ISSUE130 [奋战August]小组 第5周作业 by dg336688

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TOPIC: ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
WORDS: 613         TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2007-7-25 1:22:17

Nowadays, a catchy issue has become increasingly controversial and knotty of how to bring up our children and make them more socialized, consequently which help bring about a better society. In my viewpoint, I constantly hold that education authority, society and family should play a crucial role respectively in this problem. Moreover, only through common endeavours and efforts by these 3 parts can our children better develop themselves and serve the best to our society.
For one thing, nearly all the children spend half of their childhood in school, first in a primary school, then step into middle school, and finally maybe some of them go to higher advanced education. It is the exterior places where children gradually learn how to socialize when they spend times with teachers and other classmates. So it is vitally important for our education department doing their utmost to create a better learning environment and a benign atmosphere, such as good teaching facility, green campus plan, and conventional excursion plan and so forth. It is a really good sign to see many education department straining every nerves to achieve those requirements for our children in the aspects of teaching methods and improving teachers' personal quality, all of which will finally come to fruition that help them grow up and get to know how to render more socialized in every stage of their childhood.

Besides, another living surrounding is their family which is up-and-coming in its role of aiding our children. Some people often say, As it were, the largest influence to children is made by parents and their living environment. On one side, children have inherited the most intrinsic elements from their parents, they share much more inborn characteristics. On the other side, parents might make a tremendous impacts towards their children, in which their daily behaviour,habits,and personal relationship with others may ultimately serve to the same thing with their children. For instance, suppose parents are inclined to have sanguine characters , it is  more likely for children render optimistic in the view of life. On the contrary, if a child lives in discomfort, an atmosphere that their parents often quarrel on some trivial things and of no showing their generosity and humbility at all, which will never help children bring up in a socialized way, they probably would turn out to form a cynical and pessimistic personality. Thus, family members should create a fine growing atmosphere, just like a warm house for a young flower, which may possibly in turn come out in bloom.

Last but not least, apart from two sides what I have discussed above, our society should shoulder a part of responsibilty and obligation to work together with school and family for the purpose of helping our children.  Public charity organization should be created as more as possible. They are able to often organize many children to take part in some meaningful activities,such as summer vocation camp, scenic spot sightseeing, exchange between different countries and so on. By doing so, children would learn how to communicate with different people,not just limit their movement in school or home, what's the most important is that assistance from society would to large degree broad their horizon and perspective towards the outside world. As a result, it is also beneficial and helpful for them to cultivate a kind of upbeat, optimistic and cosmopolitan views in the future.  

To sum up, on the road to raise children, as a desire and expectation to render them more socialized in future life, only through the joint efforts and endeavors from our education authority, family and society we can indeed achieve this kind of goal, and our society could become more successful.

豌豆毛毛虫UID??2289272

语言无可挑剔，请问平时是怎样练习的，但是感觉跟题目不太...至少没有摆明你对whether we have learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society 没有进行正反的是非论证。

dg336688UID??2349841

沒有什麽特別的方法吧，還是多多積累吧，學習別人的用詞寫作手法吧，然後把它轉化成自己的寫作方式， 我問題多多哦~

這個題目不一定需要正反論證吧？ 我對怎樣更好地使孩子社會化入手，談我自己的看法呀。