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发表于 2007-7-20 17:28:18 |显示全部楼层
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"So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present."

提纲:1.确实有些前所未有的问题(如网络带来的孤独)。
      2.但大多数问题还是一致的,人性产生的问题(通过反省历史避免战争)
      3.科学研究上回顾历史的重要(三点)

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Does looking back for an understanding of the past provide little guidance for living in the present? As far as I am concerned, though it is true that things today have changed significantly from the old time. It is still indispensable for us to look into the past for the guidance of current living.

Admittedly, with the fast development of science and technology, people are now facing challenges that our ancestors never encountered with. Currently, the wide spread internet, which significantly modifies the modern communication patterns, is bringing convenience as well as problems. E-mails, instant messages and online phones, make the communication so easy that people are sticking themselves to the virtual world, rather than spending time with relatives and neighbors in real life. What's more, while shifting the attention to the online people whose real identity is even absent, people are alienating their close friends in daily life. As a result, the more we reliant on the internet, the more we are suffering from inside loneliness. However, ancient people seldom experience this psychological isolation, because without the distraction of modern communication, they would spend most of the time with their family and friends, and share happiness together. From this point, I concede that some brand new problems do not have counterparts in the past.

However, while admitting that some problems are unprecedented today, one should still not neglecting that most problems in modern society are similar to those in the past, especially those are driven from human nature. Thousands of years have past since the emergence of first human tribe, the uneven distribution of resources and power is still causing conflicts. However, rather than fight  with each other as the predecessors did in World War One and World War Two, which cursed every nation with pain, starvation and poverty, people are now recognizing that wars can never put question to an end, and taking peaceful negotiation as an effective measure to solve international conflicts. Thanks to looking back into the painful lessons of wars, the society is now enjoying the best stability and fastest development in human history.

Furthermore, the core of scientific development is hardly changed. First, though the research subjects are extended to countless area, much more than in the ancient time which had only philosophy, all the themes of scientific research are still in pursuit of the final truth of the world. Second, while with using the most advanced equipments and facilities, researchers are following the essential principles set by their outstanding forerunner, Galileo, who formulates results through exact observations and experiments. Third, even when starting a new theory that never occurred in human history, it is still necessary to learn from the past. For instance, my research group is working on a new subject named virtual fire escaping system, a interdisciplinary subject derived from computer science, architecture and psychology. By the mass reading in relating documents, We not only benefit from the inspiration of different researches, but also learn a lot from the methods of how to solve problems, which are essential to the final success. The width and depth of scientific development is ever growth, but the essence of former research is never out of date.

In conclusion, although today is quite different from the past, it is still beneficial for us to learn from yesterday. By examine the fallacies and absorbing the experiences from history, human can achieve a better development in the future.

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发表于 2007-7-20 20:31:44 |显示全部楼层

name05 的修改意见

Does looking back for an understanding of the past provide little guidance for living in the present? As far as I am concerned, though it is true that things today have changed significantly from the old time. It is still indispensable for us to look into the past for the guidance of current living.

Admittedly, with the fast development of science and technology, people are now facing challenges that our ancestors never encountered with. Currently, the wide spread internet, which significantly modifies the modern communication patterns, is bringing convenience as well as problems. E-mails, instant messages and online phones, make the communication so easy that people are sticking themselves to the virtual world, rather than spending time with relatives and neighbors in real life. What's more, while shifting the attention to the online people whose real identity is even absent, people are alienating their close friends in daily life. As a result, the more we reliant on the internet, the more we are suffering from inside loneliness. However, ancient people seldom experience this psychological isolation, because without the distraction of modern communication, they would spend most of the time with their family and friends, and share happiness together. From this point, I concede that some brand new problems do not have counterparts in the past.

However, while admitting that some problems are unprecedented today, one should still not neglecting that most problems in modern society are similar to those in the past, especially those are driven from human nature. Thousands of years have past since the emergence of first human tribe, the uneven distribution of resources and power is still causing conflicts. However, rather than fight  with each other as the predecessors did in World War One and World War Two, which cursed every nation with pain, starvation and poverty, people are now recognizing that wars can never put question to an end, and taking peaceful negotiation as an effective measure to solve international conflicts. Thanks to looking back into the painful lessons of wars, the society is now enjoying the best stability and fastest development in human history.

Furthermore, the core of scientific development is hardly changed. First, though the research subjects are extended to countless area, much more than in the ancient time which had only philosophy, all the themes of scientific research are still in pursuit of the final truth of the world. Second, while with using the most advanced equipments and facilities, researchers are following the essential principles set by their outstanding forerunner, Galileo, who formulates results through exact observations and experiments. Third, even when starting a new theory that never occurred in human history, it is still necessary to learn from the past. (我觉得这一段对回顾历史的重要性的阐述很浅,说服力不是很强)For instance, my research group is working on a new subject named virtual fire escaping system, a interdisciplinary subject derived from computer science, architecture and psychology. By the mass reading in relating documents, We not only benefit from the inspiration of different researches, but also learn a lot from the methods of how to solve problems, which are essential to the final success. The width and depth of scientific development is ever growth, but the essence of former research is never out of date.

In conclusion, although today is quite different from the past, it is still beneficial for us to learn from yesterday. By examine the fallacies and absorbing the experiences from history, human can achieve a better development in the future.


度过以后总感觉印象不是很深,看一下laststrike的作文,分析的很好,我们一块向他学习!
苔花如米小,也学牡丹开!

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发表于 2007-7-21 10:19:51 |显示全部楼层
Does looking back for an understanding of the past provide littleguidance for living in the present? As far as I am concerned, though itis true that things today have changed significantly from the old time.It is still indispensable for us to look into the past for the guidanceof current living.

Admittedly, with the fast development of science and technology, peopleare now facing challenges that our ancestors never encountered with.Currently, the wide spread internet, which significantly modifies themodern communication patterns, is bringing convenience as well asproblems. E-mails, instant messages and online phones, make thecommunication so easy that people are sticking themselves to thevirtual world, rather than spending time with relatives and neighborsin real life. What's more, while shifting the attention to the onlinepeople whose real identity is even absent, people are alienating theirclose friends in daily life. As a result, the more we reliant on theinternet, the more we are suffering from inside loneliness. However,ancient people seldom experience this psychological isolation, becausewithout the distraction of modern communication, they would spend mostof the time with their family and friends, and share happinesstogether. From this point, I concede that some brand new problems donot have counterparts in the past.(分析的不错)

However, while admitting that some problems are unprecedented today,one should still not neglecting that most problems in modern societyare similar to those in the past, especially those are driven fromhuman nature. Thousands of years have past since the emergence of firsthuman tribe, the uneven distribution of resources and power is stillcausing conflicts. However, rather than fight  with each other as thepredecessors did in World War One and World War Two, which cursed everynation with pain, starvation and poverty, people are now recognizingthat wars can never put question to an end, and taking peacefulnegotiation as an effective measure to solve international conflicts.Thanks to looking back into the painful lessons of wars, the society isnow enjoying the best stability and fastest development in humanhistory.(例子就需要这样的分析)

Furthermore, the core of scientific development is hardly changed.First, though the research subjects are extended to countless area,much more than in the ancient time which had only philosophy, all thethemes of scientific research are still in pursuit of the final truthof the world. Second, while with using the most advanced equipments andfacilities, researchers are following the essential principles set bytheir outstanding forerunner, Galileo, who formulates results throughexact observations and experiments. Third, even when starting a newtheory that never occurred in human history, it is still necessary tolearn from the past. For instance, my research group is working on anew subject named virtual fire escaping system, a interdisciplinarysubject derived from computer science, architecture and psychology. Bythe mass reading in relating documents, We not only benefit from theinspiration of different researches, but also learn a lot from themethods of how to solve problems, which are essential to the finalsuccess.(再详细一点,比如哪些different researches,learn倒了些什么东西) The width and depth of scientific development is ever growth,but the essence of former research is never out of date.

In conclusion, although today is quite different from the past, it isstill beneficial for us to learn from yesterday. By examine thefallacies and absorbing the experiences from history, human can achievea better development in the future.

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