more and more apparent. If we still see the same world with the same eyes, how can we make progress in not only science and technology? For example, after Einstein had studied the physics and more specific knowledge about atoms, however he still saw the world just like the ordinary people without forming his own thinking styles, maybe nowadays there is no significant theory of relatives[relativity]. [这句没看懂，句子中间没有表示假设的词]In addition, the trend of specialization also require students to see the same things from their different and specific angles, otherwise they may not be competent for their future job and be excluded in the fierce competition.[这段不太理想，稍微有点偏离主题，这个题目应该是围绕discipline 能不能，或怎么样来改变人。讨论必要性，个人觉得似乎不太合适。]
In sum, the study of academic disciplines do not alter the world itself, but alter the way we see the world, which can make progress of our society and catch up with the steps of specialization of the world.

[这个题目很难写，我自己还没写出来就来给你改，惭愧啊。
总的来说语言没问题，很流畅，例子也很合适，思路方面和我想得不太一样。第三段合适不合适我也不很确定，或许我的思路僵化了。不过第二段应该还可以展开来写的，别人好像也都这么做的。
加油]