issue141 [0710G summer] by niuzhist

niuzhistUID: 2363220

TOPIC: ISSUE141 - "Most people recognize the benefits of individuality, but the fact is that personal economic success requires conformity."
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提纲：
1.要遵守当地的法律法规，特别是习俗，传统道德。这样才能
有利于个人公司的发展，特别是在海外的发展
例子：麦当劳在日本的发展
      海尔的商标在中东的改变
2． 个性有利于个人的经济成功
敢冒风险的人，不遵守那些早有的束缚，开拓出自己的天地，
在科技上创新，在制度上创新，最后获得更大的成功。
3． 在社会中，人们过多地强调了个人，而不是遵守统一的规定。
不利于个人的经济成功，破坏市场经济

In the author's view, he draws the conclusion that personal economic success requires
conformity but most people only recognize the benefits of individuality. In my opinion,
it is a complex issue which needs further analysis before my conclusion is made.
To begin with, conformity plays an essential role in deciding the success of the personal
economic. It is a necessary process that the company is being enlarged gradually  for every
person who want to broad their economic strength .During which, the conformity to local laws ,
especially to the customs and traditional morality. The famous international company, Haier ,once confronted with a problem about the image of  their brand when they was
going to enter into the Middle East market. As is known for all, the image of the brand mainly
contains two nearly naked lovely boys which is very popular in many other parts of the world.
However , because of the traditional religionary views prevailing in the Middle East, it is hard
that the naked boys are accepted there.
So, the   Haier  company changed their brand to in order to conform to the customs.
Thus, conformity to the local rules  is one of the most things which should be taken into account
in personal economic strategy.
On the other hand, the personal economic is often attributable to the individuality in some aspects.
The nonconformists  are always keen on risking in the complex and dangerous market which need many  
indispensable qualities such as persistence, patience and wisdom. Without conforming to some so-called
traditional rules, the person  who never keeps trace with the majority of the people, is willingly to
bring in more new technologies ,reform the original management  which ensues the success of the personal
economic.
It is obvious that the individuality is beneficial to the development of the personal economic.
Nevertheless, the importance of the benefits of individuality is overstated nowadays. The new businessmen
are no longer likely to conform to so many rules which is helpful to their economic development to some
extent. However ,the bad effects outweigh the benefits. The negligence of many laws gives rise  to the
problems that the market is out of order ,many products' quality is questionable, the environmental
circumstances deteriorate gradually  and many other serious social and economic issues. So, it is a
hard nut to crack for us to handle with which matters not only the personal economic success but also
the healthy development of the whole market.
To sum up, I come to my conclusion that individuality and conformity are both important and necessary
for personal economic success. Only through conforming to some basic rules firstly can the personal
economic success benefit the most from the individuality.

[ 本帖最后由 niuzhist 于 2007-7-25 12:08 编辑 ]

sanliangmmUID: 2363921

conformity我查了字典，有两种含义：一是similarity in form or character;agreement;一是action or behavior in correspondence with current customs, tules, or styles;我写得是一致性，你写得是遵守挺好的，这样比较好写（写的时候我根本就没有想到这个问题，纯粹当一致性写了，看了你得以后才查德字典 赫赫）思路也没有问题，限时45分钟语言还是有点生，其实我觉得主要是你用词太单一了，比如用benifits bad effects还可以用advantages disadvantages;merits drawbacks;把词用活一点语言很快就上去了~加油