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发表于 2007-7-24 22:16:02 |显示全部楼层
Issue136
"The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."

9:12-9:59 47min
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From early in the morning, we choose the clothes we wear, we choose our meals for the day, we choose the proper sequence to finish our tasks during work, and we choose what to do for relax and when to go to bed. That is similar for almost every common individual in the society. So do we have circumstance with no choice? As far as I am concerned, it is quite common to meet situations with absence of choice, yet we can deal with such cases equally well.

Admittedly, with the development and wide spread usage of technologies, actually we are facing increasing choices in almost all aspects in our life. In the field of business, companies have plenty choices as their containers with emergences of innovative synthetic materials, customers have more than enough choices to choose desired products based on style, quality and prices. In the field of scientific studies, researchers can pick up either traditional or modern techniques to proof their hypothesis, depending on their financial situation and the requirement of the experiments. University students interested in particular area have freedom to choose any related course or do rotations in laboratories that attractive to them most. In one's private time, people have myriads of choices in their leisure times, such as traveling, having party with friends, or just relax at home. It is not exaggerate to say that with fast social and economic development, we even cannot tell which one is the most appropriate to us since there are so many options.

However, with undeniable heritage and implement of particular restrictions, sometimes we get trapped in the dilemma with no choices. When born with defects, one doesn't have a choice to have another life but to beat it by extraordinary exertion and diligence. Although restricted to only a few areas, they can still make contributions to the society. For examples, one doesn’t need to go further but the case of Helen Keller, a famous English writer. She was blind and deaf when born, however, she didn't give up her life but dig out her own talent in writing, leaving us plenty inspired products such as Light in My Darkness, encourage other people with handicaps fighting for their life. Similarly, in the business world, with limited financial support, companies may have to give up their original plan for certain products. In some extreme cases, big failure due to hasty investment may bring the company bankruptcy. Without doubt, under such circumstance, executive managers or employees have no other choices since at these times any make up is too late. There would be no denying that from time to time, we may face the situations with no choices.

Moreover, in cases related to political regulations or legislations, there are even more no-choice situations, keeping the equity and authority of the law. With diverse backgrounds and various evaluation standards, conflicts are inevitable in today's society, especially when there are increasing demand of freedom. Political regulation and legislation plays a crucial role to provide social harmony and equity for individuals in the society. If any one inviolate the law, he or she has to take the punishment without any excuse. Otherwise, cheating would become popular in the business world, robbing would be normal and threatening our life, scientific study would bring no benefits or progress to the society by plagiarism, turning our society into mass. It is the exactly no-choice punishment of our legislation system gives our fundamental support for everyday activities and every individual equal right to enjoy our life.

From the analysis above, it may safe for us to draw a conclusion that in reality, improvement of society provides us much more choices, providing us more diversity in our life. At the same time, there are plenty cases with no choices, which either require our endeavor to fight for living against stubborn facts, or providing us stable and harmonious society due to rigid but righteous regulations.

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发表于 2007-7-25 08:21:01 |显示全部楼层
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Issue136 by 小破孩

Issue136
"The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."

9:12-9:59 47min
Words: 655

From early in the morning, we choose the clothes we wear, we choose our meals for the day, we choose the proper sequence to finish our tasks during work, and we choose what to do for relax and when to go to bed. That is similar for almost every common individual in the society. So do we have circumstance with no choice? As far as I am concerned, it is quite common to meet situations with absence of choice, yet we can deal with such cases equally well.

Admittedly, with the development and wide spread usage of technologies, actually we are facing increasing choices in almost all aspects in our life. In the field of business, companies have plenty choices as their containers with emergences of innovative synthetic materials, customers have more than enough choices to choose desired products based on style, quality and prices. In the field of scientific studies, researchers can pick up either traditional or modern techniques to proof their hypothesis, depending on their financial situation and the requirement of the experiments. University students interested in particular area have freedom to choose any related course or do rotations in laboratories that attractive to them most. (
这个感觉貌似和技术发展没关系啊,和学校政策到有关系) In one's private time, people have myriads of choices in their leisure times, such as traveling, having party with friends, or just relax at home. It is not exaggerate to say that with fast social and economic development, we even cannot tell which one is the most appropriate to us since there are so many options.

However, with undeniable heritage and implement of particular restrictions, sometimes we get trapped in the dilemma with no choices. When born with defects, one doesn't have a choice to have another life but to beat it by extraordinary exertion and diligence. Although restricted to only a few areas, they can still make contributions to the society. For examples, one doesn’t need to go further but the case of Helen Keller, a famous English writer. (
其实我觉得你举这个例子倒有问题了。你想说人们一些天生行为是没得选的,没错!但你给出这个例子是在人们认命的情况下对生活的一种选择。她没必要努力成为作家,她可以选择做一个普通的残疾人,郁郁而终。所以说你给出这个例子反而恰恰证明了选择的存在) She was blind and deaf when born, however, she didn't give up her life but dig out her own talent in writing, leaving us plenty inspired products such as Light in My Darkness, encourage other people with handicaps fighting for their life. Similarly, in the business world, with limited financial support, companies may have to give up their original plan for certain products. In some extreme cases, big failure due to hasty investment may bring the company bankruptcy. Without doubt, under such circumstance, executive managers or employees have no other choices since at these times any make up is too late. There would be no denying that from time to time, we may face the situations with no choices.

Moreover, in cases related to political regulations or legislations, there are even more no-choice situations, keeping the equity and authority of the law. With diverse backgrounds and various evaluation standards, conflicts are inevitable in today's society, especially when there are increasing demand of freedom. Political regulation and legislation playa crucial role to provide social harmony and equity for individuals in the society. If any one inviolate the law, he or she has to take the punishment without any excuse. Otherwise, cheating would become popular in the business world, robbing would be normal and threatening our life, scientific study would bring no benefits or progress to the society by plagiarism, turning our society into mass. It is the exactly no-choice punishment of our legislation system gives our fundamental support for everyday activities and every individual equal right to enjoy our life.

其实也有得选么,只是人们选择了适应这个社会的……


呵呵,这种题目就是公说公有理型的,其实考试时候你写成这个样子没问题了,本来就不好写的一道题。


From the analysis above, it may safe for us to draw a conclusion that in reality, improvement of society provides us much more choices, providing us more diversity in our life. At the same time, there are plenty cases with no choices, which either require our endeavor to fight for living against stubborn facts, or providing us stable and harmonious society due to rigid but righteous regulations.



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发表于 2007-7-29 01:21:30 |显示全部楼层
From early in the morning, we choose the clothes we wear, we choose our meals for the day, we choose the proper sequence to finish our tasks during work, and we choose what to do for relax and when to go to bed. That is similar for almost every common individual in the society. So do we have circumstance with no choice? As far as I am concerned, it is quite common to meet situations with absence of choice, yet we can deal with such cases equally well. 转折有点生硬,而且不太知道你后半句的意思是啥。

Admittedly, with the development and wide spread usage of technologies, actually we are facing increasing choices in almost all aspects in our life. In the field of business, companies have plenty choices as their containers with emergences of innovative synthetic materials, customers have more than enough choices to choose desired products based on style, quality and prices. In the field of scientific studies, researchers can pick up either traditional or modern techniques to proof their hypothesis, depending on their financial situation and the requirement of the experiments. University students interested in particular area have freedom to choose any related course or do rotations in laboratories that attractive to them most. In one's private time, people have myriads of choices in their leisure times, such as traveling, having party with friends, or just relax at home. It is not exaggerate to say that with fast social and economic development, we even cannot tell which one is the most appropriate to us since there are so many options. 罗列了大量例子说到了丰富的选择,然而首先例子陈述不够出彩稍显冗赘,其次对于例子没有很好的归类总结,而且事例产生原因和段首红字部分原因也不是扣得很紧密,导致这个只能算fair的段落

However, with undeniable heritage and implement of particular restrictions, sometimes we get trapped in the dilemma with no choices. When born with defects, one doesn't have a choice to have another life but to beat it by extraordinary exertion and diligence. Although restricted to only a few areas, they can still make contributions to the society. For examples, one doesn’t need to go further but the case of Helen Keller, a famous English writer. She was blind and deaf when born, however, she didn't give up her life but dig out her own talent in writing, leaving us plenty inspired products such as Light in My Darkness, encourage other people with handicaps fighting for their life. Similarly, in the business world, with limited financial support, companies may have to give up their original plan for certain products. In some extreme cases, big failure due to hasty investment may bring the company bankruptcy. Without doubt, under such circumstance, executive managers or employees have no other choices since at these times any make up is too late. There would be no denying that from time to time, we may face the situations with no choices. 2个问题,第一个和上一段一样,另外一个和stroke7所说一样。


Moreover, in cases related to political regulations or legislations, 窄了。而且这个分类领域和上一段的领域看不出有什么逻辑关系there are even more no-choice situations, keeping the equity and authority of the law. With diverse backgrounds and various evaluation standards, conflicts are inevitable in today's society, especially when there are increasing demand of freedom. Political regulation and legislation plays a crucial role to provide social harmony and equity for individuals in the society. If any one inviolate the law, he or she has to take the punishment without any excuse. Otherwise, cheating would become popular in the business world, robbing would be normal and threatening our life, scientific study would bring no benefits or progress to the society by plagiarism, turning our society into mass. 这些概念和choice还是有很大区别的吧。。。而且。。谁说些无法选择。。。只是无法选择逃避掉惩罚。。It is the exactly no-choice punishment of our legislation system gives our fundamental support for everyday activities and every individual equal right to enjoy our life.

From the analysis above, it may safe for us to draw a conclusion that in reality, improvement of society provides us much more choices, providing us more diversity in our life. At the same time, there are plenty cases with no choices, which either require our endeavor to fight for living against stubborn facts, or providing us stable and harmonious society due to rigid but righteous regulations.

这篇issue不太成功,当然和本题的变态特点也不无关系,一是对于无选择的定义难,二是很难将一些零散例子进行总结建议可以参考下这个 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=210178&extra=page%3D1%26amp%3Bfilter%3Dtype%26amp%3Btypeid%3D57
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